The Dark Duellist Saga I (new chapters are up)

[SebastiaanZ]

This is a story I started on janime. At janime I already am at chapter 46. I know the first chapters are not really written well, but that changes from chapter 15.

 

 

 

Chapter 1 “Crusade to Hisehade City! Kamon versus Lean (1)”

 

A cruiseship is going to the harbour of Hisehade City. On the ship is a boy called Kamon McFlinn. He is on his way to the company of his father. Kamon is a highschool champion in Duel-Monsters and he even beated the regional champion. He is famous in Oka, the village where he lived and the only one who brought him to Hisehade City, was his father. However there are also kids who don’t like him. One of them is on the ship, called Lean.

 

Later that evening, Kamon was eating alone, while the boys were making fun of him. Kamon is just been attended by his assistant, a beauty of a girl called Sara. Sara asks whether Kamon cares about Lean and those others. Kamon says he doesn’t really care. They are just a couple of fools, wanting to make fun of someone who is the son of one of the richest men in the world. When they say something about his sister who fell from a tree and died, Kamon gets up and asks what the problem is. Lean says nothing, but he was just going about Kamon`s past. Kamon gets angrier, but keeps himself in the hand. He goes outside, followed by Sara.

 

Outside on the deck, Sara tells him she feels like the fact that there is something dark around Kamon, every time he gets angry. Kamon says there is nothing wrong with him. Lean comes outside and starts telling stories about Kamon. Kamon grabs him and pushes him against the rail of the ship. Sara begs him to stop. Kamon grabs him harder and almost throws Lean over the rail, but he gets himself under control. Kamon says let’s finish this the way they normally do. Let`s duel. Lean says he’ll crush him. Kamon tells him not to be so sure of himself. They stand by their dueldisc`s.

 

Kamon suddenly sees a lionlike creature staying behind Lean. He asks what that creature is. Lean says it is his duelspirit, Leanbroww. Kamon says he wasn’t talking about that one, the other behind Leanbroww. A black clad wolflike creature appears behind Leanbroww and Lean. Lean says he doesn’t know, it is however one of his cards. Kamon says he has heard about Duel-Spirits and hoped he would have one to. Never mind, let`s duel!

 

Kamon – 4000

Lean – 4000

 

Lean says Kamon issued the challenge, so he can start. Kamon agrees and sets two cards facedown and Dreamsprite (500/500) in defencemode. Lean starts his turn by setting one card facedown and a monster in defencemode. He ends his turn. Kamon draws a card and says that he gets 500 lifepoints because of Dreamsprite (4500). Then he plays Bowdarion (600/400) in attackmode, activating Lean`s facedown card, Ultimate Offering. Bowdarion destroys the facedown monster, Skull Servant (300/200). Bowdarion then can gain half of the opponents attackpoints (750/400). Lean starts his turn by summoning another monster in defence and then activates Ultimate Offering to give up 500 lifepoints (3500) and summon another monster into defencemode. Then he pays another 500 lifepoints (3000) and a third monster appears in defencemode. Kamon starts his turn by gaining another 500 lifepoints (5000). He sets a card and plays Pot of Greed, drawing two cards. He plays the magiccard Assault Robo Cannon. It summons two Assault Robo Token`s (600/0) in attackmode. Dreamsprite destroys a facedown (another Skull Servant), Bowdarion destroys a facedown (also a Skull Servant) and raises his attack to 900, a Assault Robo Token destroys another facedown (a Skull Servant) and the other Assault Robo Token attacks directly (2400). Kamon says this is to easy. Lean says it is not over. He’ll summon his all powerfull monster.

 

Kamon – 5000

Lean – 2400

 

In the meantime, an employee called Sam Degin, is about to go to the company of Kamon`s father, when he is being attacked by a big shadow. The shadow summons a Golgaroth (2000/2000) in attackmode and punches Sam down. Sam stands up again and the shadow touches him. His eyes change from blue to red and he asks how can he serve his master……

 

Sara gets a call from Kamon`s father, asking when Kamon will arrive. Sara says Kamon is dealing with something first. The father asks if Kamon is duelling again. Sara says yes and he is crushing his opponent. They hang up and Sara watches as Lean is about to summon the card he was talking about all time. Kamon tells him not so fast and activates his facedown card, Lullaby of Silence. He gains 300 lifepoints and cancels out the order of Lean. Lean says it is just a matter of time until his ultimate monster arrives. Kamon gains another 500 lifepoints because of Dreamsprite (5500) and then tributes his Dreamsprite and an Assault Cannon Token to summon Des Dondagalf (2200/2000). And another Assault Robo Token appears. Kamon gains another 500 lifepoints (6300) and Lean asks how he did that. Kamon says it’s because he tributed a Dreamsprite as well. Des Dondagalf takes over the ability of Dreamsprite to give him 500 additional lifepoints. Now further he ends his turn. Lean draws a card and says it is all over. He summons Underworld King of the Skull Servants (?/?). Then he activates the special ability of Underworld King of the Skull Servants to gain 1000 attackpoints per Skull Servant in his graveyard. He has 4, so his level becomes 4000/0. Then he plays Reaping Scythe as a additional magiccard and attacks Bowdarion (Kamon = 3200). Because of Reaping Scythe, the attackpoints of Bowdarion are split and added to his Underworld King(4450/450). Kamon is not really impressed as he orders Des Dondagalf to attack the Underworld King. Lean says that makes no sense, why should Des Dondagalf attack a monster which is stronger as him. He orders a counterattack and we are left wondering what will happen. See next chapter………

[SebastiaanZ]

Chapter 2

 

Chapter 2 “Kamon versus Lean! Rise of the Wolf-Lord! (2)”

 

Kamon – 3200

Lean – 2400

 

After the two blasts collided last chapter, we are waiting for the fog to clear. When the fog clears it seems that both monsters survived the attack. Well, Des Dondagalf is destroyed shortly afterwards, but Underworld King still stands. Lean says he just needs two more attacks and then he will win. Kamon tells him to go ahead, even better, he’ll help him. Kamon switches his Assault Robo Token to attackmode. Kamon sets a card and ends his turn. Lean says it only makes it more easy for him. He draws and says it is all over. He plays Haunted Morph and one facedown card. This activates another effect of Des Dondagalf, summoning it back to the field. This time with 2400/2000 as level. Kamon uses his magiccard Sharp Teeth on Des Dondagalf, raising his attack to 2600. Kamon orders Des Dondagalf to attack Underworld King and Lean orders Underworld King of the Skull Servant to counterattack.

 

This time Underworld King goes down, bringing Lean to 1700 lifepoints. Lean says now his Haunted Morph kicks in. Underworld King of the Skull Servants returns to the field. Underworld King (4000/0) again, equipped with Reaping Scythe, goes on to attack Des Dondagalf, lowering Kamon`s lifepoints to 1800. Kamon says he has only Assault Robo Token on the field and now he has to discard it because of Sharp Teeth. Underworld King (4700/700) attacks Kamon directly, but Kamon stays still. Kamon says he cannot just be defeated, you need more then that.

 

Kamon – 1800

Lean – 1700

 

Sam, in the meantime, arrives at the security gates of McFlinn Mechanics. The security-personell tells him he had a day of. Sam says he had to do something. The head of security, called Graem, tells him they have no record and so he is not allowed to go in. He calls the boss, father of Kamon, and tells him Sam wants to get in. The father, called Liam, tells them not to let Sam in. Graem tells Sam he can’t allow him access. Sam says he has too. A black shadow appears behind him and two monsters stand next beside him. Two Lainar-Knight`s (1800/1400) knock down Graem and his compagnions. Sam laughs and moves on.

 

In the meantime, Kamon looks at his hand (fltr: Monster-Reborn, Daigren-Blade, Ke-Chiow (1000/1000) and Final Wish) and thinks of a strategy. He draws a card and gets Battle-Fusion. He sets it facedown, then uses Monster-Reborn to bring back Bowdorian (600/400). Then he summons Ke-Chiow (1000/1000) and uses Daigren-Blade on Bowdorian. With it Bowdorian level raises to 1000/800. Then he can draw out one card he used earlier in the game and a card from his deck. That`s something he can do every turn. So he brings back Assault Robo Cannon and gets Polymerization from his deck. Then finally Kamon puts his last card in play, Final Wish. He rolls a dice and gets a 3. He draws three cards from his deck and exchanges one with another card from his deck. He sets one card facedown and then activates Polymerization to fuse Bowdorian with Ke-Chiow to Bowdor-Chiow (1500/1000). Lean asks whether that`s all. Kamon says not yet, he only must attack again. Underworld King counterattacks, but Kamon activates Battle-Fusion. So Bowdor-Chiow (6200/1000) attacks Underworld King and destroys it for good. However Lean uses the Grimreaper magiccard to stay safe. He still has 1000 lifepoints.

 

Lean says that was an awesome move. But Battle-Fusion is worked out now and Bowdor-Chiow is ready to be trampled. He says it is time to bring out his Duel-spirit, Leanbroww (2000/1000). He does so and the armoured lionlike warrior appears. Leanbroww destroys Bowdor-Chiow, lowering Kamon`s lifepoints to 1300. Kamon says he is far from defeated. How about bringing out his Double-Headed Leghul (500/500). It can attack directly and does so (500). Lean says that doesn’t matter, he can destroy it next turn and win the game. Kamon says there will be no next turn. Double-Headed Leghul can attack twice in a turn. And that goes as well for direct attacks. Lean tells him to go ahead. Double-Headed Leghul attacks directly again and should have lowered Lean`s lifepoints to 0, but he activated two cards, one from his and one on the field. The first one was called Seal of Divinity, discarding 4 magiccards from the deck to the graveyard. The second one is Soul of Purity, bringing back four magiccards he discarded and setting them at the field. Then he activates his other card on the field, called Emergency Provisions, discarding all four cards on the field and gaining 4000 lifepoints (4000). So where was Lean? Oh yeah, he was about to destroy Double-Headed Leghul, leaving Kamon with 200 lifepoints. Kamon catches for breath. He did not expect such a power from Lean.

 

Kamon – 200

Lean – 4000

 

Sam, in the meantime, arrives in a secured office where a man is watching the current duel of Kamon against Lean. Sam says the man called for him. The man tells him he did indeed. He is currenly watching the duel of Kamon against Lean and he wonders whether Lean can actually beat Kamon. Sam says if Lean releases the full power of his deck, he can. The man says they will proceed as planned, so get everything ready when the boat arrives. Sam bows and leaves the office.

 

Kamon is still trying to catch some breath. Sara tries to reach him, but Lean says it is an official duel, intervention of someone might meen disqualification of Kamon. Sara still wants to reach Kamon, but Kamon tells her he is fine, he needs to finish this. Kamon`s turn is now, he only has one card facedown and no monsters. He draws and says this lightens up again. He summons Glandalan (1200/800) to the field. This activates the special ability of Leanbroww, allowing Lean to activate a magiccard from his deck and Leanbroww gains 200 attackpoints (2200/2000). Lean plays Shrouds of Dark Magic. It allows him to summon a level-5 or higher dark-attribute monster in attackmode, by paying half of his lifepoints (2000). Then Glandalan gains 300 lifepoints, because Lean activated a magiccard (1500/1100). But from the shrouds of the magiccard the wolflike warrior, the unknown monster-spirit of Lean appears. Lean says he needs to tribute Leanbroww for it, but he now has Zen-Aku the Wolf-Lord (0/0). The level immidietly raises to 2000/2000. Zen-Aku is looming over Kamon, who is far in minority with only Glandalan. What will happen and what has Lean more in store for Kamon. We’ll see next chapter………

 

Kamon – 200

Lean – 2000

[SebastiaanZ]

And chapter 3. I'll put chapter 4 later up. I mean to many at once is not really good as well.

 

Chapter 3 “Kamon versus Lean! Arise, Preda Megabattleborg vs Eternal Dragon! (3)”

 

Kamon – 200

Lean – 2000

 

Zen-Aku the Wolf-Lord easily destroys Glandalan. But when the smoke leaves the place, Kamon still stands with 100 lifepoints left. He used his Last Resort-trapcard. Zen-Aku’s level raises to 2100/2100. Kamon uses the time to play Gold-Dagger and draws 5 cards. It allows him to play Grant-Guardian lv. 1 (500/500). Then he has to discard all monsters from the cards he just drew and get back magiccards or trapcards to the same amount. He throws away two monstercards and gets back Monster-Reborn and Last Resort. He uses Monster-Reborn and brings back one of the monsters he was forced to discard, Psycholoco (800/600). He sets Last Resort facedown and ends his turn. Lean says that`s not really an impressive defence. Kamon tells him to watch what they can do. He has just the right monsters on the field. Grant-Guardian can now be tributed for Grant-Guardian lv. 3 (1500/1000). Grant-Guardian`s update allows him to gain 500 extra lifepoints per turn (600). However Zen-Aku’s level raises to 2600/2600. Lean says he has already won. Remember his Seal of Divinity, he now can activate the four magiccards he then send away anytime he wants. He threw away, for instance, Dark-Core Flute. It can only be activated and equipped with a Zen-Aku. Zen-Aku`s level raises to 5200/5200. However Psycholoco throws a dice, getting a 3. His level raises to 2400/1800. Lean says it is still not enough.

 

He plays out the effect of Dark-Core Flute to bring out the Centauros Predaborg (2800/1000). That`s when he activates the second card Frontline Base. He brings out the Wolf Predaborg (2500/1000). He activates the special ability of Wolf Predaborg to bring back a trapcard called Ultimate Offering. He pays 500 lifepoints (1500) and brings in the Gorilla Predaborg (2800/1000). He says it is not over yet. No, says Kamon, he’s just starting. Psycholoco`s level raises to 4800/3600. Zen-Aku attacks Psycholoco, but Grant-Guardian intercepts the attack. After the attack, Grant-Guardian still stands. Kamon tells Lean to remember that a Grant-Guardian never can be defeated in the first attack. Lean says he did do it on purpose, now he can play the Lion Predaborg (3000/1000). Five monsters are looming over Kamon and his Grant-Guardian lv. 3 and Psycholoco.

 

Kamon – 600

Lean – 1500

 

The man who previously talked to Sam is still watching the duel of Kamon against Lean. He says it is just merely a test to see whether Kamon is ready to deal with bigger things. The world will be on his feet. He asks someone to bring in the assasins. Three people with cloaks come in and asks what their master want. The man says they each have a mission and they need to deal with a group of duellists. If he wants to take over the world, they must be cleared of the world.

 

Graem was listening in on this while he was on his security check and cameras sees him. Three big men come to him asking what he want. Graem tells them nothing is wrong, he was just on his security-check. He goes on to call Kamon`s father, telling him what he just heard. The father, called Glenn, tells him not to worry, nothing is wrong. He goes on. The man in the room gets a mysterious phonecall telling him, someone was listening in, but he took care of it. The man says good and goes on watching the duel with interest.

