Läufer Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 [align=center]~Lore~This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 1 LIGHT Normal monster and 1 DARK Normal monster card you control. When this card is successfully Summoned, remove the Tributed monsters from play. This card gains 200 ATK times the number of Level Stars of the two combined monsters removed from play by this card's effect. When this card is destroyed by battle with a Normal monster card and is sent to the Graveyard, inflict direct damage to your Life Points equal to the number if Level Stars of the attacking monster x200.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP1991 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 The OCG confuses me. Exactly WHAT is getting removed from play? And the tributing 2 monsters thing is normal for a level 7+ monster. Just the second sentence alone makes it OP'ed. You might wanna fix things up a little. If it's going to have that effect, at least make it LV 10 with 2000 ATK, and with it needing 3 monsters for a tribute summon. Also, the last part makes no sense if this monster's going to have high ATK. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Nice 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 The OCG confuses me. Exactly WHAT is getting removed from play? And the tributing 2 monsters thing is normal for a level 7+ monster. Just the second sentence alone makes it OP'ed. You might wanna fix things up a little. If it's going to have that effect' date=' at least make it LV 10 with 2000 ATK, and with it needing 3 monsters for a tribute summon. Also, the last part makes no sense if this monster's going to have high ATK. 7/10[/quote'] It's the required Normal monsters used to Normal Summon this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 The OCG confuses me. Exactly WHAT is getting removed from play? And the tributing 2 monsters thing is normal for a level 7+ monster. Just the second sentence alone makes it OP'ed. It needs 2 Normal monsters to be tributed. Thus' date=' it's summoning conditions need to be stated. OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 2 Normal monster[b']s[/b]. When this card is Summoned, remove the Tributed monsters from play. This card gains ATK equal to the combined Levels of the Tributed monsters x 200. If this card is destroyed by a Normal Monster and sent to the Graveyard, lose Life Points equal to the Level of the attacking monster x 200. I would add a second effect. One that reverses the last one. As in, when this card destroys an effect monster, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's Level x 100. Plus, I would make this a LIGHT/DARK dual Attribute, on account of the picture. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 The OCG confuses me. Exactly WHAT is getting removed from play? And the tributing 2 monsters thing is normal for a level 7+ monster. Just the second sentence alone makes it OP'ed. It needs 2 Normal monsters to be tributed. Thus' date=' it's summoning conditions need to be stated. OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 2 Normal monster[b']s[/b]. When this card is Summoned, remove the Tributed monsters from play. This card gains ATK equal to the combined Levels of the Tributed monsters x 200. If this card is destroyed by a Normal Monster and sent to the Graveyard, lose Life Points equal to the Level of the attacking monster x 200. I would add a second effect. One that reverses the last one. As in, when this card destroys an effect monster, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's Level x 100. Plus, I would make this a LIGHT/DARK dual Attribute, on account of the picture. 8/10 The 1st sentences are good, but then you messed up the card's effect.Thanks, tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 [spoiler=]The OCG confuses me. Exactly WHAT is getting removed from play? And the tributing 2 monsters thing is normal for a level 7+ monster. Just the second sentence alone makes it OP'ed. It needs 2 Normal monsters to be tributed. Thus' date=' it's summoning conditions need to be stated. OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 2 Normal monster[b']s[/b]. When this card is Summoned, remove the Tributed monsters from play. This card gains ATK equal to the combined Levels of the Tributed monsters x 200. If this card is destroyed by a Normal Monster and sent to the Graveyard, lose Life Points equal to the Level of the attacking monster x 200. I would add a second effect. One that reverses the last one. As in, when this card destroys an effect monster, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's Level x 100. Plus, I would make this a LIGHT/DARK dual Attribute, on account of the picture. 8/10 The 1st sentences are good, but then you messed up the card's effect.Thanks, tho. How so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 This gives me a Ghost-rare sort of feel.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 [spoiler=]The OCG confuses me. Exactly WHAT is getting removed from play? And the tributing 2 monsters thing is normal for a level 7+ monster. Just the second sentence alone makes it OP'ed. It needs 2 Normal monsters to be tributed. Thus' date=' it's summoning conditions need to be stated. OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 2 Normal monster[b']s[/b]. When this card is Summoned, remove the Tributed monsters from play. This card gains ATK equal to the combined Levels of the Tributed monsters x 200. If this card is destroyed by a Normal Monster and sent to the Graveyard, lose Life Points equal to the Level of the attacking monster x 200. I would add a second effect. One that reverses the last one. As in, when this card destroys an effect monster, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's Level x 100. Plus, I would make this a LIGHT/DARK dual Attribute, on account of the picture. 8/10 The 1st sentences are good, but then you messed up the card's effect.Thanks, tho. How so? Well, you didn't really messed up the card's effect, but OCG errors is what counts.I'm just messing with you.lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Good normal support. I don't see a lot of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 problem is it already has a base atk of 2800 and yet you boost the atk even higher via its effect seems a bit OPed, I'd lower the base atk down in addition given the picture, I'd change the effect so that you have to tribute one LIGHT normal monster and one DARK normal monster 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Agreed. Thanks a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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