DrkSmsh Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 If there is anything wrong with this please tell me so i can correct it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreamer! Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 awesome card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrkSmsh Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 awesome card 10/10 Are you just pasting the same thing over and over? About the card-bad ocgok picso-so concept4.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 for the 1st sentence you need to add if you don't discard a card from your hand, destroy this card Effect is too bland right now, you should give it another effect to make it interesting 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 effect may be slightly bland, but it was a good attempt and not that much is wrong with OCG (basically just some misspells and you worded some things wrong but in my opinion all minor) the pic is great. so for a new member my rating is 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 a few OCG errors, but not major enough to be un-understandable. decent first attempt, keep practicing. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fienddragonman Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Nice card, but kinda overpowered. Also I agree that it could be better worded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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