 

Sara was looking on the McFlinn website, seeing a high concentration of money to buy the company, while the company has no problems. She thinks to keep an eye on it. In the meantime, Kamon has his hands full on Lean. He gains 500 additional lifepoints because of Grant-Guardian (1100). Lean then plays Spirit of the Spring. He gains the same amount of lifepoints as Kamon will (2000/Zen-Aku (6200/6200)). Kamon plays out a card he got in his last turn, Foolish Move. He brings back Dreamsprite (500/500) and gains instantly another 500 lifepoints (1600) and so does Lean (2500/Zen-Aku (6700/6700)). Then he can evolve his Grant-Guardian lv. 3 into a Grant-Guardian lv. 5 (2800/1300). Which means, he can take out the Wolf Predaborg (Lean = 2200/Zen-Aku (7000/7000)). Lean tells him no problem, he can unite them. He plays Overload Union. There comes the Preda Megabattleborg (4000/3500). It destroys the Grant-Guardian lv. 5 (Kamon = 400). Psycholoco attacks, but is destroyed and Preda Megabattleborg still stands. Lean says it is the defendershield of Preda Megabattleborg.

 

Well, Kamon says, his Psycholoco forces his opponent to remove any monster from play he wants, so he’ll choose Preda Megabattleborg. Further he can gain 600 lifepoints (1000) which raises Lean as well (2800/Zen-Aku = 7600/7600). Kamon says he is going to end this battle now. He plays two cards, Brainwash Machine and Mystic Wok.

 

Kamon – 1000

Lean – 2800

 

The man who was watching Kamon and Lean`s duel all the time says the duel is nearing his end phase of battling. Then he’ll bring the duellists to his demise. He knows the outcome of this duel. He calls someone who apparently is at the harbour and tells him to set everything ready.

 

Kamon tells Lean the effect of Brainwash Machine. He can take over a monster on Lean`s field for the rest of the duel. And Lean can’t revise the effect. Then his second card comes in play, Mystic Wok. Tributing Zen-Aku, the one who gave Kamon such a lot of trouble, Kamon gains 7600 lifepoints. But of course, because of Spirit of the Spring also Lean gains 7600 lifepoints. But since Brainwash Machine was activated Lean receives damage equel to the level of Zen-Aku, which keeps Lean at 2800 lifepoints and Kamon has no trouble anymore with Zen-Aku. But Kamon hasn’t shown his most powerfull move. He uses Assault Robo Cannon (the magiccard he retrieved earlier in the duel) to bring in two Assault Robo Token`s. Then he moves in a Bowganion (300/800) in defencemode. Last card he plays is Honour Medal. He can tribute his three monsters on the field to summon any monster he has in his hand. And that`s his most trusted dragon, the Mega-Eternal-Seadragon (3400/3000)!! The great dragon is hovering above the field. However Kamon must wait another turn before he can attack. Lean says if he draws the right card he will finish it this turn. Kamon says he’ll just set this card and end his turn.

 

Lean draws a card and hopes it will be the right one. He sees it and says this duel is over. He says he just drew Spirit of the Spring – Devil`s Curse. He needs to deactivate his old Spirit of the Spring magiccard and throw it into the graveyard. Then he can activate Spirit of the Spring – Devil`s Curse. Because of it, he can draw out one card from his deck and draws Final Saber Slash. With it he brings back Zen-Aku. Zen-Aku (2800/2800) hovers above the Mega-Eternal-Seadragon. Then Lean tells Kamon because of SotS – Devil`s Curse he gains 2000 lifepoints (1000 per magiccard) and so does Zen-Aku (4800/4800). Zen-Aku attacks Mega-Eternal-Seadragon and should have destroyed, but he doesn’t.

 

Kamon says he is going to win. He played out the effect of Mega-Eternal-Seadragon (3400/3000) and got back a magiccard which immidietly activated, Battle-Fusion! Then he plays Seadragon Hatchling (400/0) and tributes it for another Mega-Eternal-Seadragon (3400/3000). Then the first Mega-Eternal-Seadragon (8200/3000) destroys Zen-Aku and lowers Lean`s lifepoints to 0. Kamon says it is finally over. Lean agrees and tells him he now knows how great Kamon really is. He leaves and his friends follow him. Lean tells them not to bother Kamon anymore, Kamon really is a superb duellist. Kamon turns around smiling and Sara says that`s a long time ago that she saw Kamon smiling. They go to their rooms.

 

Next morning Kamon sees how the ship approaches the harbour. Kamon says this is going to be an fun time, he hopes. Behind him his duel-spirit flies, the Mega-Eternal-Seadragon………

[Humpie]

Please update it quickly so you are on the same page as you are at janime! I'd like to read them all again here too.

[SebastiaanZ]

Well here is chapter 4.

 

Chapter 4 “The lost champion!”

 

Graem is watching the monitors of the company where he is a security-guard. The telephone of him goes and Glenn is the one who calls him. Glenn tells him there is something wrong in computerroom 5. Glenn tells him there is a high activity of magnetic energy in there. Graem sees the report and looks up. He says there hasn’t so much magnetic energy in here, not after ‘operation apoca’. He watches a safe at the other side of the room and thinks, he should take it just in cause trouble would come.

 

One of the cloaked men is watching Graem coming to computerroom 5. He tells him to come, he’ll be ready for him. Suddenly Graem disappears. The cloaked men asks himself where he is gone. He tells some units to find him. Five armoured soldiers materialize from holograms. They close in to the computerroom 5. The cloaked man says the Quartoldon`s must find him and defeat him anyway and anyhow. However the Quartoldon`s report they don’t find any signs of Graem, but someone else. The cloaked man says he doesn’t care, take care of it.

 

In the meantime Kamon has gotten of the cruise and walks towards a cab. However two hummers and a limousine start driving up the driveway. Lean and his friends see how Kamon gets in, protected by some big and strong man. Kamon looks one more time at Lean, nods and goes into the limousine. The colonne leaves and Lean shakes his head. Lean tells his friends to catch a cab, they need to find an hotel.

 

The man in the screenroom (from the last episodes) sees Lean and the others leaving and tells his men to take care of them. He sees the two hummers and limousine coming down to the company. Nice vacation, never going to happen, the man says. He tells the Quartoldon`s to take care of the cloaked man in computerroom 5.

 

The cloaked man in computerroom 5 has found the troublecauser in the room, terminal 5a. The cloaked man puts in a disc, telling himself that the last time also terminal 5a was used. He accesses a program, but notices on the extern-camera that Quartoldon`s are coming for him. He reveals to have a dueldisc. The Quartoldon`s make their way into the room. They all carry dueldisc`s. The Quartoldons tell him to remove himself from this room, or else they will punish him. The cloaked man says he doesn’t think so and removes his cloak from his arm and reveals his own dueldisc armed with a deck. The Quartoldons activate their dueldisc`s. He says he is Mysterio.

 

Mysterio – 4000

Quartoldon 1 – 4000

Quartoldon 2 – 4000

Quartoldon 3 – 4000

Quartoldon 4 – 4000

Quartoldon 5 – 4000

 

Mysterio tells them they may go first. One by one the Quartoldon`s activate their magiccard Quartol-Rage. This deals 600 lifepoints per Quartoldon on the field including the controller. So Mysterio gets 3000 lifepoints of damage. The man behind the screens says that Mysterio doesn’t stand a chance. Then the Quartoldon`s activate one by one their magiccard Bomb under Defence. If the opponent plays a monster in defencemode, he loses 800 lifepoints per monster. However they can play free monsters in defencemode. So they play Quartol – Shield Bearer (0/2200). Mysterio plays a monster in defencemode, which is destroyed and he is left with 200 lifepoints.

 

Mysterio – 200

Quartoldon 1 – 4000

Quartoldon 2 – 4000

Quartoldon 3 – 4000

Quartoldon 4 – 4000

Quartoldon 5 – 4000

 

In the cab in which Lean and his friends are, they are talking about the upcoming USA Tournament. One of the friends of Lean, called Jen, says she has the weird feeling they are being followed. She is quiet right as two fighter-helicopters appear above them. They are being attacked and Lean and Jen try to get out unharmed. However, their friends are not as safe as they are. They are still in the burning wreckage. Lean`s armcomputer tells him these are Quartol – Aglache HX2 Copters, monstercards but how can they be real. A group of Quartoldon`s appear from the Aglache`s. They knock down Lean and Jen and they disappear, leaving the wreckage behind.

 

In the meantime, Mysterio is still battling the five Quartoldon`s and he is far from ok. He has 200 lifepoints left and no chance of playing defence-monsters with Bomb under Defence activated. He draws, saying it is his turn and he plays Core-Defence. The Quartoldon`s are surprised. Mysterio says that`s not all. They defeated his Core-Guardian – Besque (800/2000). They should never have done that, now he can summon his Core-Guardian – Tevez (2500/2000). Tevez easily strikes down all the Shield Bearer`s and reducing each Quartoldon with half of Tevez`s attack (5x 2750). Then Tevez can gain 500 attack – and defencepoints, because he destroyed five monsters (3000/2500) and then attack again directly reducing each Quartoldon back to holograms.

 

Mysterio – 200

Quartoldon 1 – 0

Quartoldon 2 – 0

Quartoldon 3 – 0

Quartoldon 4 – 0

Quartoldon 5 – 0

 

He says they should not have encountered him, he knows now for sure, project “Ecalypto” has been activated again. Then a droid comes in showing him a message from the man we saw earlier behind the screens. He says he now sees the lost champion has arisen again. Mysterio says that is a life he gave up a long time ago. The man asks him to join him. Mysterio tells him he knows what the man is wanting to do and he will do everything he can to stop him. The man says he didn’t expect anything else. The droid selfdestructs and Mysterio leaves the scene. Some later Graem appears back in the control room. He puts something back in the vault and sees the collonne of hummers and limousine has appeared.

 

Kamon and Sara get out of the limousine, watching over the giant building, seeing Graem appearing from it. Graem and Kamon greet eachother as old friends and Sara has a more businesslike relation with Graem, whose colleague informs Sara all the lodgings are in the Crestmore Hotel. Glenn requested them to be brought there, since they might be tired of the trip. Kamon thinks it might not be a bad idea for them to rest sometime so they can do the rest tomorrow. They all agree and set of to the hotel.

 

In the meantime Jen wakes up on a rooftop. The rooftop of the Crestmore Hotel! She looks around and sees she is been surrounded by a seal which keeps her from getting out. She still has her own dueldisc. Lean, however, is waking up in a dessert. He starts walking, not knowing where to go……

[SebastiaanZ]

And chapter 5

 

Chapter 5 “Double Duel! Cyber`s and Heroes vs Undead and Shadows! (1)”

 

Kamon and Sara are relaxing at the hotel. Sara is checking the website of McFlinn and tells Kamon some company is buying stock on McFlinn. However Kamon is sleeping. Then Sara gets a phonecall from the police department of Hisehade City that the cab in which Lean and his friends were, was found destroyed, with bodies of a couple of people in it. They all live, but three out of five are in critical condition and they know two other were there, but they were gone. Sara thinks about waking up Kamon, but then sees he is sleeping quietly. She thanks the police officer that warned her. She decides to go for a walk.

 

In the meantime, Kamon can’t sleep. He is dreaming that he is running from a shadow who is following him. The shadow summons two giant monsters, whose immense power follows Kamon. Kamon however is able to summon the Mega-Eternal-Seadragon, his protector. The levels of power of those two monsters are equel. Kamon jumps on his dragon and flies away, but the shadow creates a third monster, a dragonlike creature and follows him. The shadow laughs at him, telling Kamon can’t escape, he will always be with him, if he wants it or not. Kamon`s Seadragon and the dragon of the shadow fire at the same time a blast.

 

Lean is still walking around, wondering where the heck he is. He is lucky he has his deck and dueldisc with him, but he wonders where he is. Then suddenly he hears something and turns around to see a little pretty girl watching him. He asks whether she knows how to get out of here. She says no, but her mother might know. Lean has no choice and agrees to come with here. He arrives in the girl`s tribe and sees people he recognises as amazons. But they all look like Amazon Archers, the card. He asks whether there are also men in the tribe. The girl laughs and says no, only men as slaves. The girl transforms into a witch and summons forth two Flare-Salamander`s (each 1500/800). Their fires makes sure that Lean can’t use his own deck to protect him. Not even the spirit`s of Leanbroww or Zen-Aku can reach him now. The witch tells him he can scream but no-one will hear him.

 

Sara returns from a short walk when the gardiner of the hotel tells her someone is waiting on top of the roof of the hotel. Thinking it is Kamon, Sara goes up to the roof. The eyes of the gardiner flash from light blue to red and back again. She arrives at the rooftop and finds Jen, which she recognises as one of the friends of Lean. She asks whether everything is ok. Jen said she shouldn’t have come, it is a trap. Two man come from behind the little storage on the roof and says she was absolutely right, it is a trap. For Sara and Jen both! They reveal to have dueldisc`s and decks so the only way this will be settled will be through a duel. They say if they win, they can do anything they want with the ladies. Sara agrees and tells them if the ladies win, they are free to go. The men agree. It will be a double duel. When one of the teams lose the duel is over and the other team is the victor. The ladies agree. Sara reveals she has a dueldisc and a deck as well. The two men say they are Cadice and Sean. Let`s duel!

 

Cadice – 4000

Sean – 4000

 

Sara – 4000

Jen – 4000

 

In the meantime is Kamon sleeping. In his dream he is still been hunted by the shadow. He lands in a forest and the shadow flies over, not seeing Kamon who is in the forest. He recalls the Mega-Eternal-Seadragon and goes on, when he sees something moving in the trees. Those are Armed Ninja`s. Summoning his Des Dondagalf again, he defeats them one by one. He starts to get dizzy and falls down, being broken and tired.

 

Sara and Jen look terrified as Cadice says he will start the duel. Cadice draws out an extra card and summons his Ninja-Spear (0/1000) in defencemode. This allows him to summon a Dark-Ninja (100/100) in defencemode. Then he sets one card facedown and activates the fieldmagiccard Dark-Dimension of Power. His Dark-Ninja gains 500 attackpoints and can attack directly now. So he does and strikes Jen (3400). Ninja-Spear (500/1500) can attack now directly as well and lowers Jen`s lifepoints to 2900. He ends his turn and now Jen can go. She draws her sixth card and activates the magiccard Gift of a Hero. She summons Time-Hero Vanguard (1300/1200) in defencemode. Then she sets a card facedown and ends her turn. Sean plays his magiccard Swords of Revealing Light and his Skull-Dagger-Knight (1000/1000) in attackmode. Then he plays the magiccard Undead Magic Revival, which allows him to bring back one magiccard when it is send to the graveyard. He secures the stay of Swords of Revealing Light with this. Further he can deal 300 lifepoints worth of damage because of his Skull-Dagger-Knight and the level of Skull-Dagger-Knight raises to 1300/1000 and then to 1800/1500 (because of Dark-Dimension of Power). So Jen`s lifepoints drop to 2600 and Sara`s lifepoints to 3700. Sara goes ahead with her turn and plays the magiccard Cyber-Base. She then summons her Cyber-Turtle (1300/2000) in defencemode. She says because of Cyber-Base she can summon a 5-star monster directly. Further because of the effect of Cyber-Turtle she can remove a card from the game and gain 500 lifepoints (4200). A second effect allows Sara to pay 1000 lifepoints (3200) and summon another cyber-monster to the field, so she summon Cyber-Cyclops (1200/1000). According to it`s effect, Sara can destroy one card in each of the hands of all players. So she destroys Jen`s Time-Hero Jetborg (2200/2000), Cadice`s Polymerization and Sean`s Dark Shadow-Master (1000/2000).

