Need a little bit of help with my new set.

[Havok_SCO]

Okay so I've been working on a Konoha and Akatsuki set....yeah I know... "Another one...places hand on forehead...." But I won't be showing mine off till I know I have it just right. Balancing stats with power levels based on the show along with incorporating jutsus through magic and trap cards. I'm going to try and stay as close to the anime as best I can and keep the cards fit for real use sorta speak. But I'm needing a little help on wording for this card.

 

 

My idea was to make the card resemble what happened in the fight between Jiraiya and Pain. Everytime he attacked pain would counter with the appropriate path. So any help would be appreciated.

[Guest Neo Fusion]

only thing id change is start the first sentence with "As long as this card is face-up..." then ur fine id say

[Havok_SCO]

Wow only 1 comment? Thats kinda sad. Thanks FusionXD.

[Stealthumbreon]

What FusionXD said, plus the fact that there are no such thing as "Pain" monsters as of now.

 

5.5/10. Do better and I'll change my rating.

[Sorrow.]

Mmm I can help you out.. Don't make a monster type a Shinobi. Alot of people here are very strict about Vanillas

Try something like Shiniobi - Sakura or something use the Archetype style more like it for example Elemental Hero or Synchron Hero

[Havok_SCO]

I would do that but it makes the name to long if you ask me. Its an ongoing set so well just have to see where it goes. I'll post it when its finished or I might post a card here and there for help. As far as fake sub types I'm not really worried about it. Flamers don't bother me. If the majority of people say they don't mind in my poll then I'll use Shinobi or something. If they say no then I'll just stick with warrior and see where I can go with it.