gers fan Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 please tell me how to improve my card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 "the gers manager won nine spl leagues in a row/ if only card on your side of the field you can summon a card from your hand" First of all, this card most likely belongs in the Pop Culture section. The first part of the effect is distracting from the actual effect. Just get rid of it. Your card text should look like this: "If this is the only card you control, you may Special Summon one monster from your hand." The effect is balanced, since this card requires two tributes to summon it, and the only time you can use the effect is when you have only one card on the field, you will be unlikely to gain a field advantage. Since this card is in the Realistic section of the forum, I would suggest changing the monsters type to Warrior, Fiend, or "Beast" if you think highly of this individual. I give this card a 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 first of all, attachments are not allowed. This should be in "Any Other Cards Section" or "Pop Culture", OCG(Original Card Grammar) errors. Don't add descriptions to Effect Monsters only the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 First off when you want to post a Card just click the Picture of that card and a Link will show up just copy the link to the tread and Ta DA you can view the card easyer Ahhhhhhhhhh WTF this is a Really bad card sorry do what i said above then ill do what i need Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 You're kidding me right?this belongs in the joke section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Ohhhh...k.That's a really bad card, BUT it can be improved by:(1) Being moved to the pop culture section.(2) Not being a fake-type. Try warrior.(3) Not having the spl league junk.(4) Improving the OCG: "If this is the only card you control, you can Special Summon one monster from your Hand."(5) 3000 ATK is fine, but not 4000. Change it to 2300-2600.Keep trying!Oh yeah, and:(6) Don't attach your cards. Just left-click on your card, then copy and paste the text into your post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 you can start by posting the actual card, not the attachment and in any case the card looks better suited for pop culture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stealthumbreon Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Don't post attachments. Like everyone said, this is for Pop Culture. Also, get rid of the league junk, don't use fake types, and improve OCG and grammar. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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