~Wright~ Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 [spoiler=]"Destiny Hero Defender" + "Solar Flare Dragon"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards you control to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) When this card is Fusion Summoned, change all face-up Attack Position monsters to face-up Defense Position, and inflict 200 damage to their controllers for each card whose position was changed by this effect. Players cannot change a Defense Position monster they control to Attack Position, except by paying 500 Life Points. Any monster that attacks is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. During you End Phase, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of FIRE monsters you control x200. Please AddressI am trying to find a new suitable picture for this card, but am not sure what to go with. If you have a good picture in mind, please post it. I am not sure this card is very playable, due to the fact I've never seen a player with both defender and solar flare dragon out. If you have any better suggestions for fusion material monsters to make this card more playable, please suggest. .I have raised the card's ATK to 1600, and added a constant burn effect to the card, similar to solar flare dragon. What do you think of this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 the picture is overused For the burn effect, you should apply it to yourself as well for all the monsters on your side of the field also Problem is this card has WAY too much def for lv5. I'd drop the def down to 2100ish so your opponent has a slightly easier time to kill it with a monster 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 It is a fusion with D-hero defender, so it should have a lot of DEF. I think its good. 9.10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 good card8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 the picture is overused Kay' date=' trying to find a new one. if you have a good one in mind, please post it or PM it to me.[/b'] For the burn effect, you should apply it to yourself as well for all the monsters on your side of the field also Thank you, changes have been made. Problem is this card has WAY too much def for lv5. I'd drop the def down to 2100ish so your opponent has a slightly easier time to kill it with a monster Not sure about this point. Defender is a 4 star with 2700 defense, but it has a drawback. I think it would be unrealistic, due to the Fusion Material monsters used, to lower the defense. Should I add a drawback to the huge defense? 8/10 Thank you for rating. :D It is a fusion with D-hero defender' date=' so it should have a lot of DEF. I think its good. 9.10 [b']Thank you for the critique. Could you please rate the card in more detail? good card8.9/10Thank you for the critique. Could you please rate the card in more detail? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 OffTopic - For Picture - http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Creatures/Okenuth_by_GENZOMAN2.jpg Credit goes to JazinKay for picture. OnTopic - Good Card, can't see how to fix. Can't really think on how to go to detail. I don't see how someone would have both those monsters. Maybe change it to 2 other FIRE monsters? Ragnarok covered most, if not, all, so 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 since you made the changes I'll be raising my rate to 8.9/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkest Hour Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 I like this card. High defense usually isn't a problem since most decks have random bouts of blow up sheet, so this card looks extremely good. I don't even care about the picture, the card itself is awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell-Razor Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 "Destiny Hero Defender" + "Solar Flare Dragon"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Extra Deck by returning the above cards you control to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) When this card is Fusion Summoned, change all face-up Attack Position monsters to face-up Defense Position, and inflict 200 points of damage to the controller of those cards for each card's Battle Position changed by this effect. Players cannot change a Defense Position monster they control to Attack Position, except by paying 500 Life Points. Any monster that attacks is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. Its now called Extra Deck, and some people will tell you to leave out "points of". They are the only errors i could see. Yes despite being unlikely that you would have these two cards on field together it is not impossible so this card seems fine in that way. Pic is awesome it doesn't matter if it is overused pics that good never lose awesomeness. DEF is quiet fine it could even be 2800 and i think ATK should be bit higher. Effect overall is a good one and i like it, i used to like playing with a very annoying little pyro deck and solar flares were big parts of it, it pissed off quiet a few people, but totally got blown out of water due to current speed of game, awh the good old days.. Anyway back to the card i think it is a very good nicely taught out card and i am giving it a rate of 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superdoopertrooper Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 This is a good card, but there are a few things wrong with it. The first error is in the title, the hyphen has a space after it but not before it. I think the cards name is a bit dodgey too. The defence position effect is good, but the burn effect is kinda lame. Solar flare dragon had a good, constant burning effect, i think this card needs one too. The attacking effect isnt damage, it is a cost. Perhaps: inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each FIRE monster you control during your End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 This is a good card' date=' but there are a few things wrong with it. The first error is in the title, the hyphen has a space after it but not before it. [b']I will fix. Thank you. :D[/b] I think the cards name is a bit dodgey too. Can you explain, and possibly give a better name?The defence position effect is good, but the burn effect is kinda lame. why do you think?Solar flare dragon had a good, constant burning effect, i think this card needs one too. good point, I'll add one.The attacking effect isnt damage, it is a cost. Perhaps: inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each FIRE monster you control during your End Phase.I'll think about it. Thank you for the critique! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Bumpplease give advice and critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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