Been a while...

[Frozen Judgment]

[align=Center]Since I made a card that is.

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned during the End Phase of a turn where 4 or more monsters were destroyed. While this card is face-up on the field, whenever a monster is destroyed, remove it from play instead. This card gains 100 ATK for each monster removed from play this way. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 monster that was removed from play this way to its owner's field. If you do, you must remove from play 1 card from the owner of the Special Summoned monster's field. You can Special Summon up to 4 removed from play monsters to your opponent's field to have this card gain 1 additional attack this turn equal to the amount of monsters you Special Summoned to your opponent's field.

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[Jazin Kay]

Pretty balanced, due to it's hard summoning conditions.

 

Typical OCG errors and the artwork isn't really doing it for me. But it's not squished, so that's a sign you know what you're doing.

 

4.3/10

[Frozen Judgment]

O.o OCG errors? Point them out... Also, "typical" OCG errors and a bad pic(Which I don't think is bad) make 6.7/10 of a card?

[Jazin Kay]

Trust me, that's a generous rating from a higher-up. I'll bold the errors:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned during the End Phase of a turn where 4 or more monsters were destroyed. While this card is face-up on the field, whenever a monster is destroyed, remove it from play instead. This card gains 100 ATK for each monster removed from play this way. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 monster that was removed from play this way to its owner's field. If you do, you must remove from play 1 card from the owner of the Special Summoned monster's field. You can Special Summon up to 4 removed from play monsters to your opponent's field to have this card gain 1 additional attack this turn equal to the amount of monsters you Special Summoned to your opponent's field.

 

First bold: "instead", grammatically, isn't needed here. It's implying taking one route over another, when the first route is never specified. Simply add "and sent to the Graveyard" after "destroyed" and it's good.

 

Second bold: "Amount" isn't a reference to game mechanic anymore. Hasn't been since PSV. "A number of" seems to have replaced it somehow.

 

 

Hmm. I realized, if you flood your opponent's field with monsters, and if it's ATK is 2000 or higher, it'll gain 4 additional attacks, allowing you to OTK your opponent after a Lightning Vortex. Not OP'd due to the summoning difficulty, but probably it's most effective use.

[Metal Skull]

Seems fine...

7/10

Nice work, but could be better ;)

[Frozen Judgment]

Trust me' date=' that's a generous rating from a higher-up. I'll bold the errors:

 

[i']This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned during the End Phase of a turn where 4 or more monsters were destroyed. While this card is face-up on the field, whenever a monster is destroyed, remove it from play instead. This card gains 100 ATK for each monster removed from play this way. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 monster that was removed from play this way to its owner's field. If you do, you must remove from play 1 card from the owner of the Special Summoned monster's field. You can Special Summon up to 4 removed from play monsters to your opponent's field to have this card gain 1 additional attack this turn equal to the amount of monsters you Special Summoned to your opponent's field.[/i]

 

First bold: "instead", grammatically, isn't needed here. It's implying taking one route over another, when the first route is never specified. Simply add "and sent to the Graveyard" after "destroyed" and it's good.

 

Second bold: "Amount" isn't a reference to game mechanic anymore. Hasn't been since PSV. "A number of" seems to have replaced it somehow.

 

 

Hmm. I realized, if you flood your opponent's field with monsters, and if it's ATK is 2000 or higher, it'll gain 4 additional attacks, allowing you to OTK your opponent after a Lightning Vortex. Not OP'd due to the summoning difficulty, but probably it's most effective use.

 

"higher-up"? I've gotten 9 and aboves from 5 and 6 stars... -_- "Amount" is still considered correct. Not everyone uses new OCG you know. Point taken about the "instead". Thanks for pointing that out. But still, how on earth are those mistakes worth 6.7?

 

@DHPlasma

 

Please provide reasons for your rates.

[Jazin Kay]

"higher-up"? I've gotten 9 and aboves from 5 and 6 stars... -_-

Keep in mind' date=' this IS YCM. It's not exactly a barrel of gems. Lol.[/b']

 

"Amount" is still considered correct. Not everyone uses new OCG you know.

Then why did you ask for fixes? You're not implying you're one of those people, are you? No, you couldn't be.

 

Point taken about the "instead". Thanks for pointing that out. But still, how on earth are those mistakes worth 6.7?

Because I've seen way better. My standards are excellent. Don't feel bad, everyone gets a poor review at some point. Even me.

[rcox1995]

Yeah, it's pretty good. The effect is pretty interesting, though.

 

I'll give it a 8/10.

 

And this card would be perfect with Needle Ceiling.

[Cloister]

Good card. Ocg and pic seems ok 7/10

[ragnarok1945]

the 1900 atk suits it just fine for the atk boosting ability

 

not too sure if giving your opponent up to 4 monsters on the field just to get it to attack more is a smart move though

 

8/10

[Frozen Judgment]

the 1900 atk suits it just fine for the atk boosting ability

 

not too sure if giving your opponent up to 4 monsters on the field just to get it to attack more is a smart move though

 

8/10

 

You don't have to. It's up to 4 and it's optional so it all depends on the situation. Thanks.