Jayon Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 So this is my first attempt at creating a realistic card; it might still be a little over-powered, but let me know what you think: Card info:Continuous TrapSuper-rare Text: During each player's end phase, the maximum number of cards each player can have in their hand becomes the number of unoccupied monster card zones and spell and trap card zones on their side of the field (this does not include the field spell zone). The card is really a double-edged sword; if a player has a lot of cards on the field, then they will be very limited in what they can have in their hand. If, however, a player has only a few cards out, they could have a larger hand than is normally allowed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◎Kaleidoscope Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Although it's very inventive, you need to improve your OCG. ALso, I'm sure u could find another better pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 i agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Very nice job. You do have a few OCG errors, but thats OK. 9/9.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayon Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Alright; could anyone point out my errors? I don't make cards often, but I do want my creations to be as good as possible. And thanks in advance for any help :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grassfoot Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 very good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MKJ Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 pretty good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 picture is ok, not great there's some OCG errors, but that's to be expected for someone new (just use the OCG thread to help you) overall it's still a reasonable effect, so I'll rate this 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Decent. Minor OCG flaws. 3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I can see this as a field spell. A+ for effort and creativity. Pat yourself on the back for being one of the few newbies whose first card isn't a 9999 ATK Vanilla Dragon-type with a name like "Ultimate Black Chaos Dragon," or a remake of the God Cards. You're off to a great start (way better than mine.) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I like it.You should make it to an ultra-rare card (^_^)9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jayon Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Thanks for the feedback :) I'll have a look at that thread and try to make some corrections. I did consider making this a field spell card, but for some reason it just felt like it should be a trap. That's also part of the reason I made it a super-rare instead of an ultra; as a trap card, it uses up one magic and trap card zone on the user's side. Thus, if there were no other cards on the field, the user will have a maximum hand of 9 cards and the opponent would have a max of 10 cards. At that point, it actually gives the advantage to the opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 You should go to the ocg thread for your help on ocg The name isnt aggreeing with me, and neither is the pic Though this card is verey good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tentacruel Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Insane card 9.5/10. Really cool effect. Just a few Capitalization errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StopsignProductions Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Not Good Not Bad 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Just some OCG errors, but effect is creative and i like the idea ;)PIC could fit more, but anyway^^9/10Almost Perfect :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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