Much better...than it was, anyways. Emerald Archwing

[Brendano Harns]

Self-Drawn Image. Please help with fixes n' such.

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card is also treated as a Rock-Type monster. When you take direct battle damage that is equal to or greater than 1000, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. During the End Phase of a turn this monster is Summoned this way, select 1 card from your Deck or Graveyard and add it to your hand.

 

 

Enjoy.

[Tortoise Kyle]

So not oped.

7/10

[Läufer]

The pic is kinda mehish, but cool.

Kinda OP'd, but good effects.

 

7.5/10

[Brendano Harns]

@ Abyss: Thanks, but if it isn't OP'ed, what's wrong with it?

 

@ Zexion: Suggestions?

 

 

 

Thanx. ^_^

[Läufer]

It's not wrong, it's just when the monster is destroyed, you can add 1 monster to your hand.

You can simply just add an Egyptian god card.

[Brendano Harns]

Ah, I'll change that to "Rock Type monster."

 

Thanks.

 

Although Egyptian gods are obviously banned. :P

[Fog38]

Yay, you finally posted this monster, I know you've been working on it for a while.And I was looking forward to it.

 

I don't think it's over powered at all. And the pic fits with the rest of your monsters, I always liked the wing though. Name is awesome.

 

9/10

[ragnarok1945]

looks more UPed than OPed

 

you already have to lose over 1800 LP, then you have to pay another 1000 just to get it out onto the field

 

The last effect you should remove the drawback of it being destroying during the end phase

 

8/10

[Brendano Harns]

I just got done eidting the pic.

 

I didn't like how it blended in with the bg.

 

Thanks! ^_^

 

I guess you're right. That is a lot of damage.

 

EDTED!

[ragnarok1945]

personally I'd also remove the 1000 LP pay as well, but that's your call

[Brendano Harns]

I did in the version that's up right now.

[ragnarok1945]

makes it a little better

 

I still feel it's Uped, but whatever, I'll raise the rate to 8.5/10

[Brendano Harns]

Power boost added.

[ragnarok1945]

yeah, NOW the modifications make this card much more balanced out, now I can raise the rate to 9.4/10

[Brendano Harns]

Yay! Thank you! ^_^

[☨Genocide ☨]

I think its very good and not OPD. and the pic is pretty cool, but is the wing supposed to be apart of the bg? No spotted OCG errors, 9/10

[Brendano Harns]

The wing is attached to its back, if you look closely.

 

Thanks! ^_^

[Läufer]

Now it's better.

9/10

Btw, delete the "direct" before "battle damage"

[☨Genocide ☨]

The wing is attached to its back' date=' if you look closely.

 

Thanks! ^_^

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but whys it not blue then?

[Brendano Harns]

Now it's better.

9/10

Btw' date=' delete the "direct" before "battle damage"

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No because with "direct in front of it, it has to be direct attacks to activate its effect.

 

 

 

 

The wing is attached to its back' date=' if you look closely.

 

Thanks! ^_^

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but whys it not blue then?

 

Because its a wing made of emerald shards. Its bones are made of emerald and grow out in the back, but since it is angled just right, you cannot see the connection.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks everyone! ^_^

[Läufer]

But then people would be confused if it's "battle damage" or "direct damage"

[Brendano Harns]

I know, but my OCG might be off on that one.

 

And even if it isn't, I don't make the OCG, so it isn't my fault if it isn't very descriptive in direction, therefore I can't do anything about it. ;)

[Metal Skull]

It's not a lot OP

Nice effect and pic is kinda cool

8.5/10 ;)

[Brendano Harns]

It isn't really OP'ed now.

 

It was UP'ed before because of an effect I didn't notice.

 

Thanks! ^_^

[Läufer]

The last sentences are kinda OVP'd, but others are fine.