shadowray2197 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Chaos immortals are a series of fiend monsters with different attribute.most of their effects are "this card can't be destroyed by battle"but of course with some cost.............Image Credit to devianart........................enjoy: Monsters: [spoiler=effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 3 Monsters in both player's Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed or destroy a monster by battle. Every time this card attacks or is attacked, put 1 Chaos Counter on this card. By putting 5 Chaos Counters to this card, choose one of the effects to activate:- This card can attack your opponent directly.- Destroy 1 card on the field.When this card has 25 Chaos Counters, your opponent wins the duel. [spoiler=effect]This card cannot be destroyed by battle ( Damage calculation is applied normally).During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your Opponent,Both player Draw 1 card. [spoiler=effect]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)If this card Attacks a Face-up ATK position monster,you can Destroy it without applying Damage calculation.When this card is sent to the Graveyard by your Opponent's card's Effect,Inflict to your own life points equal to the ATK of this card. *NEW* Magics: what do you think should i continue or not ?Rate it n put some suggestion or at least no bad comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 ocg is a bit off but effects and pics are ok.like the originality ;)8/10Keep working ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Like PlasmaTheHero said, OCG isn't the best... But I like the idea ^^I only think the 1st pic is blurry.8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Almishal Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I'm interested to your Chaos Immortals...[spoiler=OCG?]Chaos Immortal - MatricaThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 3 Monsters in both player's Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed or destroy a monster by battle. Every time this card attacks or is attacked, put 1 Chaos Counter on this card. By putting 5 Chaos Counters to this card, choose one of the effects to activate: - This card can attack your opponent directly. - Destroy 1 card on the field.When this card has 25 Chaos Counters, your opponent wins the duel.Chaos Immortal - TatarugaThis card cannot be destroyed by battle ( Damage calculation is applied normally). When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, you take damage equal to the battle damage inflicted by this card x 2. Question: You take damage x 2, right? or you take damage then you double the battle damage dealt to your opponent?Chaos RevivalPay 500 LP to activate. Special Summon 1 " Chaos Immortal " monster from your graveyard to the field and equip it with this card. When this card is removed from the field, destroy the equipped monster and remove it from play. Question: This is an equip spell I presume? If this card is removed, ( not " if this card is not face-up " >.> ) destroy the equipped monster and remove it from play. >.> Cards overall ish... 8/10~ Almishal Looking forward for more cards :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 OCG correction is already up, some capitalization and spelling errors too first card's wording is a little weird at times Still, the idea is sound so I'll give it 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Thx you all!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Almishal Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Almishal here, I think you are correct ragnarok... >.< forgot the " from play " >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 new cards added!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Awww crap, EBI Rip- Oh wait. No, they aren't. OCG errors: proper English, say players, not player. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 What's a EBI rip? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 What's a EBI rip? EBI means Earthbound Immortal/s Rip? I was gonna say Ripoff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 with your modifications and the new card I'll raise the rate to 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 thx...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 new cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 for some reason it's not loading the cards on my computer. What did you add? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 A new card?How about trying it again maybe it will work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 it's loading WAY too slowly. Here just tell me the card name and I'll rate it in a few min (stupid net connection is malfuctioning) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 its Chaos Immortal-Ri-On n its effect is This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)If this card Attacks a Face-up ATK position monster,you can Destroy it without applying Damage calculation.When this card is sent to the Graveyard by your Opponent's card's Effect,Inflict to your own life points equal to the ATK of this card.ATK:1900 DEF:1200level 4rate it!!!!(but i think it's kinda Op'ed) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 new cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 mind putting a NEW next to the ones you updated? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowray2197 Posted March 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 NEW CARDS ADDED!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 both effects are balanced out though for Wadano the effect is boring for just a recovery effect, I was hoping for another effect on it or something 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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