Echofon Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 I put some hard work into these cards. Thank god for DeviantArt. Please rate/comment!! I rly want to get better as a card maker!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holygiant Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 OCG Errors: (Checking your Surroundings) 'During the turn this card is played, you may destroy 2 spell or trap cards on your opponent's side of the field. Fix: Change 'may' to 'can', change 'on your opponent's side of the field' to 'your opponent's field'. OCG Errors: (Futuric Battle Helm) You may only equip this card to a monster with 'Futuric Rogue' in it's name. A monster equipped with this card increases it's DEF by 700 points. Fix: Change 'may' to 'can', change 'a monster with Futuric Rogue in it's name' to 'a Futuric Rogue monster'. With the word 'futuric', were you trying to spell Futuristic?As for the rest of the cards, also change 'may' to 'can'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echofon Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Um, no. I meant Futuric. Futuristic seemed a bit lengthy and you have to admit, FUTURIC is such a cool word, regardless of whether it exists or not. I'll make the changes. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Many OCG errors. Holygiant has pointed them. Check out the OCG Thread if you haven't yet. Pics are pretty good, but you could give them BG, and erase the borders. Nice for a first try, tho.6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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