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Arctic's Invasive Species Set - *updated*- Would like some comments.

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Ăɍȼẗîȼ Newbie

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Welcome to my invasive Species set.

 

Invasive Species will have some common traits.

● DARK Attribute.

● Machine Typing.

● 5 Stars or more.

● Effect has something to do with Searching.

● Some have the effect that if they are target by a card effect, they are destroyed.

● Some have their effects activate when they inflict battle damage.

● Can be summoned without a tribute, but have their ATK and DEF halved.

So let's go!

 

New Card(s):

Triusifite Beam

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You can activate this card only when you control two or more monsters. Destroy all cards on you control and Special Summon 4 "Lepanato Tokens" (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 10/ATK 500/DEF 500).

 

Light Bolt

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If your opponent's monster attacks a monster on your side of the field, you can activate this card during the Damage Step. Double the ATK of all monsters with "Invasive Species" on the field until your End Phase.

 

Hostile Celestial Sphere - Urqumi

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When a monster is Tribute Summoned, the controller of the Tribute Summoned monster can select and activate 1 of the following effects.

●Pay 500 Life Points, look at your opponent's hand, and discard 1 card from your opponent's hand to the Graveyard.

●Look at the top 3 cards of your opponent's deck and rearrange them in any order you wish.

●Look at 1 Set card on the field.

 

Invasive Species - XAS - 5TW-P

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You can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing. If you do, its original ATK and DEF are halved. If this monster is successfully Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Breeding Token" (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 10/ATK 500/DEF 500). If this card inflicts Battle Damage, you can select and activate one of the following effects.

●Pay 500 Life Points and Special Summon 1 "Breeding Token".

●Tribute 1 "Breeding Token" to add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.

 

[spoiler=INV-001 to INV 005 (first 5 cards)]

Invasive Species -XAS-225-O

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This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 4 monsters you control from play. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Invasive Species" Monster from your Deck. All monsters Special Summoned by this card have their original ATK and DEF halved. When a monster is Special Summoned, you can Special Summon a "Minion Token" (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 10/ATK 500/DEF 500). Once per turn, you can negate the effects of all monsters on the field during the Damage Step only.

 

Invasive Species - XAS-1Q3-B

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You can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing. If you do, its original ATK and DEF are halved. Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster. This monster inflicts Piercing Damage. If this monster inflicts Battle Damage, you can activate one of the following effects:

●Add 1 card with "Invasive Species" in its name from your Deck to your hand.

●Add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.

 

Invasive Species - XAS-Q33-N

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You can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing. If you do, its original ATK and DEF are halved. This monster inflicts Piercing Damage. If this card inflicts Battle Damage, activate 1 of the following effects:

●Double the ATK of this card until your opponent's End Phase.

●Send the top 2 cards fromy your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard.

 

Invasive Species - XAS-544-J

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You can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing. If you do, its original ATK and DEF are halved. If this card is Normal Summoned without a Tribute, this monster can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. If this monster was Tribute Summoned successfully, activate one of the following effects:

●Add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.

●Your opponent randomly discards 1 card.

 

Invasive Species XAS-331-Q

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You can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing. If you do, its original ATK and DEF are halved. Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster. If you inflict Battle Damage, discard 1 card to activate 1 of the following effects:

● Look at your opponent's hand.

● Look at the top card of your opponent's Deck.

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Ăɍȼẗîȼ Newbie

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It's a little WAY too easy to get destroyed.

 

I'd add the effect if it's destroyed that way' date=' it returns to the field 2 turns later

 

And looking at your opponent's ENTIRE hand is too much, I'd only look at 1 card

 

8/10

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Balance no?

Pic(s) - 6.5/10 - Meh. Render doesn't fit BG.

Effect(s) - 7/10 - OCG Errors.

Originality - 6.5/10 - Reminds me of a real card but don't remember which one.

 

Overall - 20/30 = 66% = 6.6/10

 

Alright for a newcomer.