 

Cadice – 4000

Sean – 4000

 

Sara – 3200

Jen – 2600

 

Kamon is still heavely breathing in his sleep, but wakes up. He gets up and sees Sara is gone. However, when he opens the door, he sees a long hallway. He asks himself how that can happen and goes on. Suddenly out of nowhere, three small droids appear. Kamon recognises them as K7 Des Scizzors (1000/1000). He tries to draw a card from his deck, but he is to tired. He gets taken by those Des Scizzors` and Kamon asks himself whether this is possible in a dream. This is more like a nightmare. Then suddenly all out of nothing, a mysterious woman appears. She draws a sword and destroys all three the Des Scizzors. Before Kamon can reach out to her, she tells him he is one of the chosen ones to stop Ecalypto from happening. Kamon asks what Ecalypto is. The woman disappears and Kamon starts walking through the hallway.

 

Cadice says he’ll use his magiccard Shadow-Ninja Armour to unite his Ninja-Spear and Dark-Ninja to Dark-Ninja - Spear Soldier (2000/1800, now 2500/2300). Then he’ll use his Double-Shadow magiccard to unite his Shadow-Flare (100/300) with Dark-Ninja – Spear Soldier to Dark-Flare – Spear Ninja (2600/2200, now 3100/2700). He attacks T-Hero Vanguard, but Jen activates his special ability to increase his attack and defence by the difference in lifepoints (1300/1200 + 1400 = 2700/2600). Dark-Flare – Spear Ninja attacks and leaves Jen with 2200 lifepoints. Sara says she’ll take care of the problem and uses Cyber-Cyclops` other special ability to pay 600 lifepoints (2600) and bring back T-Hero Jetborg (2200/2000). Jen thanks her and Sara tells her no problem. Jen draws a card and plays Time-Hero Quantumfrog (1400/1200). Then she plays Fusion-Gate and fuses her Quantumfrog and Jetborg to Time-Hero Quanjetfrog (1800/1600). She plays out it`s special ability to deal 900 lifepoints of damage to both players (Cadice = 3100/Sean = 3100). Quanjetfrog, Cyber-Cyclops and Cyber-Turtle are all destroyed by the Dark-Dimension of Power. This gives both Cadice and Sean 750 lifepoints (Cadice = 3850/Sean = 3850). Sean plays his magiccard Burning Crystal, summoning two Zombie Crystal Token`s (0/0 each, now 500/500). He summons Glandalan (1200/800). Then he decides to play a magiccard called Zombie-Fear, which in turn activates Glandalan`s special ability, to add 300 attack – and defencepoints to him (1500/1100). He then ends his turn. Although he wants to defeat them, he fights with honour. They can’t attack with Swords of Revealing Light. Then it is Sara`s turn and she plays the mighty Cyber-Dragon (2100/1500). And she has another in her hand, she needs one more to form the ultimate Cyber-End-Dragon!

 

Cadice – 3850

Sean – 3850

 

Sara – 2600

Jen - 2200

 

In the meantime is Lean captured in the tribe and two Hell-Dog`s (each 1200/1000) are guarding him. The witch says she is Pamadala. She is an apprentice of the mighty Gaianadon. She was told that he would come. She was told to sacrifise him in order to give him the power of the Devil. Lean says his friends will find him. Pamadala tells him not to count on them. She shows him images of Lean`s friends inside an hospital and the grave of Jen (although we know better). He could also join them and fight for a better world. Lean says never, never will he join her. Pamadala says he will be sacrifised in 4 hours then.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 4:00:00 hours

[aztex]

Took me long enough to read but I haven't yet finish. So, keep up posting! I'd like to see more.

[Umbra]

In Chapter One, Lean has 4 Skull Servants. I thought three was the maximum limit for any card.

[SebastiaanZ]

That`s true, Umbra, but at that moment I had forgotten it for a moment. And Lean did not really play by the rules anyway.

[SebastiaanZ]

Chapter 6 is up!

 

Chapter 6 “The Zombie-Lord! Battle to survive! (2)”

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 3:58:30 hours

 

Lean is still been kept in a cage, he has less then 4 hours before he is going to be sacrifised for. Two Hell-Dog`s are patrolling outside his cage. He sees his dueldisc and deck (which is on his belt) lying somewhere near. Only if he could reach for it. he tries to, but his arm gets almost bitten by one of the Hell-Dog`s. However a little girl sees him reaching for his dueldisc and belt and she stares at Lean. He signals that she should take his dueldisc. The girl watches around, seeing no-one and gets the dueldisc. He tells her to get his belt as well, but the girl doesn’t understand him. He tries to point to the belt and she nods, going forward and getting his belt. Then five soldiers arrive (in the form of five Metal-Guardians (each 1500/2000). The girl gets taken away and the boss of the Metal-Guardian`s, a Witty Phantom (1000/800). The Witte Phantom says he has nothing on his dueldisc so without a deck he can’t destroy the monsters, walking around. However the girl shows up and runs past, unlocking the cage without being seen by the Witty Phantom. She runs on and the Metal-Guardian`s release small spikeball`s called Mecha Spike`s (each 400/300). However when Witty Phantom and his troops has their attention on the girl, Lean breaks free from the cage, snatches his belt and summons his Leanbird (1400/1200). He goes airborne and Leanbird`s steel-scratch defeats many Mecha-Spike`s. Then suddenly a cannonball hits Leanbird. It is one of the Dark-Cannon`s (each 1500/1000). Shocked, Lean falls down and sees how his lifepointcounter activate and drop to 3900. He sees helplessly how the girl is taken by the Metal-Guardian`s and vows to rescue her.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 3:42:32 hours

Lean – 3900

 

Sara has Cyber-Dragon (2100/1500) in attackmode, one card facedown and 2600 lifepoints, Jen has no monsters on the field and one card facedown. Cadice has Dark-Flare – Ninja Soldier (3100/2700) and Dark-Dimension of Power activated and a card facedown. Sean has Skull-Dagger-Knight (1800/1500), two Zombie Crystal Token`s (each 500/500) and Glandalan (1500/1100, now 2000/1600) on the field. Sara says it is still her turn, so she plays Pot of Greed. Then she plays Pot of the Heated Heart, summoning Cyber-Cobra (1800/1000) in defencemode. Further she can draw two cards and play them immidietly. She plays Connect-Fusion and Total Evolution Burst. Connect-Fusion makes Sara discarding the Cyber-Dragon`s on her field and in her hand and summon the Cyber-End-Dragon (4000/2800). Then for the Total Evolution Burst she needs a Cyber-Dragon in her graveyard, but she can evolve her Cyber-Cobra into the Cyber-King Cobra (2200/2400). It`s special effect allows him to drain 500 lifepoints of Cadice and Sean (both 3500). Then Cyber-End-Dragon makes an end on the Skull-Dagger-Knight, but Sean activates the magiccard Ring of Magnetism, draining the attack at Glandalan (Sean = 1500). Then he can draw a card. That allows Jen to summon her T-Hero Gladiatoguy (1100/1000). Jen activates it`s special ability to leave 400 (1800) lifepoints and discard Gladiatoguy into the graveyard to destroy all magiccards on the field, including the Dark-Dimension of Power. Sean says Dark-Dimension of Power was just a way to open the way for his newest tactic…………

 

Cadice – 3500

Sean – 1500

 

Sara – 2600

Jen – 1800

 

Kamon, in the meantime is still walking through the hallway and suddenly he jumps out of a window, falling and falling. He sees he is falling on a street, but then suddenly something catches him, a Poison Mantis (1400/1100). He scratches Kamon and Kamon gets hurt. The Poison Mantis lands and Kamon is being surrounded by Rock-Soldier`s (1300/1000). Kamon activates his dueldisc again and summons Des Dondagalf (2200/2000), taking down all the Rock-Soldier`s and he waits in front of the Poison Mantis. However, Poison Mantis attacks Kamon again and Kamon gets more hurt. Then the Rock-Soldier`s come together and form a formation, transforming into the big Rock-Giant (2500/2000). It easely destroys Des Dondagalf and before Kamon can summon his new monster, he is taken by a new army of Rock-Soldier`s. He is helpless, until a shadow appears on a rooftop……

 

Countdown to sacrifise: 3:28:43 hours

Lean – 3900

 

Lean hides behind a barrel and then suddenly the barrel explodes. It appeared to be a Hidden Miner (200/300). He flies back against the wall and his lifepoints drop to 3700. Three Skull-Knight #2 (1200/1000) notice him and close into him, but he is able to summon his Rocket-Racer (1500/1200) and defeats all of them. He tells his Rocket-Racer to follow him in the air, which his Rocket-Racer does. He gets near a hut, in which he hears screams of the girl. He sends out Leanbroww and attacks the door, getting in and destroying the three guards, three Paleon-Knight`s (each 1800/1000) which were torturing the girl. Then he hears a scream and the rests of Rocket-Racer falls down. He grabs his heart and sees how his lifepoints drop to 3200. Two Panther-Warriors arrive, attacking both the girl and Lean. Lean dodges the attacks, but the girl got scratched and hurt. Lean and the girl get out of the hut. The Panther-Warrior`s can’t find them, but when they have left, Lean and the girl come into appearance, been protected by Lean`s Mirrorillusio (0/0). Lean asks where the exit of the tribe is. The girl says at the other end of the village. An arrow hits Mirrorillusio and it is destroyed. Lean`s lifepoints drop to 2800. Lean sees how a shadow disappears between huts, but he is to slow to get it in time. He decides it is best to try and get out of this tribe as soon as possible.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 3:10:23

Lean – 2800

 

Sean says his reign has just started and activates the fieldmagiccard Fortress of the Forbidden Lord. He removes every monster from play and then in his graveyard from play to summon his Urqua the Zombie-Lord (?/?). He has five monsters now in the graveyard, so the attack and defence of Urqua raise to 5000. Then he attacks Jen directly, lowering her lifepoints to 0, if she didn’t activate three cards. She first played Monster-Reborn to bring back T-Hero Quanjetfrog (1800/1600), then she uses Megamorph to raise it`s level to 3600/3200 and then she activates the trapcard Painfull Move. Her lifepoints drop to 0, but the level of Quanjetfrog gets added to Sara`s lifepoints (2600 + 3600 = 6200). She is thrown out of the duel and looks at the sidelines to the rest of the duel, while she can’t move. Then Urqua moves his attention to Cyber-End-Dragon, destroying it (5200). Sara is trying to call out for Jen, but Jen can’t move. She has to go on and plays Crash Spell. She pays another 1000 lifepoints to use the card Jen just used and plays Monster Reborn. She brings back Cyber-Turtle (1300/2000). Then she plays Refuse. She first moves her Turtle and her new Cyber-Tank into the graveyard and then summons Cyber-Turtank (2400/2200), the fusion between Turtle and Tank. Cyber-Turtank has the ability to destroy any monster on the field, without having to take account for the levels. So Sara declares to use it on Urqua, but Sean says it is impossible to destroy Urqua with card-effects. However Sara declares to remove Dark-Flare – Ninja Soldier. Then she plays the equipment-magiccard Cyber Weapon – Heavy Artillery Cannon. She attacks directly, which she is able to because of her equipment-magiccard. But Sean declares the activation of a trapcard called Disturbed Ritual. He can redirect the attack to any target he wants. However, he does not choose Sara but Cadice. Cadice`s lifepoints drop to 0. Cadice is taken by shadows. He says Sean promised him they would do it together. Sean says he is merely a way to get to their ultimate purpose. So is he, but he’ll stay here to complete it. Sara watches in horror as Cadice is taken by the shadows and disappears. She knows something the same will happen to her if she doesn’t defeat Sean.

 

Sean – 3500

Cadice – 0

 

Sara – 4200

Jen – 0

 

In the meantime, Kamon is still in trouble against the Rock-Soldier`s. But the shadow jumps down and summons Core-Guardian Avaladge (1800/2000). It is Mysterio! Avaladge easely takes care of the Rock-Soldier`s. Mysterio tells Kamon to wake up from this bad dream. Kamon wants to thank Mysterio, but he already loses consciousness and wakes up in his bad. Wanting to make sure, he is back in the real world, he opens the door of his room and sees the normal hallway behind it. He catches for some breath, but then notices the scratches on his arms. It was a dream, but everything that happened was real. Then he notices Sara is gone. He goes asking and a liftboy tells him Sara went to the roof. He gets up there as well and then notices a lot of activity. He thinks Sara is in danger and walks faster. He arrives at the moment that Cadice is taken by the shadows. He wants to activate his dueldisc, but shadows keeps him from doing so. Sean removes three monsters from play in the meantime, raising Urqua`s attack and defence to 8000/8000. Urqua then attacks Cyber-Turtank, delivering a blow of 5600 lifepoints to Sara. Her lifepoints drop to 0 and there is nothing Kamon can do, cause he can’t move…………

To be continued…………

[SebastiaanZ]

And chapter 7!

 

Chapter 7 “Dark Magic Duel! Lean`s only way out!”

 

Kamon watches in horror as Sara gets the full blow of 5600 lifepoints and her lifepoints drop to 0. She falls on the ground and Sean deactivates the dueldisc, but Urqua stays on the field. Kamon`s dark side gets the upperhand on Kamon again and runs at Sean. Sean simply dodges Kamon`s blow. He says there is nothing Kamon can do, the girls are coming with him. Kamon says no, they won’t. Sean says he is afraid they don’t have a lot of choice. Kamon challenges him into another duel. His deck in his dueldisc is glowing with black energy. Sean says no, he got where he came for. He watches Urqua and tells him to take the girls with him, they are done here. Urqua takes Sara in the left hand and Jen in the right hand and dives through the rooftop of the hotel, with Sean on his shoulder. Kamon runs downstairs, asking anyone whether they saw a giant monster, breaking through ceilings and everything. No-one has seen it. Then a hummer stops in front of the hotel and Graem appears from it, together with a cloaked man. Graem says he needs to talk to Kamon now.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 3:03:32 hours

Lean – 2800

 

Lean and the girl gets through the first huts unnoticed. Then they are seen by a man and a woman. The girl says these are her parents. She asks them please not to tell anything to the army of Pamadala. They say it is there duty to. The girl pleads them not to, but the father tells her, if she isn’t with them, then she is against them. He sounds the alarm and draws out a gunlike dueldisc. Before he can summon anything Lean has already two Snake-Warder`s (each 2000/0) out and kills him. He tells the girl he had no choice. They would have been betrayed. The girl says they are not her parents anymore. The mother pleads her to stay with them, but the girl says no, she won’t. The mother asks her and reveals her real name, Lainna, to stay, she is scared. Some later, three Coralishu`s (each 1200/1000) come in. Their duty is to find Lean and Lainna and eventually kill Lainna. Their spit can draw 200 lifepoints per turn from each duellist, so Lean`s lifepoints are lowered to 2200. He draws out Zen-Aku who immidietly jumps to action (level raises to 2200/2200) and destroys each Coralishu. However when they want to leave, Zen-Aku is destroyed by some slime. It is a giant slimy rocksnake called Slimenix (2500/2200) and it lowers Lean`s lifepoints to 1900. It poisons the mother of Lainna. Lainna takes her with her as Lean uses Trap-Hole to destroy Slimenix. Lean comes up with the plan to use the medic`s from the Amazon Curer (1500/1200) to cure Lainna`s mother to full health. They run of, finding out the exit is not far away, but the Amazon Curer`s hut is the other way again. They must get through a cave and they have no choice but to take Lainna`s mother with them.

