bluefu123 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Please help with OCG errors and pictures and more. IM NEW!!!I tried to encorporate monsters that can act as magic cards and monster cards... hope you enjoy! This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be summoned by the effect of "Divine Offering" You may choose to activate one of the following effects each turn.- This card may be used as a monster card. This card gains 500 attack and defense points for every "Divine Wing" in the grave yard. If this card were to be destroyed, remove 1 "Divine Wing" monster card from play- This card may be used as a magic card. Use any magic card effect of a "Divine Wing" monster in your graveyard. This monsters attack becomes 0 for 1 turn This card can only be activated if the monster card "Divine Wing: Arca the War Goddess" is in your graveyard. Remove "Divine Wing: Arca the War goddess" from play, as well as 1 other "Divine Wing" monster. Then Special Summon "Divine Wing: Arcano the War God" From your hand, deck, or graveyard You may choose to activate one of the following effects each turn.- This monster may be treated as a monster card. This card gains 500 attack points for each "Divine Wing" monster card there is in your graveyard. When this card is destroyed add 1 "Divine Wing Offering" to your hand.-This card may be treated as a magic card. For every "Divine Wing" monster in your graveyard, your opponent loses x300 life points. This monsters attack becomes 0 for 1 turn. 1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non tuner "Divine Wing" monstersYou may activate one of the following effects each turn.-This card may be treated as a monster. If this card were to be destroyed, send 1 "Divine Wing" monster card to the graveyard. Then draw 1 card -This card may be treated as a magic card. Destroy all cards on the field and for each"Divine Wing" sent to the graveyard by this effect, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent. You may choose to activate one of the following effects each turn.- This card may be treated as a monster card. As long as there is another "Divine Wing" monster card on your side of the field, this card cannot be attacked.-This card may be treated as a magic card. Pay 500 life points. Send one "Divine Wing" from your deck to your hand. Your deck is then shuffled. If this effect is used, this monsters attack points become 0 for 1 turn. You may choose to activate one of the following effects each turn.-This card may be treated as a monster card. You may choose the target of your opponents attacks-This card may be treated as a trap card. Send 1 "Divine Wing" monster from your field to the graveyard. End your opponents battle phase. You may only activate this card when you control 1 or more "Divine Wing" monsters. You may choose from one of the following effects to activate.-Send the top 5 cards of your deck to the grave yard. If a "Divine Wing" monster is sent to the graveyard, end your opponents battle phase.-Activate the 2nd effect of any "Divine Wing" monster in your hand, graveyard or field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holygiant Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 You're very good at this for a newbie! Graveyard is one word and hand is capitalized. It is preferable that you use 'spell' and not 'magic', but I'm not sure if that applies in this case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefu123 Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 oops i messed up on some of the card effects, can i just edit the post even if it is already out?You're very good at this for a newbie! Graveyard is one word and hand is capitalized. It is preferable that you use 'spell' and not 'magic'' date=' but I'm not sure if that applies in this case.[/quote'] Ok thanks. I'm not very sure how to edit the post though.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 I don't see the Mirror Feather's picture most of the effects are OPed, but you're new and this is something to be expected And they're not REDICULOUSLY Oped anyway, so a few drawbacks will take care of the problem 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefu123 Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 I don't see the Mirror Feather's picture most of the effects are OPed' date=' but you're new and this is something to be expected And they're not REDICULOUSLY Oped anyway, so a few drawbacks will take care of the problem 7.9/10[/quote'] Whats OPed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefu123 Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 I'm almost done with the set....... (or at least i think i am) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holygiant Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 oops i messed up on some of the card effects' date=' can i just edit the post even if it is already out?[hr']You're very good at this for a newbie! Graveyard is one word and hand is capitalized. It is preferable that you use 'spell' and not 'magic'' date=' but I'm not sure if that applies in this case.[/quote'] Ok thanks. I'm not very sure how to edit the post though.... Go back to your card maker, edit it in the description, click the card, copy the link and replace it with your old card's link. And I almost forgot about the score! 8.6/10 (due to those little errors, fix them and this could be a 9/10 at the very least) :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefu123 Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 oops i messed up on some of the card effects' date=' can i just edit the post even if it is already out?[hr']You're very good at this for a newbie! Graveyard is one word and hand is capitalized. It is preferable that you use 'spell' and not 'magic'' date=' but I'm not sure if that applies in this case.[/quote'] Ok thanks. I'm not very sure how to edit the post though.... Go back to your card maker, edit it in the description, click the card, copy the link and replace it with your old card's link. And I almost forgot about the score! 8.6/10 (due to those little errors, fix them and this could be a 9/10 at the very least) :) Oops... i'm so sorry i didn't think about the errors in the new one... i'll try to fix it though... so the errors were... magic to spell? and keep graveyard as one word and capitalize hand? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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