 

What if I told you I was Icyblue?

 

Besides, there is no way there are OCG errors. What's a render?

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No way there are OCG errors. What's a render?

 

It's a little WAY too easy to get destroyed.

 

I'd add the effect if it's destroyed that way' date=' it returns to the field 2 turns later

 

And looking at your opponent's ENTIRE hand is too much, I'd only look at 1 card

 

8/10

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Balance no?

 

Well, you have unnecessary ENTER presses which technically count as OCG Errors oh and you spelled "opponent's" wrong. You wrote "oppnent's". And since you don't know what a render is, don't worry. I thought the picture was self-made. (Since it does look that way).

 

Balance it out by making it 1 card like Ragnarok said.

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Invasive Species XAS-331-Q is a bit UP in my opinion, since your opponent can destroy it very easily and inflicting battle damage with this card is not that easy when it's ATK are halved.

send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to.... = discard 1 card to ...

Since this is an Archetype, i have to see more cards to rate more clearly, so please create more^^

8/10

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These cards kinda remind me of "Fusilier Dragon, the Dual-Mode Beast", cept with added effects.

 

Invasive Species - XAS-Q33-N is overpowered for a Level 6'er. If you Tribute Summon this card, it's pretty easy to activate both effects, because it's a 2400 ATK piercing monster, and doubling it's ATK would be devastating (4800 ATK!) Too powerful for 1 Tribute. Pic is meh and OCG looks fine. 6/10

 

Invasive Species - XAS-544-J has a simple but usable effect. It's balanced, but in my opinion, the second Tribute Summon effect wouldn't be used at all, because the first "add Spell card from Deck to hand" effect is way better. Pic could be better, OCG is fine. 7.5/10

 

Invasive Species XAS-331-Q is underpowered. Even with Tributes, it's easily destroyed as it can be targeted by ANY monster effect, spell, or trap. And it's Battle Damage effects aren't really that useful. Pic is the best of the three, but still could be better. OCG looks good. 7/10

 

Keep up the hard work. :)

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These cards kinda remind me of "Fusilier Dragon' date=' the Dual-Mode Beast", cept with added effects.

 

Invasive Species - XAS-Q33-N is overpowered for a Level 6'er. If you Tribute Summon this card, it's pretty easy to activate both effects, because it's a 2400 ATK piercing monster, and doubling it's ATK would be devastating (4800 ATK!) Too powerful for 1 Tribute. Pic is meh and OCG looks fine. 6/10

 

[b'] Only until your opponent's End Phase, so when it's your turn again it's back to 2400/1200. I noticed I wrote "fromy your", please see my sig. [/b]

 

Invasive Species - XAS-544-J has a simple but usable effect. It's balanced, but in my opinion, the second Tribute Summon effect wouldn't be used at all, because the first "add Spell card from Deck to hand" effect is way better. Pic could be better, OCG is fine. 7.5/10

 

What's wrong with my pics? They are from War of the Worlds by the way. Last one (this one, my friend did it for me) I GFXed personally, but it seems I'm no good (see my sig again).

 

Invasive Species XAS-331-Q is underpowered. Even with Tributes, it's easily destroyed as it can be targeted by ANY monster effect, spell, or trap. And it's Battle Damage effects aren't really that useful. Pic is the best of the three, but still could be better. OCG looks good. 7/10

 

I had ragnarok and Halo Ring call it overpowered... slaps self.

 

Keep up the hard work. :)

 

I don't know what's wrong with my pictures... As far as OCG goes, I think it's only spelling errors. I look up actual TCG cards, I think what's going on is that I'm cnfusing old OCG with new OCG.

 

Scond thing is my isability, oky, this sentenc, I actually didn't corect anything. I just miss quite a few keys....

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Holygiant Newbie

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'You can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing'

 

It's kind of pointless to throw that in there...

 

That second thing, where did you get that picture? It looks like someone took a picture from a Bionicle movie, put it in Photoshop and scribbled on it in the background...

 

6.8/10

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