 

In the cave, Lean tells Lainna to be ready for anything. At every corner, there might be danger. And he only has 1900 lifepoints left and he does not want to know what happens when his lifepoints drop to 0. They come past a few stone statues and Lean watches them suspiciously. Lainna says she is scared. Lean says not to worry. He is quiet tired, since he fought his way through the tribe and now he has to carry the mother of Lainna. Then a flock of Dark-Bats attack Lean and the others. Lainna raises her hand and a silver armoured soldier appears in front of her. Lainna is scared. She didn’t know she could do this. The silver soldier says he is Zilver, Guardian of Heaven. He disappears again and the bats are destroyed. They move on and suddenly something big comes past them, hitting Lean and lowering his lifepoints to 1100. Lean gets up and they walk towards a light in the tunnel. It is the end, but not the anticipated end. They arrive back in front of the same exit of the tribe. This time a cat is watching them. Lean says this is not good, someone must have noticed them. From the sand five Temple-Guardian`s (each 100/1000) appear and they attack Lean. Since he can’t protect himself against the attacks of the Temple-Guardian`s, he gets hit furiously. His lifepoints drop to 600. The Temple-Guardian`s retreat and Lean, Lainna and her mother try to get out of the tribe, but the cat appears in front of them. The cat transforms back into Pamadala. Pamadala says the mother has barely 20 minutes to live. Lean can duel her and if he wins he will get total freedom and a cure for the mother. If he loses, he will be still a sacrifise and so will be Lainna. The mother will die then. Lean agrees to do so. Pamadala says he must battle with only 600 lifepoints and the deck he has left from the battles in the tribe. Lean agrees to do so. Pamadala uses magic to create a dueldisc on her arm. Lean draws five cards and so does she.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 2:49:22 hours

Mother`s time to live: 20 minutes

Lean – 600

Pamadala – 4000

 

Kamon leads Graem and the cloaked man to his room. Graem says security has been monitoring the situation on the roof very carefully. A high intensity of energy was there on the roof. The cloaked man says it is a mysterie, but it might have something to do with an project from years ago. A very destructive project. It was stopped by 7 duellists. There were kidnappings of duellists, but in the end the 7 succeeded in defeating the bosses. One of the leaders of the company was Duskin Calmay. A second-rated duellist who never got into the World-Series. The cloaked man says in order to stop the things that have been set into progress, seven powerfull duellists needs to be assembled. Weird, as the evil will choose the seven. However it is clear that the first one has been chosen and in order to take him out, they choose to destroy his friends in a different dimension. Kamon concludes that that duellist is him. Graem agrees. So the evil kidnapped Sara, Jen and Lean to get him into a different dimension as well. Graem says that is not entirely clear. Kamon says he must go after them to free them, wherever they are. Graem says he agrees. The cloaked man says he doesn’t. Kamon must prepare to face evil in this world, his friends will be casualties and that is a risk Kamon must take. No, Kamon says, his friends will stand beside him as he faces evil. Graem watches his pda and sees that the cloaked man has to leave. The cloaked man tells Kamon to prepare. Kamon sees how the Hummer with the cloaked man disappears and asks Graem what to do. Graem says he has looked into the archives and noticed that the location`s of the Dimensional Gate is near the Lakwada Wearhouse. They should find it in order to save Kamon`s friends. Kamon agrees and they set of.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 2:44:22 hours

Mother`s time to live: 15 minutes

Lean – 600

Pamadala – 4000

 

Lean is just about to get onto the field and so does Pamadala. Lean tells Pamadala to go ahead. Pamadala draws an extra card and plays Witch Ring. This allows her to play any level-6 or lower monster on the field. She plays Dark-Magician Girl (2000/1700). Then she normal summons Magician`s Valkyria (1500/1000) and ends her turn. Lainna asks Lean to win, since her mother is growing weaker and weaker every minute. Lean promises he will win. He plays first Seal of Divinity to discard 4 magiccards in his graveyard. Then he plays Soul of Purity to get them back and play them on the field. Then he activates Emergency Provisions, but Pamadala plays the quickplay magiccard Destruction of Hope destroying the card and leaving Lean with 600 lifepoints. Lean sets a card, hoping she will fall for the trap. Pamadala starts her turn by playing one card facedown and the magiccard Bow of the Mage. She destroys the facedown card, Mirror-Force. Then she plays the fieldmagiccard Magician`s Academy. This takes down the level of any spellcaster by 1 levelstar and then draw two cards. So she summons Silent Magician lv.0 (500/500). Then she activates the last magiccard Sage`s Ceremony, levelling up her Silent Magician to level 2 (1500/1500). The last effect of Sage`s Ceremony allows her to attack directly in one attack with all her spellcaster-monsters, lowering Lean`s lifepoints to 0. Lean falls on the ground.

 

Pamadala lets her dueldisc vanish and says he was never strong enough to beat her. She was to practiced and he was to tired. Now the mom will die and both Lean and Lainna will serve as sacrifises……

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 2:38:22 hours

Mother`s time to live: 9 minutes

 

Graem says he pinpointed the exact location. It is a hidden basement under the warehouse. Kamon says that`s where they’ll go then. Graem says it is five minutes on walking distance. Kamon tells him let`s go. They go out of the hotel and Graem checks his PDA. What they don’t know is that a scorpion is watching their steps. It has a camera attached to it.

 

The man in the controllroom with all the screens watches the two moving on. He says it was not really planned to have those two come together. But it doesn’t matter. He will separate them and destroy them no matter what. He presses a switch and a duellist in front of a glowing gate appears on one of his screens. He addresses the duellist as Glover and tells him Glover should be ready to separate them. Glover says he is ready to duel them. The man tells him to make no mistake.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 2:35:22 hours

Mother`s time to live: 6 minutes

 

To be continued………

[SebastiaanZ]

Well here is chapter 8

 

Chapter 8 "Gateway to Sara and Jen! Elements decent"

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 2:35:22 hours

Mother`s time to live: 6 minutes

 

Lean and Lainna are been brought into a secured hut, with enough protection to make sure Lean, Lainna and the dying mother won’t get out. Lainna says Lean should have protected her and her mother better. Lean says he was overpowered by the force of Pamadala`s deck. Pamadala wasn’t a normal duellist, she was a real magician. Lainna says she will never forgive Lean if her mother dies. Lean says there is nothing he can do. He can’t get out and there is no way he can contact the Amazon Curer and even then it is the question whether the Amazon Curer will save her. It doesn’t really matter for the tribe whether the mother dies or survive. It matters to Lainna and Lainna should believe him, if there was anything he could do then he would, but he can’t. The mother wispers weakly to Lainna that it is ok. It is true that Lean can’t do a thing about it. The hut is to heavely protected. And Lean is right, the Amazon Curer probably will not help them. Lainna says she is going to let her mother die. She breaks down in tears. She goes and shouts against the guards to let the Amazon Curer come and cure her mother. They should do that, she was part of the tribe. The mother says it does not matter, she will die. Lainna breaks down and Lean tries to comfort her. The mother tells Lainna there is a legend that 7 duellists will save the world and fight evil. One has been found, only six must be found. She says not to worry, there will always be a second one. The mother starts to breath harder and harder and her pulse is getting weaker with the minute. Lainna says she cannot let her mother die, she just can’t. She says she loves her mother whatever had happened the past year. The mother says save the world and yes, she has always loved her daughter and she will always do. Now Lainna will have to let her go. She closes her eyes and Lainna completely breaks down in tears. Lean tries to comfort her, but she pushes him away. She tells him he can be sacrifised, she doesn’t care anymore. She shouldn’t have helped him.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 2:28:47 hours (silenced clock)

 

Kamon and Graem follows the route the PDA describes to them and the scorpion is following their steps. Kamon says he has the weird feeling they are being followed. Graem says they can’t retreat now back to the hotel. They cannot double-check the route. Kamon agrees. They need a cover to get into the warehouse. Graem says he already made a cover. He called them, telling someone from the McFlinn company will come to retrieve some stuff from the basement. He gives Kamon a pass he created. They arrive at the front desk, telling they are from the McFlinn company. The woman behind the desk acknowledges it and they are getting free passage. One of the security people comes to the woman and asks why they were going down there. The woman says they needed to pick up some stuff. The security member gets a cellphone and calls someone telling them the two are arriving in the basement. The voice at the other side says good, let them come.

 

In the basement, Kamon and Graem are looking for the gate to the dimension. Then one of the security members approach them and asks whether they look for something. Graem says that`s none of his business. The member says it is, otherwise he will have to take them into custody. Graem asks him whether there are more basementfloors. The guard says yes. Two more. One is out of bounds and the other is full of wreckages. Graem tells him he wants access to the lowest. The security guard says no, no-one outside people from the warehouse are allowed on that floor. Graem says then they will force their way in. At that moment the guard gets called by his boss, who tells him those two are allowed to come down. The guard agrees and leads them down to the most lowest basement. There he leaves them, locking the door. Graem says it doesn’t matter, they need to find that portal. Then in the back a portal opens and Graem runs to it. When he almost reaches it, he is trapped in a circle of light. From behind some boxes Glover comes, saying they always carelessly come running down. Last time the portal was opened was because he had brought some girls through the portal. Graem demands to know what happened to them. Glover says nothing, they were only brought to a different dimension. Glover says but they won’t. Graem tells him they will go to the different dimension. Glover says they need to get past him in a duel. Graem says so be it. Kamon tells he will do it. No, Graem says, this is something he can handle on his own. Glover says Kamon can’t get in the circle anyway so Graem has no choice. Graem tells Glover to bring it on.

 

Graem – 4000

Glover – 4000

 

Glover says he was the challenger so he allows Graem to start the duel. Graem says so be it and draws an extra card. He plays Polymerization and fuses E-Hero Featherman (1000/1000) and E-Hero Burst Lady (1200/800) to E-Hero Flame-Wingman (2100/1200). Then he plays one card facedown and ends his turn. Glover starts his turn by drawing one card and plays Dark-Scorpion Stinger. This allows him to summon a level-5 or higher scorpion-monster on the field. He summons Scorpianox (2300/2000) and equips it with Scorp Stinger-Drill. Scorpianox (2600/2300) destroys the facedown card of Graem. Graem says it has just begun. Glover says he cannot attack the first turn Scorpianox is summoned. Graem draws a card and plays Pot of Greed. He draws two more and then plays the magiccard Foolish Fusion. Discarding two cards, he can bring back Polymerization. Then he can draw one card. Graem does so and plays Polymerization again to fuse E-Hero Bubbleman (800/1200) with E-Hero Gunman (1000/1200) to E-Hero Bubblegumman (2000/2200). Then he plays the magiccard Bubble-Sniper and destroys the Scorp Stinger-Drill. Then he switches Scorpianox to defencemode and ends his turn. Kamon thinks this is going well.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 2:12:43 hours

Graem – 4000

Glover – 4000

 

Glover activates the magiccard Stinger-Circle. He switches Scorpianox to attackmode and destroys Bubblegumman (3700). This allows Graem to draw one magiccard from his deck. Then Glover activates the trapcard Hunting-Stinger. It allows him to bring back Scorpianox at half power ( 1150/1000) and summon a new level-4 or lower monster on the field. So he summons Scorpmech Thundertail (1400/1000). Then he plays Frontline Base. He summons another Scorpmech, Scorpmech Raider`s Fist (1400/1200). Then he can unite them with Scorpianox to Scorpthunianox Fist (2800/2600). It has the ability to destroy everything on the field, which he does, not including himself. Graem is impressed first, but then summons E-Hero Metaldon (1600/1800) in defencemode. Glover says he can activate a magiccard due to Scorpthunianox Fist`s second ability and he activates Fissure. However E-Hero Metaldon still stands. Glover is angry with Graem, accusing him of cheating. Graem says he never cheated, he just activated the ability of Metaldon, not to be destroyed by any magic – or trapcards or effects of monsters. He sets one card and activates Card of Sanctity. They both draw until they have six cards. Then Graem removes his E-Hero Soulman (1000/1200) from play and he draws out one card from his deck. He then ends his turn.

 

Glover says it was a huge mistake to leave Metaldon unprotected. Now he can defeat it and lower Graem`s lifepoints. Graem tells him to go on then. Kamon thinks Graem is a bit to confident. Graem tells him to have confidence in him. Kamon says he will always have, but this doesn’t look good. He summons one monster in defencemode and attacks with Scorpthunianox Fist, destroying E-Hero Metaldon. Graem (2500) says he is a fool, now he plays the magiccard Grave-Fusion, fusing the E-Hero Metaldon and E-Hero Flame-Wingman in the graveyard to E-Hero Metal-Wingman (2600/2200). Scorpthunianox Fist`s special ability once again activates and wants to destroy Metal-Wingman, but does not succeed. Metal-Wingman cannot be harmed in any way (through effects and attacks) by monster who are less then 500 points stronger then him. Then he plays Skycraper, increasing the attack of Metal-Wingman to 3600. It attacks the facedown monster, which is a Egg of Scorp (0/0). According to the second effect of Metal-Wingman, it can deliver the difference of attack of Metal-Wingman and the defence of Egg of Scorp to Glover`s lifepoints (400). Glover says it is not over yet. He summons Dark Scorpion Lord – Scorpendio (3400/3000). It can destroy any monster without activating the effect of it. So he destroys Metal-Wingman. Glover ends his turn quickly and Graem says he shouldn’t have done that, ending his turn so soon. Graem plays O-Over Soul and revives E-Hero Metaldon from the graveyard. He then plays his other card from his hand, E-Hero Starman (1200/1400) and then plays the magiccard Redouble. He brings back E-Hero Gunman and a magiccard and fuses the three heroes to E-Hero Starsavior (2800/1600). It`s level raises due Skyscraper to 3800 and attacks Scorpendio, leaving Glover with 0 lifepoints. Graem deactivates his dueldisc but Starsavior stays (because of the Circle of Light)

 

Graem and Starsavior walk towards Glover and Graem demands to know what happens if they cross to the other dimension. Glover says they will come somewhere, he doesn’t know. Their friends are there but he doesn’t know where. Kamon says they will go no matter what. Glover asks him whether he doesn’t care about his other friend. Kamon asks which other friend? That boy who duelled him on the boat. Kamon asks whether they caught Lean. Glover nods. Kamon grunds and says they will find him in that dimension as well. Glover says he wasn’t saying Lean was in the same dimension as the girls. Lean is captured in a different dimension. At that moment shadows come to take Glover. Glover screams and Graem tries to help him, but the shadows take him with him into a dark place. Graem says that is the Underworld, the place where all souls of duellists resides when they are defeated. Graem tells Kamon they must split up. Graem will go and save Jen and Sara and Kamon must go and save Lean. Kamon reluctantly agrees. Graem says he knows Kamon doesn’t really like Lean, but they can’t leave him there. Kamon says that wasn’t where he was thinking on. If he is the first of the seven, shouldn’t he be attacked more heavier then anyone else. Graem agrees it might be strange, but they don’t really have much more choice. They’ll have to do it with two. Kamon tells him to go, he will go as well. Graem gives him a small device, telling him they can have contact for one minute in different dimensions. Kamon thanks him, but asks whether he has another one. Graem asks why? Kamon says they can use some help. Graem says what person he has in mind? Kamon says an old friend who lives in the USA. He promised whenever Kamon would need his help, he would come and help out wherever he was needed. Graem says he trusts Kamon to do what he thinks must, so he will follow Kamon`s judgement. He says they’ll meet again soon and then they will have reached their purposes. Kamon agrees and Graem leaves through the portal. Kamon takes out his cellphone.

