Sweet Lightning Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 So guys, what do you think? Many people seemed to think this card was OP'd, so I lowered the ATK. Please give feedback (no "10/10 kthxbye") XD. I hope you like it! :) Effect: "Alien Ammonite" + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersIf you control an "Alien" monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target of your opponent's monsters. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Tribute 1 "Alien" monster you control to place A-Counters equal to the Level of the monster you Tributed on 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Once per turn during your End Phase, you can pay Life Points in multiples of 200 (max. 1000) to Special Summon 1 "Alien Ammo Token" (Reptile-Type/WATER/Level 1/ATK ?/DEF 0) The ATK of "Alien Ammo Token" is equal to the multiples of Life Points you paid x100. This effect can only be used once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Awesome !!! 15/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Thanks. But any reason why it's awesome? You know, feedback? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtremeG Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 The pic is good, but it doesn't really look like a yugioh card pic. The effect is alright, by there are few drawback. I would take out the first part. Other than that, it all looks great.9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 It looks fantastic. But I can't see it as a Synchro. Maybe an effect Monster, say like:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 "Alien Ammonite" and 1 Level 2 Monster. If you control an Alien monster.... and so on.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 The pic is good' date=' but it doesn't really look like a yugioh card pic. The effect is alright, by there are few drawback. I would take out the first part. Other than that, it all looks great.9.2/10[/quote'] I agree with this post and my rating is A- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Oh, were doing grades now. In that case...A+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Thanks for your rates! :D As for taking out the "first part of the effect", without it, this card would not survive a turn. Also, I wanted to give it the slightly OP'd feel of a Synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Ah, the OPed feel... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 The last is effect is....confusing and weird. Some of the OCG is off. Overall, the card pretty well made but the last effect is confusing and weird as mentioned before and some of the OCG is off. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Okay. This card cannot be attacked if another alien is on the field. So, in your End Phase, you can pay multiples of 200 Life Points to summon an "Alien Ammo Token" The ATK is equal to the multiples of Life Points you paid. So if you paid 1000 LP, the token would have 500 ATK. This would keep the Synchro safe for one attack as it can't be attacked when another alien on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 The tokens need some restrictions on it to make it more balanced out For the most part the effect is well balanced, though I'd remove the 1st part of the effect 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 I made it so that you could only summon one token a turn. Also, without the first part, this card is UP'd. I mean, with any other Aliens on the field it's an 1000 ATK defenseless weakling. @Oleon: Dude, that is appreciated. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkSigner32 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 I saw this in the contest were doing and i like it there and i like it hereit is good alien support 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Hey thanks, DarkSigner32! :) You're doing a great job in the contest too. We're tied for first! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 The first part makes it OP. In case you didn't notice, it is an Alien, so it can never be attacked. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 *facepalm* i'll have to edit that. I meant to say "when there are other aliens besides this one". Oops. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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