~Wright~ Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard by removing from play 5 "Ancient Gear" monsters from your Graveyard, 1 of which must be "Ancient Gear Golem" and 1 of which must be "Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon." This card gains ATK and DEF equal to its Level x400. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Kozaky" from your Deck. If "Kozaky" would be selected as an attack target, or the target of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster's effect, target this card instead. Once per turn you can Special Summon a removed from play Machine-Type monster by reducing this card's Level by 2 if you control "Kozaky." Once per turn, you can remove Levels from this card to remove the same amount of Levels from an "Ancient Gear" monster in your hand. When this card is destroyed, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. Then Special Summon 1 of your removed from play "Ancient Gear" monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Floridakid36 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Very good concept. I just have one suggestion. If "Kozaky" would be selected as an attack target' date=' or the target of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster's effect, target this card instead. [/quote'] Well this is just me talking and maybe i'm wrong, but I think it should be If "Kozaky" would be selected as an attack target, or the target of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster's effect, YOU MAY CHOOSE TO target this card instead. Because what if right when you special summon Kozaky you're opponent uses a card which destroys him?Then this card is useless unless... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Thanks for the critique. :D Please critique more. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Quite a long-winded effect, but I like it. OCG is accurate and I see no typos. Art looks neat. Reminds me of Big O. <3 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 I like the art and OCG Art reminds me of Upgrade10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 The OCG looks just fine the way it is and I see no need for changes the atk and def determining effect however, do you mean gain atk/def by 400 per level of ALL of the 5 monsters removed from play? If so then that is WAY too OPed 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Read it again. It gains it's ATK and DEF base on IT'S OWN level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 good card8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 The OCG looks just fine the way it is and I see no need for changes the atk and def determining effect however' date=' do you mean gain atk/def by 400 per level of ALL of the 5 monsters removed from play? If so then that is WAY too OPed 8/10[/quote']NOOOO Ragnarok. LOL It's based on its own level. :DShould I add anything to the effect? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 ok if it's based on it's own level then the atk is just fine for it, I'll raise my rate to 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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