First Cards (revised)

[JoeMama21]

Well, here are my first cards again, but i fixed sum errors, changed a few pics, and added sum cards, so tell me wat'cha think!

 

 

and yes, all pics are off google, and if i get sum pretty good ratings, i will expand on the army theme, thx everyone!8)

[Byoto]

Well' date=' here are my first cards again, but i fixed sum errors, changed a few pics, and added sum cards, so tell me wat'cha think!

 

[img']http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/719/428371.jpg[/img]

 

and yes, all pics are off google, and if i get sum pretty good ratings, i will expand on the army theme, thx everyone!8)

 

Some need backgrounds but there OK to me... I don't like the topic...Army.

[Stoopid1]

The effects are alright, but they are still poorly written. There are many errors, such as that the words "LP" and "Magic" don't exist in this game.

 

I'll also note that your Equip cards all do the same thing, increase your ATK points. Not very creative. Not to mention, innefective. "Axe of Despair" for example can be equipped to any monster, and gives it 1000 ATK.

[JoeMama21]

The effects are alright' date=' but they are still poorly written. There are many errors, such as that the words "LP" and "Magic" don't exist in this game.

 

I'll also note that your Equip cards all do the same thing, increase your ATK points. Not very creative. Not to mention, innefective. "Axe of Despair" for example can be equipped to any monster, and gives it 1000 ATK.

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well, those r the only equip cards i've come up with so far, but like i said, if i get enuf good replies then i'll "expand" on the set