 

Somewhere else, just outside Hisehade City a cellphone goes of. A young man picks it answering it with the name Dragen. He listens to Kamon and tells him he is on his way. Of course will he help Kamon out.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 2:00:00 hours………

[SebastiaanZ]

And chapter 9

 

Chapter 9 “Decisive Monarch! Sean versus Kamon! (1)

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:58:23 hours

 

Lean is still weak but tries to comfort Lainna. Lainna tells him to get out, but Lean says he simply can’t. They are guarded to heavily. He says Lainna must trust him, whether he could he would have saved her mother from dying, but he couldn’t. And her mother told her that it was not him to blame, it was because of Pamadala. Pamadala caused the order to kill Lainna and the mother was hit by poison of a Snake-Warder. It was not his choice to use Snake-Warder`s. Lainna says he might be right. Lean and Lainna try to get some sleep, but then three Skull-Guardian`s come in, demanding Lean to go with them. Lean asks why. The captain of the Skull-Guardian`s says their master has some questions for him. He needs to answer them first before Lean is going to be sacrifised to Gaianadon. Lean tells them to leave Lainna here. The captain agrees because those are their orders and takes him with him.

 

In a fortress-like hutt, Pamadala sits on a throne. Next to her a flame is burning with eyes in it. the Skull-Guardian`s bring in Lean and the flame tells them to bind him. The Skull-Guardian`s does so and Pamadala tells them to leave them alone. The Skull-Guardian`s leave and Pamadala summons a Valkashock (800/800). Valkashock gives him a shock and Lean asks what Pamadala wants. Pamadala introduces him to the flame, called Gaianadon. Gaianadon says this is all part of a bigger plan to bring shadow onto the world of Lean. Lean says that is never going to happen. Valkashock gives him another shock and Pamadala says it is going to happen. Pamadala asks him what they already know. Lean says nothing, but Pamadala tells him not to lie, she knows they know something. One of their pawns has been defeated in a duel and the portal to the other dimension has told her that a man has gone through it. Lean says he knows nothing about an other dimension. Pamadala says it wouldn’t hurt to say that Lean`s friend Jen and Kamon`s friend Sara are being kept there. Lean says he still don’t where she is talking about. Gaianadon says to highten the voltage.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:49:38 hours

 

Kamon is going out of the warehouse and is called then on a payphone nearby. It is Sean, telling him to come to the abandoned warehouse in the city. He will be waiting there for Kamon. Kamon calls Dragen, telling him the location where he’ll be heading. Then he calls to the McFlinn company and asks a woman called Marcy to track an old record for him in the old Apoca-archives. Marcy does so and asks what Kamon wants. Kamon says there was a gate to the different dimension in an abandoned warehouse. He wants to know whether it is still there. Marcy tells him yes and asks him why. Kamon closes the line and says that`s where he’s heading.

 

In the meantime, Jen and Sara are hanging upsidedown over a volcano. Jen asks whether Sara knows if they will get out of here. Sara says she doesn’t. Jen tells her she still wants to be alive when she gets out of here. Sara calms her and says she will be alive. Jen says she will do everything just to sing again with her band. Sara asks if she is in a band. Yes, Jen says, the Grass Peppers. Sara says she heard of it. It is supposed to be good. Jen agrees, they have some number-1 hits back in Japan. Sara says she would love to hear some live. Jen happily agrees. Then a masked and robed man arrives from a portal and asks what the heck they are doing here. He didn’t think two girls could be a danger to him. A voice from the shadows tells him they are. It appears to be a muscular monster. Someone will probably try to save them. The robed and masked man tells him to make sure that doesn’t happen. He addresses the monster with upperlord. The monster agrees and says he’ll make his element-lords ready. He disappears.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:41:42

 

Graem is walking lonely through the desert. Then he suddenly sees a lake. He thinks he should get some water from there. He arrives there and a voice tells him not to touch the water. Graem asks the voice why not. The voice tells him it is cursed water. A wave appears, and a Wave-Garudan (1900/1200) appears. It attacks Graem, but Graem dodges it and fuses Metaldon, Starman and Gunman to E-Hero Starsavior and destroys Wave-Garudan. He thanks the voice and the voice tells him that he must hurry, the ladies are in danger. Graem agrees and asks where to go. The voice says him to go to the Water-Palace, the heart of the kingdom of water. Graem asks whether he will get clues there. The voice tells him he will. Graem reluctantly agrees and sets of in the direction the voice gives him.

 

Kamon arrives in front of the abandoned warehouse, telling Sean to come out and duel him. The big doors open and Kamon goes in, not seeing he is been followed by a group of Quartoldon`s. Kamon then goes over through a big hall and then three Quartol – Shield Bearer`s (0/2200) appears and Kamon instantly summons the Mega-Eternal-Seadragon, killing them. Then Sean comes from a hallway and says there is more at stake then just Kamon`s soul or body. He has hostages and their lifes will be depending on the outcome of this match. He shows a small cage with five kids in it. He has explosives on it and when someone`s lifepoints drop, in case of Sean the fire will not get brighter and in case of Kamon, the fire will get brighter and stronger and the switch will be pulled to the wrong side. If Kamon loses, the cage will explode and the kids will die. Kamon says he has no choice but to duel Sean. A wise choice, Sean tells him as they activate their dueldisc`s. Sean says he will win and Kamon says he will get revenge on Sean. Sean tells him that is the most bad thing he can do, it might allow the dark side of Kamon to get the overhand.

 

Sean – 4000

Kamon – 4000

 

Sean draws five cards and so does Kamon. Sean says Kamon may start. Kamon tells him he shouldn’t have done that. He plays Dreamsprite (500/500) in defencemode and two cards facedown and ends his turn. Sean plays Grave-Horsal the Battle-Maniac (1000/1000) and attacks Dreamsprite. Kamon says he is still safe from Grave-Horsal. No, says Sean, he can still deal the difference in attack and defence at Kamon (3500). However Kamon gains 500 lifepoints because Dreamsprite was destroyed (4000). Then Sean plays Dark-Greed, drawing three cards and destroys one card on Kamon`s side of the field, the card Assault Robo Cannon. Then he can quickplay the monster Sienasav (300/800) and attack directly (3700). Kamon asks him how he did that. Sean answers that Sienasav can be summoned directly to the field when he is drawn. Further he can gain 800 lifepoints per turn Sienasav is on the field (4800). Then he plays Swords of Revealing Light and ends his turn. Kamon plays a magiccard called Brave-Wanderer. He can summon one monster from his hand onto his field directly. However it must be a warrior. He summons Asaque from the Dark (1200/1800) in attackmode and activates his special ability to gain 1000 lifepoints per turn he is on the field without attacking (2200/1800). He cannot attack so he normal summons Glandalan (1200/800) in defencemode and ends his turn.

 

In the meantime, the man behind the computerscreens, sees how the Mercedes SLK from Dragen starts to near Kamon. He says to let Dragen come, but he cannot be brought to the duel of Sean and Kamon, then everything could be messed up. A group of Quartoldon`s on a screen agree and set out to find Dragen. He says he must start his attack as soon as the seven are in the other dimension, otherwise everything will be lost. The portals must be closed as soon as the last two get through. The Quartoldon`s agree. The man sees a van appearing in town with the words Grass Peppers on it. It is the band of Jen. He grins evilly and turns around again.

 

Sean – 4800

Kamon – 3700

 

Sean says he has that worthless card as well, that Glandalan. He gains another 800 lifepoints (5600) and says there is another special ability of Grave-Horsal, to drain 300 lifepoints per turn he is upside on his field from Kamon (3400). However since, Kamon`s Asaque is to strong, he’ll just summon a monster in defencemode. He plays Matchless General, a magiccard which raises Glandalan`s power by 300 to 1500/1100. Matchless General gives all of his monsters a powerboost of 400. It is a continous magiccard. Then he ends his turn and Kamon draws a card and says next turn the effect of Swords of Revealing Light will be over. Sean tells him not to count on it. Kamon plays Pot of Greed and Asaque grows bigger (3200/1800). Kamon plays Bowdorian (600/400) in attackmode. Kamon ends his turn and Sean plays the trapcard Release Chains of Darkness. He sacrifises all three the monster on the field to summon Gaialatha the Shadow-Monarch (2400/1000, now 2800/1400). It first of allows Sean to return all monster in defenceposition. Then he plays Longing Spell, which increases Glandalan`s power to 1800/1400. It keeps the Swords of Revealing Light forever until the duel has ended, or unless it is destroyed. Further he gains 800 lifepoints (6400) and deals 300 lifepoints of damage to Kamon (3100). Then the second effect of Gaialatha kicks in, doubling the effects again (Sean = 7200/Kamon = 2800). Then Sean activates the third effect of Gaialatha to absorb any of his own monsters in defencemode and gain their original powers. He absorbs Sienasav (2800/1400  3100/2200). Gaialatha then absorbs Grave-Horsal as well (3100/2200  4100/3200). It attacks Asaque, lowering Kamon`s lifepoints to 1900. Kamon is hurt very hard and can’t really breath. Sean tells him it is all over, he will win. Not if I can do something about it, they hear someone say.

 

The wall explodes and a giant fist throws in the group of Quartoldon`s that should have gone after Dragen. Mobius the Frost-Monarch (2400/1000) appears. It disappears as they hear a click and the Quartoldon`s disappears as well. From the smoke, a boy comes walking. 20 years old, brown short hair and sunglasses on. He tells no-one will hurt his friend as long as he is here. It is Dragen! Kamon tells him he is just in time. Dragen asks what Sean thinks, should they continue the duel and shall he join in, or will Sean forfeit the match already. They were an unbeatable team once, and they still are. Sean protests, that`s not fair. Kamon says putting kids in a cage is not fair as well. Dragen has a proposition, he will start with the same amount of lifepoints as Kamon and Sean will gain 2000 lifepoints extra, but he can play with his full deck. Sean agrees and Dragen joins in, activating his dueldisc.

 

Sean = 9200

Kamon = 1900

Dragen = 1900

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:28:42 hours

 

To be continued………

[Guest Ixigo]

Whoa. That was a long read.

 

Well, just a few things:

 

1) Some spelling errors, really nothing much, just minor flaws.

 

2) The format annoys me, I'd rather have it set to the past (ie "said" instead of "says")

 

3) The description is a little flawed. You could really increase its value by adding a few more lines in character and location description.

 

4) Some dueling errors with LP counting (unless I'm wrong, sometimes it's kind of confusing), and you can't have more than 3 monsters with the same name in your deck O_o (unless I missed you explaining that rule somewhere, I didn't read all the duels with too much caution because I was absorbed in the plot)

 

But other than those, the plot is excellent, perfect build-up, only flaw is that it sometimes gets kind of rushed, but it ends up well. Nice cliffhangers.

 

-Description: 7/10 (could use work)

-Characters: 7.5/10 (most lack a proper introduction, but there's good interaction between them, and they bind well into the plot and with each other. It's just that they could use work in some aspects)

-Plot: 9.5/10 (virtually insignificant flaws, great plot, no holes generally, in short, excellent! Can't wait to read more)

-Structure / Syntax / Grammar: 8/10 (like I said, there are very few grammar errors, the only thing with structure is that you could space it out a bit - especially in duels - and that I'm annoyed by the format, but I didn't hold it against you because it's just my preference)

-Dueling: 8 (a few flaws and miscalculations, could use a little more description here too, just to improve the overall picture. But nice, overall)

[SebastiaanZ]

Yeah, I know most of the points. These are the stories I wrote months ago, trust me it'll change. That you gave me a 8/10 for grammar was a bit surprising since I am not a native speaker. And thanks for the 9.5/10 for the plot!

[Guest Ixigo]

Actually, I'm not a native speaker either. The stuff people here write though is ridiculous. I barely noticed... a very few errors in 7 whole chapters (haven't read the last 2 yet), whereas in other members' works I see that many in a few sentences.

 

No problem about the rates, I love plot-driven fanfics - writing myself one, if you want to, you can read it.

[aztex]

COOL! I love it although you got some spelling mistakes, but keep up the good work.

[Purple Dinosaur]

Pretty cool!! I have read the first few episodes and it sounds brilliant!!

 

10.1/10

[SebastiaanZ]

Thanks to all of you. Well then I put up chapter 10.

 

Chapter 10 "Dragen appears! Sean versus Kamon and Dragen! (2)"

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:28:25 hours

 

Sean – 9200

Kamon – 1900

Dragen – 1900

 

Dragen and Kamon face of against Sean. Sean says the newcomer can go now. Dragen draws one card and summons Thunder-Knight (1300/1200) in attackmode. Then he sets two cards and ends his turn. Sean says it is his turn now. He plays the magiccard Dark-Thunder-Dice. It can only be use when Gaialatha is on the field. He rolls a dice and gets a 1. He can play out the first effect of Gaialatha again and summon all the monsters on the field again. Sienasav allows him to gain 800 lifepoints, making it 10.000 lifepoints. Then Sean activates the third ability of Gaialatha again and drains Sienasav`s level and add it to Gaialatha`s level (4400/4000). Dragen says it does not really impress him. He stood for larger battles. Although Swords of Revealing Light is still working, they will win. Kamon agrees. Sean says he still will deal 300 lifepoints of damage to each of them, because of Grave-Horsal`s effect (Kamon = 1600/Dragen = 1600). Then he lets Gaialatha drain the level of Grave-Horsal (5400/5000). Then he sets one card and ends his turn. Kamon goes then and opens his facedown card, Monster-Reborn. He summons Sienasav (300/800) to his side of the field. He gains 800 lifepoints (2400). Then he plays the magiccard Polar-Poles. He can summon two monsters which are opposites qua tribute. He summons Glacier (0/0) and Vulcanos (0/0). They each gain 500 attack – and defencepoints per turn they are face-up on the field. They cannot be destroyed by monsters who are stronger then 1500 attackpoints. So Gaialatha can’t do anything to them. Sean says he’ll find another way to destroy them. No, Dragen tells him and he activates his facedown card Destiny of Monarch. It allows him to send one monster with Knight from his field to the graveyard and summon a Monarch with the same attribute. He sends away Thunder-Knight and gets Zaborg the Thunder-Monarch (2400/1000). His special effect allows Dragen to destroy Gaialatha. But instead, Sean sends Dark-Thunder-Dice away into the graveyard and Gaialatha stays. Then Sean allows Gaialatha to attack Zaborg, but Dragen activates his other facedown card, Last Ditch Effect. He sends another monster into the graveyard, Mobius the Frost-Monarch. He then can count the attack of Mobius up with Zaborg (4800) and then apply battledamage (4400-4800 = -400, so Sean`s lifepoints drop to 9600). Zaborg still stands but Gaialatha doesn’t and Sean is angry with Dragen. Dragen says he never should have accepted his offer to duel both. Now he has two problems.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:21:12 hours

 

Sean – 9600

Kamon – 1600

Dragen – 1600

 

Jen and Sara are still hanging above the volcano. Jen thinks they never will be saved, at least not on time. Sara says she knows Kamon will try to do everything he can to save them. Jen hopes so and just thinks that she will be, when a shadow appears. It is Kamon. Sara is overjoyed seeing him and so is Jen. Kamon tells them to follow him as he knows his way out here. Sara and Jen agree and they follow him. On their way down the volcano, Sara asks what happened. Kamon says he’ll explain later. Three zombie-guards appear and Kamon activates his dueldisc, summoning his Glandalan and destroys all three of them. However Glandalan transforms into a Terrorblossom and strikes against the girls and Kamon. Kamon tries to call him back, but Terrorblossom forces him to back away. Then Terrorblossom leaves and Kamon asks himself what just happened. Sara and Jen follow him down and Sara wondered what that was about. A monster of Kamon changing suddenly? Or is this not Kamon? Are they walking into a trap?

