NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 [align=center]Here is a key card for the Umbral set I'm making Link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-171571.html effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending out of play from your Graveyard 4 "Of Umbra" Monster with different names. Once per turn you can have your opponent chooses 1 of the following effects.-You pay 1000 Life points to destroy all cards on the field apart from this card.-You pay 1000 Life points to discard all cards in your opponents hand.-You pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon as many of your removed from play monsters as possible. During the End Phase, remove from play all monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect. effect Once per turn your opponent chooses one of the following effects.-You send 1 dark Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.-You Tribute this card to send 2 Dark Monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Hmmm... These are OP:-You pay 1000 Life points to discard all cards in your opponents hand.-You pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon as many of your removed from play monsters as possible. During the End Phase, remove from play all monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect.Apart of that card is cool...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Added seport. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 you need to change Dark to DARK for OCG all 3 effects for the first card are OPed since there's no drawback for them 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 you have to pay 1000 just like judgment dragon thats a draw back and unlike judgment dragon the four cards you need can only be used once so if this is op so is judgment dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Early Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Kinda good, but when specifying Attributes, say DARK, not dark.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 good card8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Almishal Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Halloh! Some OCG help... ( Nice cards... hope I can make mine too... >.> )[spoiler=OCG?]Dragon Of UmbraThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 4 "Of Umbra" Monster with different names from your graveyard. Once per turn, you can have your opponent choose 1 of the following effects:-You pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field except this card.-You pay 1000 Life Points to discard all cards in your opponent's hand.-You pay 1000 Life Points, then Special Summon as many of your removed from play monsters as possible to your field. During the End Phase, remove from play all monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect.Malice of UmbraOnce per turn, your opponent chooses one of the following effects:- You send 1 DARK Monster from your Deck to your Graveyard.- You tribute this card to send 2 DARK Monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard. ~ Almishal [spoiler=Nothing personal... really... >.<]Ok... Dragon seems OPed ( really OPed... on my own opinion ) even with the 1000 LP drawback. It might have the same effects as of the Judgment Dragon ( only though it destroys all cards on the field... ) only that your opponent chooses 1 of the effects.I can't imagine having 2 Dragon of Umbras in your hand and 8 Umbra monsters in your graveyard.... hahaha... It might be considered though, only going limited? :< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Seems ok the new card :P8/10dark=DARK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 It seems OP, though the fact that your opponent chooses really helps. In latin Umbra means shade or ghost and these don't seem to be related to ghosts. That first one ranks up with JD on the worthiness for the banhammer list. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 effects are all as strong as each other therefor all effects are the same power as judgment dragons so they can't be op and this card is weaker since it's cost to summon is higher and your opponent chooses imagine the and or field is already empty effect pay 1000 LP to do nothing but I do see why you would think this is op but simply put this is weaker than judgement dragon and JD is limited to 2 so this should be borderline limited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 JD should be banned, just like this would be, though it probably wouldn't be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Wahoo it stay. And there is nothing you can do about i..t...hey stop deleting my post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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