Oxys Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play two monsters in your hand who's total level equals the level of this card. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon the two monsters used as a tribute. Each Special Summoned monster gains 500 ATK. This card art (if you can tell) started out as Chaos Sorcerer, and turned into what it is now. I might start a set around this just for kicks, etc. I hope the Effect isn't to Overpowered, I was thinking I should reduce the ATK instead of gain. Anyways, any constructive criticism about grammar errors, terminology, etc. Is greatly appreciated. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Grand IMG! The effect is also a grand one! I know it has atleast 1 OCG error but I'm unsure how to fix it. It is balanced and it would do well in any Deck. Fantastic! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Thanks! By the way does the error point to the word tribute? I hear it's changed to released o.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 The effect certainly is interesting. 2 low level monsters are gonna get a nice boost. This card could really come in hand in some situations. The recolor of Chaos Sorcerer just makes me love this card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 LOL why is PIC soo strange...tow = 2Use numbers, don't use one, tow...Effects is ok.A bit OP, but not that matters ;)OCG is ok.Good pic think. 8/10 LOL i don't now what you did with the card, but just copy paste the card code this way: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Thanks! By the way does the error point to the word tribute? I hear it's changed to released o.O I think released is ANime. Since none of the newest cards say released on them (I could be mistaken but I doubt it). No' date=' no it's to do with the "This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play two monsters in your hand who's total level equals the level of this card. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon the two monsters used as a tribute. Each Special Summoned monster gains 500 ATK." Stuff....I think I can fix it "This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play [b']2[/b] monsters in your hand whose total Level equals the Level of this card. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon the monsters used to Special Summon this card. Each monster Special Summoned by this card's effect gains 500 ATK." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Aww crap xD. I totally forgot about using the digits instead of the words. That's a really sweet correction I'll fix the card up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Alrighty! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 very versatile effect you got there it's only 500 atk, and the 2 monsters will be of low level anyway Still, you should have put a drawback in that the 2 special summoned monsters can't be used as a tribute when special summoned this way 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 welltwo = 2tribute = Tributewho's= whose remember that..^^you wont make that mistake's again nice edition of the Chaos Sorcerer !!!This deserves a 8.5/10 / BTW LOVELY !! we have the same amount of reps ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 There are no OCG errors to be seen 100% OK.10/10 This powers up weaklings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 very versatile effect you got there it's only 500 atk' date=' and the 2 monsters will be of low level anyway Still, you should have put a drawback in that the 2 special summoned monsters can't be used as a tribute when special summoned this way 9/10[/quote'] That's a good idea. I'll definitely add a drawback XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Wow, the Image is Awesome. Got to say, it has an ok Effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Effect is nice, pic is quite epic - I didn't even realize it was good ol' CS until you pointed it out. 9.5/10. I could see this being abused with obscure cards like Rare Metal Dragon or Sacred Crane that aren't worth dropping to the Graveyard but need to be Special'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Effect is nice' date=' pic is quite epic - I didn't even realize it was good ol' CS until you pointed it out. 9.5/10. I could see this being abused with obscure cards like Rare Metal Dragon or Sacred Crane that aren't worth dropping to the Graveyard but need to be Special'd.[/quote'] Holy crap I totally forgot about Sacred Crane XD. If this card was Official I hope It would only be limited <3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coffee Black Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 the monsters could be level 5 and level 1, so you could be boosting the ATK of an already strong card, which i actually like. i think you should limit summoning any other monster the turn you special summon letum or special summon the two monsters. anyways, good job 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ăɍȼẗîȼ Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 How did you get the backgound? No idea how to do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreamer! Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 nice card, quite balanced10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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