 

In the meantime, Dragen`s turn is it again. Dragen plays the magiccard Duality of Spirits. It allows him to send one card to the graveyard and summon a level-6 or lower monster onto the field. He summons Granmarg the Rock-Monarch (2400/1000) onto the field. It allows him to destroy any facedown card on the field, so he destroys the only card on the field that is facedown, the facedown monster, Gaiagiga (0/100). This allows Sean to bring back a monster. He returns Sienasav (300/800). Then Dragen plays the magiccard Card of Sancitity. Allowing all players to draw until they have six cards. He looks to Kamon and Kamon nods. Then he plays Card-Destruction. They all have to discard their entire hand and draw a new one with the same amount of cards. Dragen sets a card and ends his turn. Sean gains 800 lifepoints because of Sienasav (10.400). Sean then plays the magiccard Sensitive Draw. He can draw three cards, any level-5 or higher monsters he must summon them, and must discard the rest. He draws three cards and summons Urqua the Zombie-Lord (?/?). He has 4 monsters in his graveyard so the level becomes 4000/0. Then he plays the magiccard Global Virus. He changes all monsters into zombie and reduces their level with half of their original level. Then he can destroy any monster if he wants to. However this is accounted beyond Dragen who counters the move with his facedown trapcard, Regretfull Move. It allows him to do the effect to Urqua (changing his level into 2000/0). Then he nods to Kamon and they both play the same facedown card on the same moment, Hope of Friendship. Dragen removes one monster from the game and can summon a monster from Kamon`s deck. Then he can gain an equel amount of lifepoints to his lifepoints now. So he summons a Mega-Eternal-Seadragon (3400/3000) onto his field. Then he plays out the last effect of Hope of Friendship as he watches Kamon play the same move as he summons the Raiza the Wind-Monarch (2400/1000) to his field and removes Glacier from play. Their lifepoints both become 3200 and then they both play out the last effect of Hope of Friendship to exchange their monsters so Dragen control Raiza and Kamon controls Mega-Eternal-Seadragon. Kamon plays out the effect of his Dragon to draw a card. Sean ends his turn and Kamon plays Gracefull Charity, drawing three cards and discarding two. Then Kamon plays Granted Power. If he has one monster with more then 2000 attackpoints, he can add 1000 attack – and defencepoints (4400/4000) to it. then he can summon a monster with the same name to the field. So he summons another Mega-Eternal-Seadragon (3400/3000). He now has two Mega-Eternal-Seadragon`s on the field. Kamon says it will be all over.

 

Not yet, Sean says. He still has his Swords of Revealing Light combined with Longing Spell on the field. Further Urqua is still on the field. Not for long Kamon says. He plays his trapcard Lunar-Twilight-Force. It destroys all magiccards on the field and so both the opposing cards are gone. Then he can play those two on his side of the field, cancelling Sean out for the rest of the duel. Then Raiza destroys Urqua (Sean = 10.000). Now Sean is defenceless. Kamon says he’ll finish the duel during those turns. Dragen tells him to go ahead. Kamon orders both his Mega-Eternal-Seadragon`s to attack Sean directly, dealing 7700 lifepoints of damage to Sean (2300). Then the level of both Seadragon`s raise to 4500/4100 and 3500/3100. Dragen says it is his turn again and summons Irios the Iron-Monarch (2400/1000) and plays Oppressed Monarch, allowing himself to play another Monarch, Draganta the Dragon-Monarch (2400/1000). Draganta cannot attack directly, but Irios`special effect allows Draganta to attack directly at the cost of 1000 lifepoints (2200). Draganta completely destroys Sean and the duel has ended.

 

Sean – 0

Kamon – 3200

Dragen - 2200

 

Sean says they indeed are an unbeatable team. The portal is right behind him. Then he is taken by shadows and disappears down to the Underworld. Kamon looks to Dragen and asks whether Dragen is willing to join him to the other dimension and Dragen says he came all this way to help Kamon out with whatever he was doing. To let Kamon die in another dimension just after he saved the day would be a foolish move. So yes, he will join Kamon into saving the others. They both walk through the portal.

 

The van of the Grass Peppers arrives backstage of a big concert building. The leader of the band, called John, says they have time enough to do anything they want. The concert is starting tomorrow, so relax. When they are about to enter the building, a man comes from the shadows, calling for John. John replies with yes. But the man just clicks with his finger and five Quartoldon start narrowing in on them………

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:09:57

[SebastiaanZ]

Chapter 11 is up!

 

Chapter 11 "Shadow Spacian! Graem versus Aqua Dolphin!"

 

Countdown until sacrifise (Graem`s time): 1:39:32 hours

 

Graem follows the leads of the voice and arrives in front of the Aqua-Palace, the heart of the Aqua-Kingdom. He sees large lakes around the palace. He thinks where this place is. All small dolphins are jumping up and down into the sea. At the side a sealion is sunbathing. The voice tells him not to care to much about the Neos-Spacian – Aqua Sea-Lion (1800/1600), it is just a simple inhabitant of his Aqua-Kingdom. Their powers are tapped from the source of Neo-Space. Graem says he needs to care about his inhabitants. The voice says he does care as long as he can reach his purpose of having the whole dimension filled with water. Graem follows an Aqua-Maiden into the palace and he finds out the voice belongs to a dolphin-like creature calling himself Neos-Spacian Aqua Dolphin (600/800) who welcomes him. He says Graem must be tired and Graem admits he is from the long journey. Aqua-Dolphin he’ll ready a room for him. An Aqua-Maiden tells Graem to follow him as she will direct him to his lodgings. Graem agrees and is brought to a big apartment with all luxuries.

 

Graem looks out the window and sees in the far, a camp with huge basins of water in it. He asks the Aqua-Maiden what that camp is. The Aqua Maiden says that is something she cannot tell him. She is not allowed to. Graem says he needs to know. Aqua Dolpin arrives through a hidden door and tells him there is nothing there. Graem looks out the window and sees nothing indeed. He says it must have been a misunderstanding. Aqua-Maiden and Aqua Dolpin disappear and Graem thinks something is wrong here. He goes out and at one of the gates he is stopped by some soldiers. They are Aqua-Feinds (each 1500/1000). They say they are told to not let anyone out of the city. Graem says who told them. They says their boss, Aqua Dolphin. Graem says it is Aqua Dolphin who is behind all this. Yes, one of the Feinds say. Graem summons E-Hero Sparkman and destroys both of them. He then rushes of in direction of where he saw the camp earlier.

 

Countdown until sacrifise (Graem`s time): 1:21:23

 

The Kamon who is with Sara and Jen leads them to a cave. Sara asks whether Kamon knows where he is heading. Kamon says he does, as he has found them this way. Jen asks if he had heard anything about Lean, but Kamon answers negative. He touches a stone and tells them there is only one way to get out of here, that is to touch this stone with your writing arm. He touches it with his left hand. Sara gets suspicious, while the stone reveals a gate, because Kamon is usually right. Sara thinks it might be a coincidence, but she decides to keep an eye on Kamon. Kamon then goes down the stairs and they follow him. Sara asks whether Kamon remembers when they first met. Kamon tells her to be quiet. Sara keeps asking him and he tells her some date, but Sara says that`s not true. Sara says Kamon is a fake. Jen wonders if it is true. Kamon says yes, it is true. He is not Kamon. He transforms into Guardian Baou with a dueldisc on his arm. Baou says this was a trap to lure them to a for them saver place. Baou opens another gate, forcing Jen and Sara in it. They arrive in something like a blurry space of colours. Baou says they will stay here and await trial. Sara and Jen says their friends will get them out of here. Baou says it is unlikely, but they will be waiting whenever their friends will turn up.

 

Countdown until sacrifise (Graem`s time): 1:10:58

 

Graem is in front of the place where the camp was and he walks around, but jumps into a Skull-Knight. The Skull-Knight says he wasn’t supposed to be here. He was supposed to be in the palace. Graem says he knows something is wrong here, so he better should let him through. The Skull-Knight answers he can’t. Graem says he must get through. The Skull-Knight opens the gate to the camp and says he is only able to get in here when he gets past him. Graem says ok. He walks away and uses E-Hero Stratos (1800/300) to get over Skull-Knight and into the camp. He sees a lot of basins there with a lot of creatures, he never has seen before. Behind him a voice tells him these are all residents of Neo-Space. Graem says they should be set free. No, the voice says and Graem turns around, seeing Aqua Dolphin again. Graem says there is a way to settle this. Through a duel. Aqua Dolphin agrees. Graem says when he wins, everyone will be set free. Aqua Dolphin agrees and when Graem loses he will become a prisoner. Graem agrees.

 

Graem – 4000

Aqua Dolphin – 4000

 

Graem says he’ll go first, summoning E-Hero Sparkman (1600/1400) in defencemode and sets two cards, then he ends his turn. Aqua Dolphin starts of with playing the magiccard Basin of Aqua-Force. He can add one water-attribute monster to his hand and summon another to the field. He summons Neos – Rain-Dolphin (200/400) in defencemode. Then he sets one card and ends his turn. Graem plays Polymerization, fusing his Sparkman with Clayman in his hand to E-Hero Thunder Giant (2400/1500). Then he activates it`s special effect to discard one card and destroy Neos – Rain Dolphin. Aqua Dolphin says he can summon himself to the field now, which he does. Then Graem ends his turn. Aqua Dolphin plays the magiccard March of the Dolphin and activates his trapcard Tidal-Wave. March of the Dolphin allows him to summon Neo-Spacian – Aqua Sea-Lion to the field. It`s special ability allows him to increase Aqua Dolphin`s level to 900/1100. Then Tidal-Wave allows him to destroy all magiccards and trapcards on the opponent`s field. Then he can activate the second ability of Aqua Sea-Lion to bring back Rain Dolphin. Then he activates the special ability of himself to discard one card and destroy one random card in Graem`s hand. He destroys Fusion-Zone. Graem starts his turn by summoning E-Hero Stratos (1800/300) to the field. Thunder Giant destroys Rain Dolphin (Aqua Dolphin = 2100), then Stratos destroys Aqua Dolphin (1200).

 

Graem – 4000

Aqua Dolphin – 1200

 

Graem plays the magiccard Trapwire Hero. He can return a Polymerization-card and a fusion-material monster including Hero in it’s name back to his hand. Then he has to reshuffle his deck and give up 500 lifepoints (3500). He takes back E-Hero Clayman and then plays it in defencemode. Aqua Dolphin can activate a magiccard from his hand now, playing Neos-Planet Aquadon, a fieldmagiccard, designed for aqua-based Neo-Spacians. He has to sacrifise one and then he can bring back Aqua Dolphin (900/1100 again, because of Aqua Sea-Lion). Graem sets his last phase of his plan in activation, activating Future-Fusion, sending Starman, Metaldon and Gunman to the graveyard to summon E-Hero Starsavior (2800/1600). It destroys Aqua Dolphin once again, dealing 1900 lifepoints of damage to Aqua Dolphin. His lifepoints drop to 0.

 

Graem tells Aqua Dolphin now to release his friends. Aqua Dolphin gets a sudden blast and he gets up saying an evil force has taken control over the inhabitants of Neo-Space. If Graem thinks he was the only one, then Graem has it wrong. The water-spacians are at his side now, but he still must beat the other 5, which are far more powerfull then he is. From now on Aqua Dolphin and his other aqua-based neo-spacians are part of Graem`s deck and together they will be unstoppable. Graem agrees and everything disappears, his deck glowing blue this time. He says Sara and Jen must be ready, he will come and get them………

 

In the meantime, in the real world, in the concert hall, where the van of the Grass Peppers was, a boy is hiding. It is Dyllan, a member of the Grass Peppers. He says he must warn Jen, before it is to late.

[SebastiaanZ]

And chapter 12!

 

Chapter 12 “Fighting Fire with Metal! Graem versus Flare Scarab!”

 

Time until countdown (Graem`s time): 1:01:21

 

Graem is taking a ride on a stolen horse. He now has the power of the aqua-based Neos-Spacians and he has to defeat 5 more in order to save his friends, Sara and Jen. Aqua Dolphin tells him from his deck, that where he is heading now, is the Vulcanic Wasteland. The mighty Flare Scarab rules here. And with him there are a lot of fire-based Neo-Spacians who won’t like the presence of a human. He has to be aware that there is a terror in this land, under the control of Flare Scarab, which can just use his breath to create firestorms. He is called Neo-Spacian – Flare-Scorpion (2500/2200). Suddenly Aqua Dolphin tells him to hide. Two giants of flare-monsters comes past and they haven’t seen Graem, but he ducked just in time. Aqua Dolphin says these are Neo-Spacian – Magma Golem`s (2200/2000). They are extremely powerfull and cannot be taken on easely. Graem says when Aqua Dolphin said the next one would be more powerfull he certainly didn’t lie. Aqua Dolphin laughs a bit, which attracts the attention of Magma Golem, who are going after Graem. Graem runs for his life and goes further into a cave.

