kliffi Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing your entire respective Graveyard from play. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of all face-up monsters on your side of the field except for this card. Both players must pay 500 Life Points during their respective Standby Phases (this is not optional). When a monster is summoned or flipped face-up, or a Spell or Trap card is activated, place 1 Ice Counter on this card (max. 5). When the 5th Ice Counter is placed on this card, remove all Ice Counters from this card and inflict 1000 damage to the player that summoned or flipped a monster face-up, or activated a Spell or Trap Card at that time. Whenever Ice Counters are removed from this card, no monsters can declare an attack for 1 turn. Decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for every FIRE monster on the field. --- That's it! Rate/Comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 The drawback of it losing atk isn't enough as your opponent may not be playing a FIRE deck With regards to your other effects, they aren't bad, you just need to add more drawbacks to this card 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masey 4 AVFC Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Drawbacks but otherwise 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Edited :) This card now has 3 Drawbacks: All of the owners cards are removed from play If the opponent is losing, this card's ATK is lowered -500 ATK for all FIRE monsters Do I need any more? Most of these effects aren't directed toward your opponent; they effect both players, so I'd like to think its pretty balanced now. Thanks for the critiques. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uskaks Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 I like it. It looks pretty balanced, and the picture is really cool. Only issue I see is this being abused with all this "removed from play" business... With like Golden Homunculus and stuff. Other than that, I see no problems. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 dude sending that many cards out of play is not a draw back when you have gran maju da thingymaduha but nice effects all round I say the cards should go from your hand out of play or your deck not grave mate I meen theye would not make a card to send 5 cards out of play if it did not help like the idea very usefull. 13 points for that highist score so far since I just started this system lol just so you know these points acumulate so ceep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axrider625 Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 you know, this card would go GREAT with golden homunculus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 There we go. THat should fix it. As long as Frostbite is face-up on the field, he negates the effects of all monsters on your side of the field. I think that balances it. Any other critiques? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 dude that just made it 10 times better good fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masked Killer Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 -Pretty Balanced.-OCG Fix:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing all monsters on your Graveyard from play. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of all face-up monsters on your side of the field except for this card. Both players must pay 500 Life Points during their respective Standby Phases (this is not optional). When a monster is summoned or flipped face-up, or a Spell or Trap card is activated, place 1 Ice Counter on this card (max. 5). When the 5th Ice Counter is placed on this card, remove all Ice Counters from this card and inflict 1000 damage to the player that summoned or flipped a monster face-up, or activated a Spell or Trap Card at that time. Whenever Ice Counters are removed from this card, no monsters can declare an attack for 1 turn. Decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for every FIRE monster on the field. -Overall: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 The effect isnt to remove all monsters, its to remove all cards lol because its a really good card. Because that would be too easy if you, say had just 1 monster in your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Op'ed, Add Draw backs And its good. 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Op'ed' date=' Add Draw backs And its good. 8.4/10[/quote'] Could you clarify/explain? How is it OP'd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Clarify I repeat dude sending that many cards out of play is not a draw back when you have gran maju da thingymaduha 5 cards and this lvl 3 will be at 2000 all that and this card in one turn op but then that is now negated by the fact of the new draw back so it is no longer op he is just stupid and did not read the rest of the posts lol good work kliffi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Thanks. He obviously didn't read the card right either, cuz i even edited the initial post. rofl... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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