First card

[armarno]

OK i just wanted to know its not like i was not going to edit. Anyway ok here it is This lacks original card ideas but i have a i used to have a harpie deck and i wanted that one deck leader to make that deck.

 

Thanks to ♥Łövëły Łäđy♥ for editing my effect. :D

 

Also What does drawback mean? And Oped? And please post on my thread on the Questions & Help Forum.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Reported.

 

You may be new but it should not have escaped you that there is a Section for asking questions.

[Spartan919]

Here ya go:

 

1. After you make a card, click on it

2. copy the code that appears beneath it; it will look like this:

3. Paste that code into your thread.

[☨Genocide ☨]

Sigh, I wonder why nobody bothers to check the help section. Okay, to you and every single person who does this, please check the Help section first, I do believe its an important topic. But here we go.

 

In the card maker. Click on the card. a little bar will appear, and after it goes away, a code will appear. Copy that code [ctrlc]. Come back here and paste the code into the thread [ctrlv]

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Terrible OCG.

 

The Picture is OK but its just an updated new color harpie and a tad unimpressive. It's Overpowering as well it's level should be 7 and it's attack will need to be 2300 since it gets a boost.

 

OCG fix:

"This card is also treated as "Harpie Lady". When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Harpie Lady" from your Deck or Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK if you control 1 other "Harpie Lady"."

 

You need a drawback as well.

 

5/10

[armarno]

Terrible OCG.

 

The Picture is OK but its just an updated new color harpie and a tad unimpressive. It's Overpowering as well it's level should be 7 and it's attack will need to be 2300 since it gets a boost.

 

OCG fix:

"This card is also treated as "Harpie Lady". When this card is Normal Summoned' date=' you can Special Summon 1 "Harpie Lady" from your [b']Deck or Graveyard[/b]. This card gains 200 ATK if you control 1 other "Harpie Lady"."

 

You need a drawback as well.

 

5/10

 

Ok thanks. Yeah im not the best at making cards and thanks for your reply. I also edited it with your help.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

It's ok. You'll get better ^^. Just keep working on them and start remembering the new OCG and how to balance cards. If you ever need help with balancing or OCG jsut PM me ^^.

[Spartan919]

It's pretty good for a beginner; OCG is good, tab bit overpowered, but overall pretty nice. 7/10

[ragnarok1945]

Glad to see you're helping others, LLD

 

You already pointed out the OCG errors, and this is much better than the other Harpie Ladies

 

Still, there's no drawback to this card, and therefore is OPed

 

6.8/10

[☨Genocide ☨]

Ohhh, this is pretty nice for a first card. Sorry if I was a little.......well you know what I mean, but many people do thid and end up just having it locked. Not an original pic, but changed enough to distinct from the other Harpies, so thats fine. I think its nice and balanced but maybe raise the DEF a little...cuz if somebody uses shield and sword....byebye. 9/10

[armarno]

Ok thanks. I rasied it.