NeriesUmbra Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 [align=center]This deck is built to destroy confidence and play with your opponents mind and moral. Tell me what you think and any ocg that needs fixing ty. [spoiler=EN001] effect This card gains 100 ATK for every "Of Umbra" monster face-up on the field. Once per turn, place 1 Spell Counter on this card (Max 2). Remove one spell counter from the field to have your opponent choose 1 of the following effects:- Your opponent tributes 1 monster on his/her field.- This card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase of this Turn.This effect can be used during your opponent's turn. [spoiler=EN002] effect During each of your Standby Phase(s), your opponent chooses one of the following effects to activate:- You send 1 Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard and gain Life Points equal to the level of the monster x 200 that was sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect.- You add 1 Monster from your Deck to your hand and take damage equal to the level of the monster x 200 added to your hand by this card's effect. [spoiler=EN003] effect Once per turn, you can add 1 Spell Counter to this card (Max 5). If this card attacks an opponent's monster, your opponent chooses one of the following effects:- This Card gains 100 ATK for every Spell Counter on this card during the Damage Step only.- Your opponent takes damage equal to the number of Spell Counters x 100 on this card. [spoiler=EN004] effect Once per turn, by removing 5 Spell Counters from the field, your opponent chooses 1 of the following effects:- You can can take control of 1 Monster your opponent controls.- You can Special Summon 1 level 5 or below Monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field.As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all face-up Monsters become Tuners, except this card. [spoiler=EN005] effect 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn your opponent must choose one of the following effects.1.Switch this card's ATK and DEF until next turn's End Phase.2.Your opponent discards 1 card3.Add 1 card from your Deck to your hand and lower the DEF of this card by 1000 [spoiler=EN006] effect You can Tribute this card to activate it's effect. Add any 4 non-Monster Cards and 1 Monster Card from your deck to your hand, do not show your opponent. Your opponent then selects 1 of the Cards added to your hand by this Cards effect. If your opponent selects a non-Monster card Discard that card and add all other Cards that were drawn by this Cards effect back to the Deck. If your opponent selects a Monster card you can Special Summon that card to your side of the Field ignoring all Summoning conditions, then add all other cards that where Drawn by this Cards effect back to the Deck. If this Card is destroyed by Battle you can add 1 level 3 Monster Card from your Deck to your Hand. [spoiler=EN007] effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending out of play from your Graveyard 4 "Of Umbra" Monster with different names. Once per turn you can have your opponent chooses 1 of the following effects.-You pay 1000 Life points to destroy all cards on the field apart from this card.-You pay 1000 Life points to discard all cards in your opponents hand.-You pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon as many of your removed from play monsters as possible. During the End Phase, remove from play all monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect. [spoiler=EN008] effect Pay 1000 Life Points to activate this card. Once during your Standby Phase your opponent selects 2 different numbers from 1 to 6 then roll a die. If the result of the die roll is the same as 1 of the numbers your opponent selected then your opponent must select 1 Monster card zone on there side of the Field, if the selected zone has a Monster Card in it destroy that card. As long as this card remains face up on the field all Monster card zones selected by this cards effect are classed as occupied. [spoiler=EN009] effect Select 1 card name then your opponent selects 2 card names, you then select a number between 0 and the total number of cards in your opponents Deck. Your opponent adds a number of cards from the top of there Deck to there hand equal to the number you selected. If the last card added to your opponents Hand by this cards effect has the same card name as the card name your opponent selected your opponent adds the rest of the cards back to the Deck. If the selected card has the same card name as the card name you selected add that card to your hand and use that card as if it were your own, add all other cards that were added to your opponents Hand by this cards effect back to your opponents Deck. If neither add all cards drawn by this cards effect back to your opponents Deck. This card cannot be activated if your opponent has 2 or less cards in there Deck. [spoiler=EN010] effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when there is at least 1 face up "Of Umbra" Monster on the field. You can Discard 1 card to add this card from your Graveyard to your Hand. [spoiler=EN011] effect This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Your opponent can tribute 1 monster they control to destroy this card. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 card from your graveyard to add 2 Spell Counters to a monster on the field. As long as this card remains face up on the field all monsters on the field loose 100 ATK for each Spell Counter on them.