 

When he reaches the exit of the cave, Aqua Dolphin stops him, saying that this exits leads him to the territory of the Flare-Scorpion, the terror of this wasteland. Graem tells to let it come, he’ll be ready for it. Aqua Dolphin replies he wished he was so confident. Graem goes on and then feels some movements. He looks around suspisciously. He draws a card from his deck, playing E-Hero Stratos (1800/300) to check on the surroundings. Then he summons Neos – Rain Dolphin to search in the pools for enemies. Graem goes on and looks up to the sky. He sees a Firewing Pegasus flying high above to a castle. Aqua Dolphin tells him that is the Palace of Fire, the place of Flare Scarab. It is guarded by many Magma-Golem`s. And no way Flare Scarab will come down to duel Graem when Flare-Scorpion is still here. Maybe, Graem says, it is time to mess something up here. He fuses his three monsters into E-Hero Starsavior and three others in E-Hero Metal-Wingman. Aqua Dolphin jumps onto the field as well. They start destroying rocks and everything and then a big builder explodes. Aqua Dolphin says he still thinks this is a bad idea. Graem says that with enough monsters he can take down the Flare-Scorpion. Then he hears rumbling and from one of the smaller vulcanoes the huge Flare-Scorpion arrives. Graem tells his monsters to stand their ground.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 45:32 minutes (Graem’s time)

 

Sara and Jen are kept in flaming cages, with Baou guarding them. Sara says she knows someone is close to saving them. Baou agrees, but says the one who is coming for them doesn’t know they are here. He only knows where the palace of Flare-Scarab is and Flare-Scarab is some creature he doesn’t care about. Sara asks who Baou serves. Baou says it is nothing that matters to them. He is part of something which surpasses the human mind. Something that will take over the world as soon as they have taken care of 7 certain duellists. By now Pamadala will have taken care of Lean and the resqua attempt of Dragen and Kamon will fail. Jen asks whether Dragen and Kamon went after Lean. Baou agrees and says not to expect anything from it. Pamadala will stop those two in order to let their plan succeed.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 40:21 minutes (Graem’s time)

 

The huge Flare-Scorpion is looming over Graem and his five protectors. One by one, all the E-Heroes are destroyed, except for Metal-Wingman. Graem draws a card from his deck using the magiccard Metal-Heat-Armour. Flare-Scorpion uses a flare-blaze to knock Metal-Wingman down, but Graem plays E-Hero Bubbleman (800/1200) and then Metamorphosis, sending in E-Hero Neo Bubbleman (800/1200). Then he equips it with Bubble-Blaster and attacks Flare-Scorpion, but Flare-Scorpion is only left with a small scratch. He swipes with his tail, but Metal-Wingman can pick Neo Bubbleman away just in time. Neo Bubbleman once again uses bubbleshoot, but Flare-Scorpion blazes it back. Then Metal-Wingman (2600/2200) uses iron-claw, sending Flare-Scorpion flying into a lava-pool. Graem deactivates his dueldisc and leaves, calling out for Flare Scarab. Flare Scarab replies it is not over. Rumbling is heard and Flare-Scorpion returns. It fully annihilates Neo Bubbleman and Metal-Wingman. The destroying of Metal-Wingman allows Graem to return Flame-Wingman to the field. Then he plays Refusion to fuse Flame-Wingman with E-Hero Necro-Darkman to E-Hero Necro-Wingman (2500/2200). For every dark-monster in the graveyard, he gains 500 attackpoints (3000/2200). He engages Flare-Scorpion in battle destroying it for good. The point is that Necro-Wingman has to be send to the graveyard at the end of the turn. Graem tells Flare Scarab that he beated Flare-Scorpion, now it is time Flare Scarab showed hisself. A fireball is shot from the palace and Flare Scarab appears in front of Graem. He says he was asking to see him and probably duel him. He defeated the mighty Flare-Scorpion so he is qualified to duel him. Graem tells him to get ready then, this is going to be an heated battle. Flare Scarab agrees and they activate their dueldisc`s. Flare Scarab tells him he knows that he still must beat 4 more if he is defeated in order to get his friends. Graem says yes, but Flare Scarab knows as well that he must join him if he is defeated. Flare Scarab agrees and they start.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 26:31 minutes (Graem`s time)

Graem – 4000

Flare Scarab – 4000

 

Flare Scarab says he’ll go first, activating the fieldmagiccard Neos-Planet – Vulcanio. This’ll take down the total of levelstars to 1 less then normally of all fire-types. So he summons Neo-Spacian – Magmadog (1800/1600). It`s special ability allows Flare Scarab to cut his attackpoints in half and attack directly (3100). Then he sets a card facedown and ends his turn. Graem draws a card and plays Pot of Greed, drawing two more. Then he plays Polymerization and fuses E-Hero Edgeman and E-Hero Wildman to E-Hero Wildedge (2600/2300). It destroys all monsters on the field of the opponent in one attack, but Flare Scarab uses Flare-Shield in order to keep Wildedge from destroying his Magmadog. Graem uses Hero`s Rule 3, discarding one card and draw out another from his graveyard. He gets back Polymerization and fuses his two monsters into Flame-Wingman. Then he summons Neo-Spacian Aqua Dolphin (600/800) to the field and ends his turn. Flare Scarab tells Aqua Dolphin he is a traitor to the cause of the Neo-Spacians. Aqua Dolphin doesn’t think so. Flare Scarab draws a card and tributes his Magmadog for Neo-Spacian Magma Golem (2200/2000). Magma Golem destroys Aqua Dolphin (1500). Aqua Dolphin`s spirit asks why Flare Scarab is doing this. Flare Scarab plays the magiccard Allignement of Fire. It allows him to destroy all monsters and deal 500 lifepoints of damage per monster destroyed. Wildedge and Flame-Wingman are destroyed and Graem`s lifepoints drop to 500. Then Flare Scarab plays Rage of Fire to deal 100 lifepoints per magiccard the opponent played this duel. Graem played 3 cards, so he is forced to duel with only 200 lifepoints left.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 12:54 minutes (Graem`s time)

Graem – 200

Flare Scarab – 4000

 

Graem plays the magiccard Gracefull Charity and draws three cards and discards two. He plays E-Hero Metaldon and Grave-Fusion to fuse it with Flame-Wingman and bring forward E-Hero Metal-Wingman (2600/2200) again. Metal-Wingman faces of again Magma Golem, but Magma Golem`s attack raises to 2700 because of his special effect, to gain 500 attackpoints per monster he destroyed and then he destroys Metal-Wingman, leaving Graem with 100 lifepoints left. Flare Scarab says it is all over as he plays Ultimate Offering and discards 500 lifepoints (3500) in order to summon himself to the field. Flare Scarab says it must be an honour to be destroyed by the opponent itself. No, Graem says, it is far from over. Flare Scarab says Metal-Wingman was destroyed, he has no defences anymore. Graem says he has one more and from the ashes a new monster arises, E-Hero Metal-Wingman Herald (2800/2300)! It is the evolved form of Metal-Wingman and even more powerfull then it`s predecessor. First, Graem activates the special ability in order to gain 500 attack – and defencepoints per E-Hero that is in the graveyard. He has 7, so his level raises to 6300/5800. Then Graem says it is invulnerable to magiccards and trapcards. “Now, Metal-Wingman Herald, destroy his Magma Golem!” says Graem, lowering Flare Scarab`s lifepoints to 0.

 

Flare Scarab falls on the ground. Graem says he should never have tried to beat him, it only gives the challenger trouble. Flare Scarab says he pledges his powers to Graem, to the one who beated him. However a clock appears in the sky and Graem asks what that means. Flare Scarab says it is almost time before Lean will be sacrifised. Graem asks Kamon to be quick. Flare Scarab says he must hope the best for Lean and continue his own search for Jen and Sara. Graem agrees as Flare Scarab and his compagnions retreat to Graem`s deck which glows with a red bright light. Aqua Dolphin says the Caves of Shadows is their next target. Flare Scarab tells Graem it is protected by the mighty Dark Panther, so beware. Graem: “Dark Panther, here I come!”.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 00:03 … 00:02 … 00:01 … 00:00 hours (Graem`s time)

 

Card of the chapter:

 

Metal-Wingman Herald

8/2800/2300/earth/machine

Effect: This card can only be summoned when “E-Hero Metal-Wingman” is destroyed in battle. This card is immune to magic – and trapcards. This card gains 500 attack – and defencepoints per E-Hero in the graveyard.

[zane trusedale]

great job man.I really do respect you.Not to metion the work you put into this fantic. I Really like the job did on that crossover with kabiaman21 and i will try to make a chapter for the legends of duel acadmey when i can. take care man.Keep up the good work.Your my idol.

[SebastiaanZ]

Here is chapter 13!

 

Chapter 13 “Laughing stock! Dragen versus Dream Clown!”

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:09:57

 

Kamon and Dragen have appeared in the dimension, where Lean is presumably kept. Dragen asks if Kamon has any idea where to go. Kamon says no, he doesn’t. He assumes they need to head somewhere where a lot of monsters are. Dragen says Kamon is probably right, so let’s move on. Kamon say they could question some people on the way to finding Lean. Dragen agrees and they set of to find some village or tribe. They come past an old man who says they are probably looking for some kid called Lean who is being held as a sacrifise. Kamon says yes, they do. The man says he can’t help them, but he might know somewhere where they might find more information. It is some kind of circus, which travels all over the world. They have heard a lot, so they might be able to help Kamon and Dragen. Kamon asks Dragen what he thinks about it. Dragen says it is worth a try. Kamon agrees and they set of to find the circus.

 

At some big place, the tents of the circus are still standing. The director, the White Magical Hat, tells his minions to start working on setting up the stage, so they can give a performance when the sacrifise is made. The White Magical Hat tells a couple of Zombie-Ogre`s to keep working as they must finish it all. Backstage, a Dream Clown is watching the progress. He gets a message through a pidgeon and says good, everything is set into motion, let`s start the final hour before the sacrifise is made.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 1:00:00 hours

 

In the real reality, Liam, the father and boss of the McFlinn Company is working in his office. He asks himself where the heck Kamon and Sara are. He just got a call from the mother of Dragen, who says Dragen disappeared directly after Kamon made a call. When he wanted to say something, he heard a scream and the line was down. Then he wonders where Graem, his head of security, is. Jeffrey, the second in charge, and Sam, one of his trusted workers, took over command now, but he does have more faith in Graem. A buzz goes and the secretary says there is someone here to see Liam. Liam asks who. Sam says it is him and Liam says to come in. Sam comes in and the doors close.

 

In the city a boy is running for a cloaked duellist. The boy has 300 lifepoints left and the duellist has still 4000 lifepoints. His Nightforce – Shadowhaze (900/900) attacks directly and the boy is defeaten and taken by the shadows. However, the boy returns but now pledges his allegiance to project Apoca. The cloaked duellist shows his face and it seems it is Mysterio!

 

Liam and Sam are talking in Liam`s office and Sam wonders where the seven duellists from the last encounter with Project Apoca are. Liam says they all disappeared. Sam says he was in contact with one of them, but then suddenly the line was cut dead. Liam says that is weird. He knows for certain that one of the seven is still in Hisehade City. Sam asks whether Liam knows where. Yes, Liam says, somewhere near Graem`s place. They suddenly hear explosion outside and a warrior-like monster appears in front of the window of Liam. It looks like Core-Guardian Tevez, but it is not exactly Core-Guardian – Tevez. On the ground Mysterio appears, saying he returned but this time to fight alongside Project Apoca. He already hunted down the other seven duellists from last time. He introduces his Shadow-Guardian – Tevez, the shadow counterpart of Core-Guardian Tevez. Sam tells Liam they shouldn’t listen to Mysterio. He will try and track down the old seven members and of the seven new chosen duellists will be tracked down and protected. Liam agrees. Mysterio and Shadow-Guardian Tevez disappear.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 45:53 minutes

 

Dragen and Kamon have appeared in front of the tent and Kamon enters the tent. White Magical Hat welcomes them asking what he can do for them. Kamon says he needs to know where and why Lean is going to be sacrifised. Dragen enters as well, saying they need the answer now! White Magical Hat says everything will become clear as soon as possible. Kamon says they want an answer. Then from the back, Dream Clown appears, saying they will get an answer. Kamon and Dragen wonder why suddenly Dream Clown appears, at the moment they need an answer. Dream Clown says he will give an answer to every question, but they must do something for him first. At that moment two Gigalo-Clown`s appear, taking Kamon and putting him on a board. Dream Clown says Dragen will become his opponent in a duel. Dragen says Dream Clown doesn’t know what he is doing, challenging him. Dream Clown says he does. He turns the board spinning and says as long as the duel will continue, Kamon will be dreaming and reliving his worsest nightmares and things that really happened. Dragen vows to Kamon he will get him back and says so be it, Kamon would do the same for him, so he’ll take on Dream Clown in a duel. They both activate their dueldisc`s.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 39:21 minutes

 

Dream Clown – 4000

Dragen – 4000

 

Dream Clown says he can go first. Dragen goes ahead and summons Thunder-Knight (1300/1200) in attackmode and sets one card facedown. Then he ends his turn. Dream Clown activates the spellcard Laughing Stock, which allows him to discard a card and do 500 lifepoints of damage to Dragen. In addition he gains 200 lifepoints per card he discards because of this effect. He discards two, leaving Dragen with 3000 lifepoints and himself with 4400 lifepoints. Then Dream Clown plays Peten the Dark Clown (500/500) and attacks directly, because of it`s special ability (2500). Dream Clown then plays the last card from his hand Clown-Fake-Cannon, which he cannot use since he has no Laughing Bombs (300/0) or whatsoever. He ends his turn. Dragen draws a card and plays Pot of Greed. He draws two cards and sighs, no Monarch`s. He looks to Kamon and says he will get him back. He plays Mine Golem (1000/1900) and attacks Peten (3900). Then he strikes directly with Thunder-Knight (2600). He then plays one card facedown and ends his turn.

 

Flashback #1 Kamon

Kamon was sitting inside a big circular room watching the television. A butler comes in and Kamon asks when his dad will return. The butler says over two weeks. Kamon says he is left alone so many times, luckily he has Charles, the butler, and the butler laughs and says yes, he will always be there for master Kamon. He asks where his mother is. Charles tells him his mother is in France, doing some art project. Kamon says he is always left alone and his mother always takes his sister with her on her trips. He vows to become very important later on, so he can be everywhere where he wants to. Later, when he is asleep, his shadow watches over him, saying if that is what he wants, then he will get it.

 

Flashback ends………

 

Dream Clown starts his turn again, by playing Pot of Greed himself. He then discards two Laughing Bombs in order to activate the effect of Clown-Fake-Cannon, dealing 600 lifepoints of damage to Dragen (1900). Luckily, he cannot activate the effect of Laughing Stock, but he can attack directly with Peten (1400). He ends his turn and Dragen draws a card and plays Chain of Luck, allowing both players to draw three cards and Dragen can gain lifepoints equel to Mine Golem (2400). Then he tributes his Thunder-Knight for Zaborg the Thunder-Monarch (2400/1000). Dragen orders Zaborg to destroy Peten (2000). A new Peten the Dark Clown takes the place. Then Dragen activates Zaborg`s special ability to destroy the new Peten as well. A new Peten takes his place. Dream Clown says he has to admit, Dragen has some potential. But now it will be all over. He plays out the effect of Laughing Stock again and discards two cards, dealing 1000 lifepoints of damage to Dragen (1400) and then attacks directly with Peten (900).

 

Dream Clown – 2400

Dragen – 900

 

Flashback #2 Kamon

Kamon and his sister, Merel, were playing in their garden when Merel challenged Kamon to climb in the trees. Kamon says he can do that and does so. Charles gets to them, asking what they are doing. Kamon and Merel answer that they are playing in the garden. Charles says he can see that, but in the trees. Kamon says yes, they do. Charles laughs and leaves the scene again. Kamon says it is safe for Merel to get in the tree as well. Merel does so and they have a great time. Charles then calls to him and says he has Dragen on the line, asking whether he wishes to participate in a tagduel. Kamon says he’ll pick up the phone. Merel says she will be waiting here. When Kamon is talking on the phone with Dragen they hear a panicking scream from Merel. They rush over, but it is to late. Although Charles tries to bring her back, Merel has broken her neck from the fall from the tree. Charles doesn’t blame him for leaving her alone, but his parents does. We see Kamon spending days and nights alone in his bedroom, looking at a picture of him and Merel and he says he shouldn’t have left her alone.

 

Later, at the funeral of Merel, Kamon is asked to say something, but he can’t and Charles understands it. His parents won’t let him anyway, since they still think it is Kamon to blame because Merel died. Behind him the shadow of Kamon grows bigger and stronger and laughs, saying his time will come.

