dahljv Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 This card is used to Ritual Summon "Dimensional Sorcerer". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 6 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Dimension Warp". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 6 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. All monsters destroyed by this card are removed from play. Each time a card is removed from play, this monster gains 100 ATK points. If this face-up card is destroyed or removed from the field, it is removed from play. image found at:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-160642.html - thanks to Leo As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select "Dimensional Sorcerer" as an attack target. If this face-up card is destroyed or removed from the field, it is removed from play. image found at:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-133431.html - thanks to Wanderley You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack, and you have no monsters on the field. Pay 500 Life Points. Negate the attack, and Special Summon 1 Spellcaster-type monster from your Graveyard. image found at:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-160642.html - thanks to Leo image found at:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-160642.html - thanks to Leo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Last card has OCG Problems. Should be "You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack, and you have no monsters on the field. Negate the attack, and Special Summon 1 Spellcaster-type monster from your Graveyard." Also, add more of a draw back to it. 5/10 on that card until fixed. Dimensional Warp could use a better pic. 9.5/10 Dimensional Sorcerer Some OCG problems, and I recommend you get a better picture. Some-what overpowered if used right. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dahljv Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Hey thanks I appreciate the advice. So this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 I think you should of edited the first page, but meh. Anyways, better, although like I said, I think you should place a draw-back, Like make it only level 4 or lower, or it cost like X points to use. 7/10 Also, might I suggest changing the picture in your card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 You search around and eventually find good picture. You can also use these, but remember to credit them. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-133431.html - Wanderley http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-160642.html - Leo http://s825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ - JazinKay Also, on the new card, lower it to 500 life points, and replace LP with Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dahljv Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Ok thanks again. Just to clarify, to "credit them" I just say underneath it or something where I got the picture and that's it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Yup. Or on the page, below the card. So people know where the picture came from. =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Dimensional Sorceror's effect is merely Dark Magician of Chaos's effect minus it's own drawback of being removed from play Uped, but then most rituals are UPed anyway 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dahljv Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Hopefully this updated version is slightly better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 now it's almost IDENTICAL to Dark Magician of Chaos's effect, which makes it even less original Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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