Arctic -> Archiver - Harbin

[Ăɍȼẗîȼ]

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Once per turn, during your Main Phase 2, you can remove from play 1 monster you control until your next Standby Phase. When a card is removed from play by this cards effect, you can select and activate one of the following effects:

• Pay 1500 Life Points and Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Deck.

• Pay 1000 Life Points and add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.

• Pay 500 Life Points and send the top card from your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard.

 

The OCG seems weird slightly. If anyone can give me a fix that'd be appreciated.

 

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[Bengal]

Not bad, the image is alright, but doesn't have much of a background, and the OCG is alright, only a few errors. (1 monster on your field from play = remove from play 1 monster you control / one = 1)

 

The seems relatively balanced, with the ATK and DEF being low and the effects being reasonable. However, the first effect needs a Level limit, or it makes the card overpowered, considering the possibilities with a fairly low LP payment.

 

Also, the search/mill effects are nice, but I would have liked to see more of a heal effect as it is a LIGHT monster. I'm also not a huge fan of list effects, but I suppose as long as it is balanced, it is versatile.

 

As for playability, it doesn't really fit in a RFP type of deck, and I'm not sure you would add some RFP cards to a LIGHT based deck just to use this card.

 

7/10

[ragnarok1945]

all simple effects, but for the most part they're balanced

 

Only the first one you need to make a level limit to it, that's a little TOO flexible of an effect there

 

8/10

[-DOOM]

Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 monster you control until your next Standby Phase. If you do, you can select and activate one of the following effects:

• Pay 1500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster from your Deck.

• Pay 1000 Life Points to add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.

• Pay 500 Life Points to send the top card from your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard.

 

Balanced and good effect, picture is ok.

8/10

[Almishal]

The pic is Nanoha from Magical Lyrical Nanoha series... Oh well....

Back to topic:

You're not planning on adding this card to a Fortune Lady Deck I supposed?

If yes, a good combo with Lighty... with a good drawback ( I hate FL swarming.... >___>;; )

Seems balance to me. Except Effect # 1, Must add a level limit like what ragnarok1945 said.

~ Almishal

P.S. 9/10 btw... ( I should add a decimal next time... >_>;; )

[Ăɍȼẗîȼ]

Thanks for comments all.

 

I planned to make more cards with Archiver title maybe...

 

We'll see.

 

Thanks for fixes, Bengal and HP Doom.

[Ăɍȼẗîȼ]

*bump*

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

The picture is overused but I'm not sure if you'd know this since you seem to be new.

 

the OCG is perfect and as is the effect. However, it maybe a tad UP. It seems like the LP cost for the first effect is a tad to high. I do see the pattern of multiples of 5 but it seems vastly over exaggerated to me. A mere 1000 should suffice. But perhaps I'm wrong be sure to check with other comments to see if they share my opinion before making changes.

 

As for your rate: 8/10