badassdave Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 i had some work on it.please say how could i improve it .thanks 8) okay now its level lovered from 12 to 10, now its effect card + made its effect not so strong as before. version 2.0 changed colors :)version 3 fixed spelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 I like this card. Switch "can't" in the card text to "cannot". I give this a 10/10. It's got high attack and defense, but you need to tribute 12 levels of stuff just to get it out, and have the ritual card. Also, Compulsory Evacuation Device, Penguin Soldier, etc. would make summoning this a waste anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
weexzk Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Effects a bit too strong.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stealthumbreon Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 1. Mentioning a card that isn't seen here.2. Extremely hard to Ritual Summon that thing.3. It's a Ritual / Effect.4. OCG errors. You're new, so you'll need a good start. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Capatalization. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Not bad for a new comerOCG: 5/10Card NAme: 5/10Balanced: Kinda.Picture: 7/10Orignaility: 5/10Overall: 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midnight111 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Its a good card, nice job on it Rating: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilmantoot Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Great card it would be a littlebetter with a clearer image.6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Great card i like it the level could be a bit lower but its good8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenGhlahr Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Too strong :/ Make it have a lower ATK and DEF 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 OCG errors. Also, don't forget that you need to put a space after every period (yes, I caught that. Deal with it)6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 put apostrophe in godzillas awakening and say "by the effects of Trap Cards." in ur last sentence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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