ComingSoonNOT123 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 alright i only read the monster's (got pretty repetitive) so i'll only critique on the monstersfirst card-OP 2300 beatdown attack with easy swarm effect (discarding is a simple way of milling cards in general)-also it's unaffected my monster effects? are you crazy!-plus its last effect makes it even more immune (with it's swarming effect it makes the card even more OP)-needs more drawbacks (the average beatdown monster ATK is 2400 [not including devastating effects like this]) -don't say discard from your hand, when you state discard, it's specifying the card was sent from your hand-effects are negated, until the End Phase (note you don't have to state End Phase of this turn)6/10NOTE:never mind i won't look at all your cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Chief13 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 at first i thought you meant the game oblivion good cards though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 alright i only read the monster's (got pretty repetitive) so i'll only critique on the monstersfirst card-OP 2300 beatdown attack with easy swarm effect (discarding is a simple way of milling cards in general)-also it's unaffected my monster effects? are you crazy!-plus its last effect makes it even more immune (with it's swarming effect it makes the card even more OP)-needs more drawbacks (the average beatdown monster ATK is 2400 [not including devastating effects like this]) -don't say discard from your hand' date=' when you state discard, it's specifying the card was sent from your hand-effects are negated, until the End Phase (note you don't have to state End Phase of this turn)6/10NOTE:never mind i won't look at all your cards[/quote'] I don't think you looked at the "What are the Oblivion Monsters" otherwise you'd know that I don't have much of a choice in the matter in terms of effects. High level Oblivion monsters need to be unaffected by monster effect otherwise they'd be terribly OPED because of the lower level Oblivion's effects. That swarming effect is easily compinsted by the fact that its terribly easy to destroy Oblivion monster when using Spells, Traps and field nuke effects. Plus I put it on there under the assumption that field swarming is infact a weakness in itself. Simply because its so easy to run through them you could be stuck with one suckish hand in a game drawing situation. The last effect is simply a statement of this fact. Thank you for the critisism though. I could use that OCG correction very nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComingSoonNOT123 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 That swarming effect is easily compinsted by the fact that its terribly easy to destroy Oblivion monster when using Spells, Traps and field nuke effects. how so? your last effect allows you shield it with other monsters.dead draws can be devastating, but this card is a ONE TRIBUTE! the swarm effect can easily OTK your opponent, even if the effect is negated. High level Oblivion monsters need to be unaffected by monster effect otherwise they'd be terribly OPED because of the lower level Oblivion's effects. how does adding an effect that makes it immune to monster effect a drawback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 I made it so Ssylinzer's SS effect is activated during the Main Phase 2 to reduce the pressure on the opponent. Low level "Oblivions", even though they have effect that generally benifit each other pretty much only work for monster effects and Special Summoning. The weakness of this set is spells and traps. The same can be said for the High level Oblivion's exept that their effects don't benifit high level monsters in any way. I also added 10 cards to my set. Low level "Oblivions" have effects that help Oblivion monsters on your field. This'll help against some of those effects and make the High level ones less oped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComingSoonNOT123 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 making it unaffected by monster effects, does not make it less OP though you might consider it as a drawback because other monsters give huge support it is incorrect. If you haven't realized that's a really powerful effect. i see no originality or unique aspect in this arch type, just giving continuous support effect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 I do realize its a powerful effect. However can you honostly say that if I didn't have that effect on there it would be totally oped. I can't take it off. period. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComingSoonNOT123 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 then change the wording (to you control) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Acctually I was debating on that when I was debating with you but that would seem a little UPED to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 could you start labeling which ones are new? If I'm looking at the right ones: nice names, decent effects, good OCG, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Ok DMG i did that. Thank you again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Little generic, but nontheless good cards. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Well thank you very much. Anybody else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComingSoonNOT123 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 UP r u joking me, maybe you should look at some TCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Show me a card and I'll think about it some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shikamarudraconiz Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 i find them very interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Well thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shikamarudraconiz Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 how do you posts your cards though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 That's something for the Questions and help thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComingSoonNOT123 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Example search up choas command magician remember its effect is weaker because you have specifically target, but your effect blocks all in general Hopefully this convinced you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Sorry but not really. If you can find an good effect exept it only negates card effect that you control. I'd be convinced otherwise its just to UPED to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComingSoonNOT123 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Sorry but not really. If you can find an good effect exept it only negates card effect that you control. I'd be convinced otherwise its just to UPED to me. dude its not gonna OP if you add the effect, tell me the reasons it would be UP it has a 2300 beatdown attackslight swarm that can stack you graveyardlast effects puts the META to use, preventing this card from being destroyed (abuse) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 It just seems like its uped to me. The effect itself anyways. I don't know I'll think about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.O.O.P. Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 4/5. it's a good set, but I 've seen some of the pics. Still, good set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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