Shinwa Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Inspired by KHR ... now turned it into a real card : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holygiant Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Coincidentally, I saw a play about the 80's on Saturday. XD As for the card, your OCG seems a little bit off and the art looks a bit too stretched vertically.Other than that, 7.5/10 (Decent!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Yeah Rubik's Cube come directly from Hell xD . it is a Soccer Ball from Hell xD .... you may correct my OCG if you like ;D .... I only took the Pic from the Episode so it doesnt look weird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell-Razor Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Mehish card... plus kinda op'd 2nd part of effect is no good, you have some ocg errors like hand isn't capitalized and Defense Position is capitalized, Life Points should be wrote like that, there all i can see, suppose can be good card in some situations, but it can be quiet op'd the effect should say Once per turn, cos otherwise you can summon up to 4 monsters if they are available, then they can be easily used as tribute or as synchro material Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holygiant Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Yeah Rubik's Cube come directly from Hell xD . it is a Soccer Ball from Hell xD .... you may correct my OCG if you like ;D .... I only took the Pic from the Episode so it doesnt look weird Well, to be completely honest, I don't know specifically what's wrong, I'm bad with OCG myself. It just looks a bit off s'all <.< As for the pic, you can size it down/up/whatever with paint.net or mspaint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Adjustment: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 the first effect you should also say the machine monster you summoned can't use its effect that turn Otherwise the cost for the 1st effect would be too little of a drawback 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 the first effect you should also say the machine monster you summoned can't use its effect that turn Otherwise the cost for the 1st effect would be too little of a drawback 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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