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Text and lighting are terrible.

Nine times out of ten, don't use text, tags hardly ever need it, and more often than not it makes the whole composition look worse than it did originally.

As for the lighting, there's literally no effort I can see into actually identifying a single light source, and focusing the light in the tag to make it look realistic. At the moment, it is very obviously a bunch of individual layers slapped on top of each other, it's just a bad design, fix the lighting, and a piece can actually be considered art.

Overall, more effort, you obviously have the requisite skill, you just don't seem to care enough to make your tags any better than the novice level they are now.

Keep trying though, you have potential.

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