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Update more to come I have another 37 that I'm preparing now just need to fix a few things on the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 36 left lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 cool 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 OCG problems, But I REALLY like your concept.10/10 for ideas8/10 for pics (Not a fan of anime, sorry ;___;)7.5/10 for OCG errors overall its a solid 8.5/10 Keep it up and make more : D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Thank you You know I posted all these a year ago and still this is the first real post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 since you said you posted them so long ago, I'll overlook the OCG errors to a degree Temptress of Umbra's pic looks best, and all of the effects are of sound ideas, so I'll give this 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 In fact I posted these originally to get ocg fixed so any help would be appreciated loloh and theres more to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Anarchy805 Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Well another set of excelent cards. the only one i see any real issue with is Atak but looks more like a typo than OCG error. so i think 10/10 for complexity and 10/10 on the pictures.Nice idea on the Choices of effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Thank you again dude ceep up with the complex words like i must be complex cus you spelt it rong it's I lol but seriously thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomzone9 Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 cool 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Almishal Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 A little OCG help... ( or not... )[spoiler=OCG?] Warrior of Umbra:This card gains 100 ATK for every "Of Umbra" monster face-up on the field. Once per turn, place 1 Spell Counter on this card (Max 2). Remove one spell counter from the field to have your opponent choose 1 of the following effects:- Your opponent tributes 1 monster on his/her field.- This card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase of this Turn.This effect can be used during your opponent's turn.Both Side Malices:During each of your Standby Phase(s), your opponent chooses one of the following effects to activate:- You send 1 Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard and gain Life Points equal to the level of the monster x 200 that was sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect.- You add 1 Monster from your Deck to your hand and take damage equal to the level of the monster x ???? added to your hand by this card's effect. Question: How much damage is dealt?Paladin of Umbra:Once per turn, you can add 1 Spell Counter to this card (Max 5). If this card attacks an opponent's monster, your opponent chooses one of the following effects:- This Card gains 100 ATK for every Spell Counter on this card during the Damage Step only.- Your opponent takes damage equal to the number of Spell Counters x 100 on this card.Temptress of Umbra:Once per turn, by removing 5 Spell Counters from the field, your opponent chooses 1 of the following effects:- You can can take control of 1 Monster your opponent controls.- You can Special Summon 1 level 5 or below Monster from the Graveyard to your side of the field. Question: On effect number 2 of Temptress, both graveyards or your graveyard only?As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all face-up Monsters become Tuners, except this card. ~ AlmishalP.S. 8.9/10 for me. Sorry for the long post... I don't know how to put it into the " box " or something.... >.>EDIT : Nevermind... I got it >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Added two moreOh and thank you Almishal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I already commented on the Archetect on in another thread, and I think the same is true for Queen of Umbra as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 ye I post them sepret so they can be perfected cus no one seemed to be paying attention to this so I needed a new way to get help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Almishal Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Back... for some OCG?[spoiler=OCG?] Architect of Demise You can tribute this card to activate it's effect: Add any 4 non-Monster Cards and 1 Monster Card from your deck to your hand, do not show it to your opponent. Your opponent then selects 1 of the cards added to your hand by this card's effect. If your opponent selects a non-Monster card, discard that card and add all the other cards that were drawn by this card's effect back to your Deck. If your opponent selects a Monster card, you can Special Summon that card to your side of the field ignoring all summoning conditions, then add all the other cards that were drawn by this card's effect back to your Deck. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can add 1 level 3 Monster Card from your Deck to your Hand. Question: Last effect = Level 3 only? or Level 3 and below?Queen of Umbra1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, your opponent must select one of the following effects:- Switch this card's ATK and DEF until next turn's End Phase.- Your opponent discards 1 card- Add 1 card from your Deck to your hand and lower the DEF of this card by 1000Question: Your turn only? or you and your opponent's turn? Architect seems an OK card to me.~ AlmishalEDIT: I didn't see Queen of Umbra. Added OCG of " Queen of Umbra "P.S. If I would choose 1 of Queen's effect, I'll discard 1 card >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 dude ty appreciate the help hope you do well on this site. And have you posted any cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewk Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I love it! Love the pics! Straight up 10/10! I think this deserves a rep. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I really like the way your opponent gets to pick the effect.\Both Sides Malice is OP because of its Splashability. Free mill/card advantage just depending on what mood your opponents in. Either is awesome for you, especially in a DAD deck. The idea gives me the shivers. these otherwise seem good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Thanks for the enthusiasm much appreciated. There are more to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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NeriesUmbra Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 added 4 cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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