Dmaker Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 plz correct OCG and plz comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 I don't get it right and OCG is bad.From what i get seems a bit OP.attack phase = Battel PhaseCould you post the effect to be easy to correct it???Also Rate:8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 During your Battle Phase, you may send cards from your side of the field to the Graveyard. If a Spell Card is sent, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200. If a Monster Card is sent, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 300. If a Trap Card is sent, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 400. Seems a little bland to me, but pretty balanced, imo.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreamer! Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 major OCG errors, creative effect10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 only a few OCG errors, and its jsut my opinion, but shouldn't it be an Insect-type from the pic? lolz 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Looks like a Scorpion, reminds me of Brainstorm. Attack Phase = Battle Phase Everything else is fine 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Lots of OCG errors, beast in the title should be capitalized, and it's UP. Plus, remove the border from the pic. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 OCG errors (a lot like Frozen Judment said), common name, picture is okay, bland but okay effect. Keep Trying. My suggestion is that you must add creative effects with drawbacks, and check the OCG thread, and raise the ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Brainstorm? From what the Nick game showIts a pretty Good card The name is Unorginal though7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 During your Battle Phase' date=' you may send cards from your side of the field to the Graveyard. If a Spell Card is sent, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200. If a Monster Card is sent, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 300. If a Trap Card is sent, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 400. Seems a little bland to me, but pretty balanced, imo.7/10[/quote']all the card effect has errors, but here is the correction. do the changes and i rate your card. pic is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 given the picture it looks better as an insect type I find the effect too simple for merely gaining and losing atk and def, you should give it another effect 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Should be a Beast or an Insect. Pic needs to be cropped too. OCG fix: During your Battle Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand. Activate the following effects for the card discarded:-Spell: This card gains 200 ATK and DEF.-Monster: This card gains 300 ATK and DEF.-Trap: This card gains 400 ATK and DEF. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 thanks, keep commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 major OCG errors' date=' creative effect10/10[/quote'] only a few OCG errors' date=' and its jsut my opinion, but shouldn't it be an Insect-type from the pic? lolz 7/10[/quote'] Try to actually be helpful to the card creator, dont just post for the sake of an increase. Errors have been corrected by the other members, the image is really nice though but it would be best to see if you can or another can crop the border, its stats balance for its effect also ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 The OCG is frankly appalling. The pic has a huge border. The effect though is balanced so I will give 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 CROPPED, NOW INSECT AND EDITEDkeep commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 It's better now. Still UP and there's still some OCG errors. Beast should still be caps. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 what in the effect, or in the title or in the effect-show me-ignore this bit- i found it.by the way its only got 900 atk because its effect can happen every time, giving it a big ATK, if i gave it 1900 atk or somin the ATK aand DEF would be too big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MTSF Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 So only 1300 ATK tops?4.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 It's really UP. Raise it's ATK to 1600 or something and don't make it a level 6.rest is ok, 7,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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