First card

[oxynox]

My first card. Comments welcome and needed.

[uzumakinaruto93]

1. kinda bad pic..need a background

 

2. underpowered, 1900/2000 and u need a sacrifice??

 

3. gain 100 when destroyed is too little

[oxynox]

Alright, i'll see what i can do.

[Junk Raver]

That card needs alot of work,, i agree with what Uzu said.

 

100 is far far far too little and just a waste of an effect.

 

The pik is extreamly bare.

 

and there are other issues as well.

[oxynox]

Such as?

[Junk Raver]

There are wording issues and also a blurry pik, its just not a good card, it needs alot of work ^_^

[L33t Jenkins]

1. kinda bad pic..need a background

 

2. underpowered' date=' 1900/2000 and u need a sacrifice??

 

3. gain 100 when destroyed is too little

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agree

[oxynox]

And this is why i dont get paid to desighn yugioh cards.

[RestLess-BoTics]

Hm........needs some improvement....

[Junk Raver]

And this is why i dont get paid to desighn yugioh cards.

 

No need getting snappy/angry, your ment to learn from peoples Criticism.

[Professor Cobra]

A grammar problem. Should be:

When this card is destroyed, increase your Life Points by 1000.

Okay pic and underpowered. 5/10

[oxynox]

A grammar problem. Should be:

When this card is destroyed' date=' increase your Life Points by 1000.

Okay pic and underpowered. 5/10

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Sorry, didn't see that. And I'm not angry, I just have a dry sense of humor.

[oxynox]

Revised vesion.

[Bloodrun]

hmmm i think if you change the picture, and the life points increase to 1000

the card would be just fine -)

8/10 8)

[Yankee]

you know, usually, a perswons first card is overpowred. good job. underpowered in better than over, people really get on you about that. but the fact remains that it is underpowered. 8/10. good first card ^^