 

Flashback ends………

 

Dream Clown says he discarded his Gigalo-Clown, which means he can draw up to six cards. This means he can defeat Dragen with ease now. Dragen tells him to go ahead. Dream Clown first plays the magiccard Short Performance. It allows him to summon back his Gigalo-Clown and then use it for a one-tributer to summon a stronger monster. However the monster must be send to the graveyard at the end of the turn. He tributes it to summon Anchor-Knight of Laugh (2000/2400). He says he can decrease his attackpoints in half and then attack directly, which he does. This would lower Dragen`s lifepoints to 0, but Dragen`s trapcard kicks in, Peacefull Mirror of the Monarch. He can summon a Monarch to the field. So he summons Granmarg the Rock-Monarch (2400/1000). It destroys Anchor-Knight of Laugh (2000). Dragen says he only has to take care of Peten.

 

Flashback #3 Kamon

Kamon is duelling an opponent in the Junior Minor-League. His opponent has Boxing King – Lea Kegul (2200/2000) on the field and one card facedown. His opponent, called Takea, says he knows everything about Kamon, including his sister Merel, who fell from the tree. Does Kamon really think he can defeat Takea. Kamon gets more angrier and angrier and his shadow-side grows stronger and stronger. Boxing King – Lea Kegul attacks directly, leaving Kamon with 200 lifepoints left. Takea says he now can attack directly because of the special effect of his monster. No, Kamon says, as the smoke clears. And a new darker energy has taken him over. He plays the trapcard Call of the Haunted and brings back Mega-Eternal-Seadragon (3400/3000) and says this is the card he trusts in. However the dragon transforms into a dark dragon, whose dark powers surround the area and destroys Boxing King. Sara (much younger then she is now) watches in horror as the dragon looms over Takea and attacks another time directly. When the smoke clears, Takea is on the field, unconsciousness and Kamon asks what he just had done. Dragen and Sara watch him in horror.

 

Flashback ends………

 

Kamon wakes up on the board that is still spinning, however it has no effect anymore. This time he is telling Dragen to attack the last Peten, the last defence so they finally can get to Lean. Dragen nods and orders Zaborg to destroy Peten, lowering Dream Clown`s lifepoints to 0. Dream Clown says the tribe in which Lean is held is just behind this tent. They’ll be there in 10 minutes. Dragen and Kamon set of to the tribe.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 14:43 minutes

 

Kamon asks while they are walking in the direction Dream Clown gave them, whether he remembers the day that he defeated Takea in the final of the Junior Minor League. Dragen says like it was yesterday. Kamon defeated Takea in an immense showdown of power. The dragon of Kamon transformed into a powerfull dark being, resembling the Mega-Eternal-Seadragon, and destroyed Takea. He never wanted to duel afterwards, but Kamon didn’t remember anything from the last phase of the duel. Kamon says that`s true, he didn’t remember anything. Dragen said it never came out what happened during the last minutes of the duel, but Kamon won. Kamon said he never wanted that price, but the judges didn’t give him much choise. Dragen suddenly gets very tired and says it must be because of the last duel he fought against Dream Clown. Kamon agrees and tells Dragen to hang on, they’re almost there.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 7:12 minutes

 

Pamadala, in the tribe, gives orders to two Gearfried`s to bring in Lean, the sacrifise. Lean says he trusts his new friends and they will come after him to save him. Pamadala says not to count on any last minute saviors. Lean says he has faith, and that is important. Pamadala says if faith is what he has, then faith is what he will die with. He is set on the funeral pire and a lot of rituals are done and Lean says he will keep faith that he will be saved. When the timer reaches 00:00, Pamadala will put on the fire.

 

Countdown until sacrifise: 00:03 … 00:02 … 00:01 … 00:00

 

“Hold it right there” a voice gets through the crowds. A blast comes and two figures appeared. Lean sees them and says “I knew someone would come”. Pamadala asks “Who are you and why are you coming to intrude in this ritual”. “Simple, since we are coming to stop it”. Kamon and Dragen appear, Dragen leaning on Kamon. “If you want Lean, you will have to get past us” Kamon says. “There is no need, I can put on a fire and he will be sacrifised to the great Gaianadin”. Then the second sacrifise is brought in. Pamadala asks Kamon: “Are you willing to risk her life as well?”. Kamon answers: “I won’t need to risk anything. If I win, they will all come with me. If I lose, we will all be sacrifised”. Pamadala thinks and replies: “So be it. A duel it will be”. They activate their dueldisc`s and both say: “Duel!”.

 

Pamadala – 4000

Kamon – 4000

 

To be continued…………

[SebastiaanZ]

And 14!

 

Chapter 14 “Saving Lean! Clear the Magicians`s from the field! (1)”

 

Pamadala – 4000

Kamon – 4000

 

Pamadala tells Kamon he has put both Lean`s and Lainna`s life at stake. Kamon tells Lean and Lainna he will save them. Lean believes him and Kamon asks Pamadala at least to release them until the duel is over. Pamadala agrees to do so and releases the prisoners. Kamon says he now has his attention on the duel. Pamadala says: “Don’t forget what our deal was. You and your friend will become a prisoner when you lose”. “I haven’t forgotten my end of the deal. You just don’t forget your end”. Pamadala says she won’t forget it. Then from her a new voice comes, the voice of Gaianadon: “This will be much more as a match for prisoners. If you lose your world is at stake and in danger. Don’t forget that”. Kamon says he will not lose, so let’s begin the duel.

 

Kamon says Pamadala can go first. Pamadala plays Witch-Ring, summoning Dark-Magician Girl (2000/1700) to the field. Then she plays Allignement of Magic and draws five cards. If there are any level-4 or lower spellcasters in it, she can summon them on the field. Otherwise she has to discard the rest. She plays White Magician – Teacher (1000/1000) in attackmode, Magician Valkyria (1500/1000) in attackmode and two cards of her rest facedown. Pamadala says she will rest for now and end her turn. Kamon draws a card and plays Polar Poles. He summons Glacier (0/0) and Vulcanos (0/0) onto the field. They both gain 500 attack – and defencepoints when they are both on the field and gain another 500 attack – and defencepoints per turn. Then he plays Gold Dagger, drawing five cards and summons Des Dondagalf (2200/2000) onto the field. Then he throws away three monsters from his hand and draws three cards which are either magic – or trapcards. Then he sets a card and ends his turn. Pamadala starts her turn by saying that he is quiet good in duelling. She plays the fieldmagiccard Sage`s Academy. This powers her Dark-Magician Girl up to 2500/2200, her Magician Valkyria to 2000/1500 and her White Magician – Teacher to 1500/1500. Then she tributes her White Magician – Teacher for White Magician – Warlock (2300/2000, now 2800/2500). White Magician – Warlock destroys Des Dondagalf (3400). However Des Dondagalf returns with 2400/2000 as a level. Kamon says he is not that easely defeaten. Pamadala says she’ll activate the special ability of Warlock now to draw a card and she can look at the facedown card of Kamon. It is Lullaby of Silence. Now if it is a magiccard, it is destroyed. So she destroys Lullaby of Silence. Then she plays the magiccard Honour Statue – Great Warlock and gains 600 lifepoints (4600) because of it`s effect to gain an equel amount of lifepoints which Kamon has lost. She ends her turn.

 

Pamadala – 4600

Kamon – 3400

 

Dyllan, the guy from the band, who was hidden, still hides inside a center. He thinks if he can make contact with Jen in one or another way, he is able to warn her on the oncoming attack on her. All the band-members have been defeated by those machine-like creatures send after them and he was able to get out soon. However he saw how his bandmates were taken, so he swears to revenge them. He continue his search for survivors. He decides to check out Jen on her house.

 

At Jen`s place, he sees the door is open. He goes in not expecting anyone there, but then he is jumped on by someone. He looks around, being surprised to find the mother. But she is not normal, she has no glance in her eyes, she has become a puppet, a zombie. However she has a dueldisc on her arm and wants to duel Dyllan. Dyllan accepts the challenge, hoping to return her to normal once this duel is done. Mother (4000) and Dyllan (4000) face of and Dyllan says he’ll end this duel quickly. He summons B.E.S. Drill Core (6/2000/2000/dark/machine/when there are no monsters on your side of the field, you can summon this monster directly. Half your lifepoints and you can attack directly). He halves his lifepoints (2000) and then attacks directly, lowering her lifepoints to 2000. He plays a card facedown and ends his turn. The mother plays Kawasaki (4/1400/1000/dark/zombie) in defencemode and then activates the magiccard Zombie-Crush. Doubling it`s attackpoints Kawasaki can attack directly (2800/2000). However she falls right into Dyllan`s trap, Shield from the Sky (trapcard – Negate all direct attacks for two turns and end the current turn). Dyllan draws and plays Pot of Greed (spellcard – Draw two cards) and draws two cards and plays Assault Core (3/1300/?/light/machine/effect/If this card is face-up on the field, threat this card as a B.E.S card). Then he plays BES Attack-Formation A (spellcard – All monsters with B.E.S in the name can attack directly). Then he attacks directly with Drill Core, leaving the mother with 0 lifepoints. He says it is over and he hears a scream. He goes up, hoping to find some living people here.

 

Pamadala – 4600

Kamon – 3400

 

Kamon says he guesses it is his turn now. He activates the magiccard Hidden Treasure (spellcard – Draw until your hand has five cards. Then summon any level-4 or lower monsters onto the field). He does so and summons his Six-Armed Snake-Statue (4/1500/1200/dark/reptile/increase your lifepoints by a quarter of the actual attackpoints of this monster or any other copy of this card every turn. Increase the attackpoints of this card by 300 per monster it destroys). Kamon gains 375 lifepoints (3775). Pamadala says she gains 375 lifepoints as well (4975). Pamadala says she has to say he is good. Kamon thanks her, but he can gain another 500 lifepoints because of Dreamsprite (4275). Pamadala says she gains it as well (5475). ‘I need to find something to stop her from increasing her own lifepoints’ Kamon thinks. Kamon says he wasn’t done with the Hidden Treasure yet. He can also summon Bowdarion (4/600/400/dark/Fiend/Bowdarion gains half of the attackpoints from the monster it destroys). Now he ends his turn. Pamadala says it was nothing now, she can still win. She plays Mage`s Revolution (spellcard – Destroy all monsters but Dark-Magician Girl on the field and deal 500 lifepoints per card that is destroyed). It is a total of 3500 lifepoints of damage (775). Good, Kamon says but he can still gain 375 lifepoints powerboost by his Snake-Statue (1150) and then gain another 500 lifepoints boost because of his Dreamsprite (1650). Pamadala`s lifepoints increase to 9850. She says this duel is far from over. “That you have more lifepoints ok, but I’m not ready to lose”. Pamadala asks if he forgot about her Sage`s Academy. It has another ability. Discard it and bring forward the next stage of magic, Sage`s Holy Grounds (fieldspellcard – Increase all your spellcaster by 1000 attack – and defencepoints. Each spellcaster can double-attack in a turn when you wish. When a spellcaster is destroyed, bring a level-4 or lower spellcaster onto the field). Now, her Dark-Magician Girl`s attack and defence are raised by 1000 to 3000/2700. She has more then enough attackpoints to defeat Kamon in one attack. And nothing can stop her now. “Go, Dark-Magician Girl, direct attack! Dark Magic attack!” Pamadala says. Kamon is fully hit and Dragen watches in horror as he expects Kamon`s lifepoints to drop to 0.

 

“I don’t think so, Pamadala” Kamon`s voice sounds. He appears from the smoke, with a trapcard activated. “What?! How can you do that? You cheated!” “No, this card is the Ring of Ayalala (trapcard – When your lifepoints are about to hit 0 activate this card from your deck or your hand. Increase your lifepoints by 4000. Then apply damage calculation normally. Deal as much of lifepoints as of the last destroyed monster on your field to the opponent). First I gain 4000 lifepoints, which makes it 5650, then I reduce them by 3000 to 2650. Then I choose to tribute my Six-Armed Snake-Statue in order to deliver you a blow of 1500 lifepoints (8350)” Kamon says triomphantically. “It is not over. I can still increase my lifepoints because of Honour Statue – Great Warlock (12.650)” “Lifepoints is not all, Pamadala. Now I summon my Double-Headed Leghul (3/500/500/earth/insect/this monster can attack directly and twice a turn) to the field. Go Double-Headed Leghul, attack her directly!” Kamon says (12.150). Double-Headed Leghul hits Pamadala, but at the same time Lainna collapses on the ground. Lean goes to her and asks what`s wrong. “It is the bond between the girl and the magician what is wrong” the voice of Gaianadon says. “What do you mean?” said Kamon. “That`s something you’ll find out soon enough” Gaianadon tells him. “OK. But first I attack directly again” Kamon said as Double-Headed Leghul strikes Pamadala again (11.650). Pamadala says, “It doesn’t matter. I play my White Apprentice – Leagull (4/1400/1200/light/spellcaster/destroy any magiccard you want during your standby phase)” “So what? I don’t have a magiccard activated” Kamon replies. “That`s right. But I do” “Destroy your own magiccard? You’re insane!” Kamon says. “I might be, but it is for a good cause. I destroy my Honour Statue – Great Warlock, but first I gain 2000 lifepoints (13.650) because when it is destroyed, I can gain 2000 lifepoints” “So what? Now you can’t gain lifepoints anymore” “That`s right but I gain something else” Pamadala says and the statue bursts open and a monster appears in black robes. “Behold the ultimate of the ultimate magicians, Dark Magician Emperor – Galactic Warlock (10/?/?/dark/spellcaster/This card can only be summoned when you destroy the magiccard Honour Statue – Great Warlock. The level of this card becomes your lifepoints reduced by the amount of lifepoints you had when you activated “Honour Statue – Great Warlock”. This card cannot be destroyed by any magic -, trap – or monstercards. Reduce your lifepoints to the original stats they were before you activated the magiccard “Honour Statue – Great Warlock”. When this card is destroyed, triple your lifepoints. Increase this monsters attack – and defence by 800 per turn it is on the field. When this card is summoned to the field, you can destroy any monster on the field without activating their effects)” “That`s one hell of an ugly magician” Kamon says. “It is the instrument of your destruction” Pamadala says………

 

Pamadala – 4000

Kamon – 2650

 

To be continued………

 

Next episode:

Graem finds the Caves of Shadows and a voice who leads him to the ruling lord of the shadows, the Neo-Spacian – Dark Panther. Before Graem can engage him in battle he must complete a trial first. In the meantime, Dyllan has found a survivor, Kelsey Bent, who plays an Ojama-deck. They set of to find more survivors.

 

Card of the chapter:

 

Dark Magician Emperor – Galactic Warlock

10/?/?/dark/spellcaster

Effect: This card can only be summoned when you destroy the magiccard Honour Statue – Great Warlock. The level of this card becomes your lifepoints reduced by the amount of lifepoints you had when you activated “Honour Statue – Great Warlock”. This card cannot be destroyed by any magic -, trap – or monstercards. Reduce your lifepoints to the original stats they were before you activated the magiccard “Honour Statue – Great Warlock”. When this card is destroyed, triple your lifepoints. Increase this monsters attack – and defence by 800 per turn it is on the field. When this card is summoned to the field, you can destroy any monster on the field without activating their effects.

[zane trusedale]

Once again great job.