Zemener Azon Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 New Cards since December 1, 2009: "Fu Dog - American Dragon Guide"; "The Tissue Box"; "Rose - American Dragon Comrade"; "Double Shock"; "Spud - American Dragon Comrade" This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 2 cards in your hand to the Graveyard. Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, increase the ATK of this card by 300 points or draw 1 card from your Deck. If this card is discarded as a cost, you can return 1 "American Dragon" card from your Graveyard to your hand except "Fu Dog - American Dragon Guide". While this card is face-up on your side of the field, all "American Dragon" cards you control are unaffected by the effects of Effect Monsters your opponent controls. If this card is discarded as a cost, you can Special Summon an "American Dragon" monster from your Graveyard except "Spud - American Dragon Comrade". Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to increase the ATK of an "American Dragon" monster by 1000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nishi-chan Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 icwatudidthar Written Cards please =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 icwatudidthar Written Cards please =) I had lost my image link while posting this. I added the card image while you were posting your message. You should be able to see it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZedsAlive Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 cool....not bad.... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 just 2 errors: put an apostrophe in opponents and say ATK instead of Attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted November 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Here we go, I switched Attack to ATK and I changed the "Battle Damage" part of the text to fit the card text on Vampire Lord. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Looks good 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ryu Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 It's a risk to discard 4 cards, but the draw effect could pay off. Good pic, while costly to get him into play, he has a nice effect. Dunno, I'd make it optional to be able to special summon him like that, and let him be set or normal summoned. Just my take on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Not a bad point. Four cards is a bit much for a 2500 attacker. If the opponent has a good defense or high attack, or any sort of way to stop me from attacking, then this card becomes pretty useless. I do want to keep it as a Special Summon however. What if the cost to Special Summon it was 2 cards instead of 4? Would that make it over powered or just right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ryu Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Not a bad point. Four cards is a bit much for a 2500 attacker. If the opponent has a good defense or high attack' date=' or any sort of way to stop me from attacking, then this card becomes pretty useless. I do want to keep it as a Special Summon however. What if the cost to Special Summon it was 2 cards instead of 4? Would that make it over powered or just right?[/quote'] Two is fair, imo. If this card had piercing I'd say no, but in this case it's just being tribute summoned except with discard instead of tributes. If it had piecing this card could be a nasty creature with draw power, plus attack boosting, your opponent would need an answer immediately. Two should work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 I have added 4 new cards to this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 About Time someone makes this. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
falcondrop96 Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 I have added 5 new cards to this set. What do you think of them as individual cards and do they have synergy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ryu Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 I like the theme as a, discard for a cost. It's the inverse of Dark World that takes an interesting spin on it. The only card that concerns me is double shock. There is a lot of card advantage you can get from that card alone, combine it with the other cards you made, it gets disgusting. Here is an instance, Opponents starts by setting a monster and end his turn. You go by playing Double Shock, special summon The American Dragon pitching Trixie and Rose. Because you pitched them, you can destroy the set monster and remove a card in their hand from the game, then draw two because of double shock. Attack from The American Dragon, draw a card. Now lets look at the CA of the situation. Opponent lost a monster for your card and lost a card from hand. So they have four cards left. You drew three cards, two from Double Shock and one from The American Dragon. You have five in hand, Double Shock and The American Dragon in play. you have seven to their four on your first turn. You might want to change the wording on it or nerf it, IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Yeah man, I feel you. I'll change that one up and make it pretty cool but not OPed. (Hopefully, haha.) Thanks for the input.I gave it a Special Summoning effect with a draw back. Since most of these monsters are relatively weak while on the field, I don't think it is too powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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