.:~{[Ĩ¢ε]}~:.6 Star Celebration! Engine Chaos! ENGINE GOLEM Added! .:~{[9/40+]}~:..:~{[Ĩ¢ε]}~:.

[Godot]

[align=center]Well, yeah. I have FINALLY hit 6 stars *Applause.* I feel this is an important time. I have chosen my favorite card, and met a set around it. Engine Dragon will see the light of day again.

 

[spoiler=Engine Dragon, EN000]

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can equip 1 face-up Machine-Type monster you control to this card. Increase the ATK of this card by the amount equal to the Level of the equipped monster x200. You can remove from play 1 monster equipped to this by this cards effect to destroy 1 card on the field.

 

[spoiler=Engine Disposer EN001]

 

Once per turn, you can select 1 Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. You can equip 1 face-up Machine-Type monster you control to this card. By removing from play 1 monster equipped to this by this cards effect inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If this card has no cards equipped to it, destroy it during the End Phase.

 

[spoiler=Neo Engine Disposer EN002]

 

This card is also treated as a Thunder-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 face-up "Engine Disposer" you control. Once per turn, you can remove from play the top 5 cards of your Deck. Equip all Machine-Type monsters removed from play by this cards effect to this card. By removing from play 4 Machine-Type monsters equiped to this card, you can remove from play 2 face-up monsters your opponent controls. If you don't control another face-up "Engine" monster, destroy this card.

 

[spoiler=Engine Potion EN003]

 

Once per turn, you can add 1 "Engine Potion" from your Deck to your hand. By removing this face-up card from play, increase your Life Points by 500.

 

[spoiler=Engine Battery EN004]

 

Once per turn, you can equip 1 face-up "Engine" monster you control to this card. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 for each "Engine" monster equipped to this card. By removing from play 5 "Engine" monsters equipped to this card, increase the ATK of this card by 3000 until the End Phase. If there are more than 3 cards in your hand, destroy this card.

 

[spoiler=Engine Blader EN005]

Holoed

 

Non-Holoed

 

When this card is Summoned you can select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Equip the selected monster to this card. You can remove from play the equipped monster to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. By removing this face-up card from play, you can Special Summon 1 level 6 or lower "Engine" monster from your hand to your field. If you don't have an "Engine" monster in your hand, destroy this card.

 

[spoiler=Engine Dasher EN006]

 

When this card is Summoned, you can remove this card from play. If so, add 2 removed from play "Engine" monsters except "Engine Dasher" to your hand. By removing from play 3 face-up Machine-Type monsters you control, this card can attack directly. If so, discard 2 cards.

 

*NOT SURE ON OCG WITH THIS ONE

 

[spoiler=Neo Engine Potion EN007]

 

This card is also treated as an Aqua-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 2 face-up "Engine Potion" monsters you control from play. Once per turn, you can add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. By removing from play 1 Spell Card in your hand, increase your Life Points by 500. Once per turn, you can decrease your Life Points by 1000. If so, increase this cards ATK by 1000.

 

[spoiler=Engine Golem EN008]

 

Once per turn, you can remove 1 face-up Machine-Type monster you control. If so, place 1 "Engine Counter" (max.5) on this card. If this card has 5 Engine Counters on it, you can remove it from play. If so, add 1 "Engine Dragon" or 1 "Neo Engine" monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

Enjoy![/align]

[destron]

Perfect OCG as far as I can tell. OP'd however. Give another or a bigger drawback to the last effect. Holo and the name are meh. It's strange, I feel like I've seen this effect with that pic somewhere before . . .

 

8/10

 

Congrats on 6 stars!

[Godot]

Read the whole thing. This is one of my cards, edited.

 

-_-. And why the 8?

 

But thanks.

[Tortoise Kyle]

Love the card. Seems really balanced.

9/10

[ragnarok1945]

you need to put a limit to the number of machine monsters you can equip to this card

 

if not, this card's atk will become way too powerful too quickly and therefore makes it OPed

 

Other than that this card's effect is balanced and the OCG is good

 

8.7/10

[Jazin Kay]

you need to put a limit to the number of machine monsters you can equip to this card

 

if not' date=' this card's atk will become way too powerful too quickly and therefore makes it OPed[/quote']

It has a limit anyway. 5. And no it won't. Just a big ATK means little. Big reason why Five-Headed Dragon isn't tier. The destruction effect makes this at least playable. And he must CONTROL the monsters to equip, anyway. Making the ATK boost effect a little harder to abuse. AND it's one at a time. There is no "too quickly" about this.

 

 

Anyway, OCG fixes in bold:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can equip 1 face-up Machine-Type monster you control to this card. Increase the ATK of this card by the amount equal to the Level of the equipped monster x200. You can remove from play 1 card equipped to this card by this card's effect to destroy 1 card on the field.

 

I'd make the text white. Ultra letters with secret sparkles is a VERY common mistake on YCM. No idea why.

 

But yeah, a 6.2/10 for you, sir.

[Godot]

Err, yeah pretty sure your OCG fixing is wrong. As said, I fixed the OCG from before.

 

But 6/10 why?

