Mr.Poison Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Effect: This Card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. It can only be special summoned when you tribute 1 Fiend-Type Monster and 1 Machine-Type Monster. When this card is successfully summoned you can special summon 1 Mr.Poison from your deck or hand to the field. When this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle you can tribute 1 Mr.Fear or 1 Mr.Poison and pay 750 life points to special summon 1 Avenger - Tripod from your deck, hand or graveyard. During your standby Phase you can select 1 random card from your opponents hand if its a monster card equip it to this card. Increase its ATK by 250 for each equipped monster card on this monster. If its a Spell Card destroy both cards. If its a Trap card you lose 500 life points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 is this of war of the worlds probably not but is it?i give this a 9/10 in my case perfect OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Poison Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 thx and im not sure if its from war of the worlds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Not bad, the image is alright, and the OCG just has some capitalization errors. (normal summoned or set = Normal Summoned or Set / tribute = Tribute) Also, you need to put quotations around card names. The effect seems kind of listy and unrelated in places. Using two cards that aren't real cards also makes it essential unplayable. However, it does seem relatively balanced even though that is hard to asses without knowing about "Mr. Poison" and "Mr. Fear", but since a good part of the effect only activates when it is destroyed by battle, the high ATK and DEF limits that possibility. For the 3rd tp last sentence though, I would add "Once only" at the beginning. Maybe focus on simplicity more, it makes it easier to balance and make playable. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Poison Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Mr.Poison and Mr.Fear were the first card's i made you can find them in realist cards page 2,3 or 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Ahh I understand.. Thats a pretty good effect....6/10 *I dont give New Members anything above 6/10, 6/10 is the best you can get* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Poison Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 ok thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 U know what I change my mind.......8/10 and Hey your a member now (= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Poison Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 XD thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Mr.Poison and Mr.Fear were the first card's i made you can find them in realist cards page 2' date='3 or 4[/quote'] Alright, well since they both are fairly powerful, it doesn't really help in balancing this out. Maybe add a cost to SS "Mr. Poison", or remove Deck from the place it can be SS from. Also, I would post any cards used in a card's effect that aren't real cards in a spoiler or something bellow the card. That way it makes it easier to determine playability and balance, so someone wouldn't have to look for the cards elsewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Poison Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 ok.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreamer! Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 awesome picture and card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 reminds me of War of the Worlds picture the OCG for the most part is good, just capitalize a few things and you'll be fine the only real problem is the card effect seems to be unrelated 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Poison Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 y know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 reminds me of War of the Worlds picture the OCG for the most part is good' date=' just capitalize a few things and you'll be fine the only real problem is the card effect seems to be unrelated 7/10[/quote'] thats what i said- i think it is from war of the world because it does look a cartoony tripod. so it probably is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Poison Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 y your right i found out thats its a war of the worlds tripod picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 i knew it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Poison Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 y i just found out checked the image url Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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