Spartan919 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Image obtained from BloodDragon58. Please CnC and fix any OCG errors so that I may learn from my mistakes. Following Kliffi's/bott52's OCG so far, please edit and fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Ummm I don't get it. What do you mean by reverse the summoning requirements? So a level 7 would need -2 Tributes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 This is one REALLY weird wording, I'm not even sure what you're getting at in the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Hmm... This is what I'm getting from this: All monster 5 Stars or higher do not require Tributes to be Normal Summoned or Set. 4 Star and 3 Star monsters require 1 Tribute to be Normal Summon or Set, and 2 Star and 1 Star monsters require 2 Tributes to be Normal Summoned or Set. --- Very VERY unclear OCG. That's probably the biggest problem.This card is probably very abusable... Pic: 7/10 - Boring, cool reverse effect though.Name: Perfect. 10/10OCG: 5/10 - UnclearCreativity 9/10 - Pretty damn creative lol 31/40 = 77.5% = 7.75/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Card has been edited. Please rate, criticize, and please, SOMEBODY, fix my OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 that is going to make it WAY too OPed basically that means all cards with special summoning conditions can now bypass their conditions and go right to the field This needs drawbacks right away 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 I have no idea how to fix the 1st part. 2nd Part:Halve the ATK of all Level 5 and above monsters. Double the ATK of all Level 4 and below monsters. Not a huge fan of the pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Um, it's supposed to be Level 4 and below. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Great. It's more balanced now, but the OCG is extremely unclear. I recommend using my idea ;) or something of the like: You could flip around the last part: "1 Star and 2 Star monsters require 1 Tribute to be Normal Summon or Set, and 3 Star and 4 Star monsters require 2 Tributes to be Normal Summoned or Set." better. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Kay, I will take that into consideration, Kliffi, thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Um' date=' it's supposed to be Level 4 and below.[/quote'] Edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Kay, have it. Any more OCG help, anybody?Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 make it so 3 and 4 require 2 tributes, and 1 and 2 require 1. more balanced. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 That makes sense. Thank you Kliffi, for everything you are helping me on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Ok, took a while, but I think I found a pic that would work.you dont have to use it if you dont like it And now that I know what you mean, I'll hapilly rate you 8/10, interesting effect, but triping a 1 star isnt that great, since most 1 stars are 300 ATK or under Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Like your pic, using. P.S. do you think I should make it X4 or more for level 1 and 2, to balance more? Just asking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Like your pic' date=' using. P.S. do you think I should make it X4 or more for level 1 and 2, to balance more? Just asking.[/quote'] I'm not sure, it would vary, I think this is a bold but shaky idea as many things can go wrong. I'll let you know if I come up with something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bott52 Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 I think the effect should be worded a little like this"Every monster that is level 5 or above no longer needs any tributes. (Special Summon excluded). Each Level 3 or 4 monster now requires 2 Tributes to Summon. Each Level 1 or 2 monster requires 1 Tribute to summon. Halve the ATK and DEF of all Level 5 and above monsters. Double the ATK and DEF of all Level 3 and Level 4 monsters. Triple the ATK and DEF of all Level 1 and 2 monsters." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 That sounds about right; thank you. Do you think tripling the attack is enough, or does it need to be higher? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Correction from Bott52; there are minor OCG problems: "Every monster that is level 5 or above no longer needs any Tributes to summon. (Special Summon excluded). Level 3 or 4 monsters require 2 Tributes to summon. Level 1 or 2 monsters require 1 Tribute to summon. Halve the ATK and DEF of all Level 5 and above monsters. Double the ATK and DEF of all Level 3 and 4 monsters. Triple the ATK and DEF of all Level 1 and 2 monsters." That should be about right. It's a real trippy effect rofl. Cool though. With all the fix-ups, it is pretty sweet. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreamer! Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Major OCG errors, effect is creative10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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