[Jazin Kay]

No, my fixes aren't wrong. Technically, the second OCG fix is a preference, to avoid destruction abusr with Union monsters. Roll Out! would give this card an extra bullet to fire. Kinda hasty.

 

It's a 6/10 because of it's condition before my fixes.

[.Requiem]

Err' date=' yeah pretty sure your OCG fixing is wrong. As said, I fixed the OCG from before.

 

But 6/10 why?

[/quote']

 

His OCG is fine, just stop complaining.

 

Personally the card is nothing special, the special summon kinda kills it.

 

Also this card won't be really used, Chimeratech basically does a lot better job of being a beat stick.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG Fix ^^

 

"This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can equip 1 face-up Machine-Type monster you control to this card. This card gains ATK equal to the Level of the monster equipped to this card x200. You can remove from play 1 monster equipped to this card to destroy 1 card on the field."

 

The under line just means it the updated OCG version.

 

Jazin's OCG isnt wrong just the first fix. It's not only grammatically incorrect its OCG wise incorrect. his last "fix" isnt really a fix its a suggestion since your effect doesnt have to have it to be correct he just added it in there because he thought that made it better or something. But to sum that up I suppose your correct they are not Fixes. The second "fix" is not a fix its an "added in" effect.

 

I like this card. Correct it isnt anything new but it's quite good and it's useful.

 

Mind sending me the pic?

9/10

[Jazin Kay]

My text was adopted from actual cards.

 

It's not incorrect. It's factual.

[Godot]

When I get home, Pics in my houses computer.

 

 

No' date=' my fixes aren't wrong. Technically, the second OCG fix is a preference, to avoid destruction abusr with Union monsters. Roll Out! would give this card an extra bullet to fire. Kinda hasty.

 

It's a 6/10 because of it's condition before my fixes.

[/quote']

 

Mkay. I understand by what you mean with Roll Out!. I'll fix that.

 

Err' date=' yeah pretty sure your OCG fixing is wrong. As said, I fixed the OCG from before.

 

But 6/10 why?

[/quote']

 

His OCG is fine, just stop complaining.

 

Personally the card is nothing special, the special summon kinda kills it.

 

Also this card won't be really used, Chimeratech basically does a lot better job of being a beat stick.

 

Lolno. If it could be Special Summoned then it would be OPed.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Might I ask which card?

 

And the 2nd "fix" is not nessesary not EVERY card with an effect as such is required to include "by this cards effect" that bit is up to the creator.

[Jazin Kay]

I already clarified the 2nd fix.

 

Read the whole thread before you post.

[.Requiem]

Err' date=' yeah pretty sure your OCG fixing is wrong. As said, I fixed the OCG from before.

 

But 6/10 why?

[/quote']

 

His OCG is fine, just stop complaining.

 

Personally the card is nothing special, the special summon kinda kills it.

 

Also this card won't be really used, Chimeratech basically does a lot better job of being a beat stick.

 

Lolno. If it could be Special Summoned then it would be OPed.

 

It's not even useful, all you get is a beat stick with the possibility of destroying a card. There are better cards then this.

[Godot]

I never wanted to make it something special, just made a single one day and a lot of people liked it.

[Jazin Kay]

I like it...

 

It's like a machine Dark Armed Dragon, a little. People's expectations are too high, don't let it get you down.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

I already clarified the 2nd fix.

 

Read the whole thread before you post.

 

Such petty comments are mere assumptions upon the target. In essence' date=' I said that you are assuming I didnt which I actually did. Roll out would make this card abusable yes but this cant does not need to have that effect. There are many cards with effects as such and they dont have "with this cards effect" in them.

 

Now might I tell you a little something to help you not assume things?

 

Assuming tends to make you make an

[b']Ass[/b] of u and me

 

If you dont get it, put the bold words together and what does it spell?

[Jazin Kay]

Wow, I remember that saying.

 

From 2nd grade.

[Godot]

I like it...

 

It's like a machine Dark Armed Dragon' date=' a little. People's expectations are too high, don't let it get you down.

[/quote']

 

Thanks, last time I posted this card, with Broken OCG, there were a lot pf Expectations. I was off YCM for like 2 months and pulled it together for fun.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Wow' date=' I remember that saying.

 

From 2nd grade.

[/quote']

 

Indeed perhaps since you obviously never paid attetion to those little words of wisdom, perhaps there are a few other crucial points you should go over again before coming to me with more ignorant comments. Now if you don't mind I'm dropping this petty argument...IF you can call this an argument...So that I don't waste anymore comment spaces for Ice's comments.

[Jazin Kay]

Ya doin' good, young blood. I see strong wings beneath your eggshell.

 

Take my words, words from a regional champion, that your card is good and that given the deck for it, I would use it.

 

Geass Weeaboo: goddamn, you ramble more than a whore being choked out. You're so full of yourself and it makes me rofl.

[Godot]

^Thanks, I may make a set for it, if I get an Idea, or get some inspiration.

[Jazin Kay]

Union support set?

 

... That's a good idea, I should do that. Naw, you go ahead. :)

[Godot]

I dont want it to be a Union set, I want it to be a little more unique.

 

Maybe an Engine set, revolves around Equiping and removing from play Monsters?