Shinwa Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I tried my best on this ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Lycanthrope is already a card, you know that? o_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Yeah but this one is better ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Yeah but this one is better ^^ no -_- plz write out the lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Yeah but this one is better ^^ no -_- plz write out the lore Effect is easy readable, he doesn't need to write out the lore. Only if you are blind you cannot read it. Also, the pic is great, but you could add a background. Your OCG has some errors, you should work on it. Lycanthrope is really a real card.But nice try.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Yeah but this one is better ^^ no -_- plz write out the lore Effect is easy readable' date=' he doesn't need to write out the lore. Only if you are blind you cannot read it. Also, the pic is great, but you could add a background. Your OCG has some errors, you should work on it. Lycanthrope is really a real card.But nice try.7.5/10[/quote'] Quite to the contrary. If he wishes to know about proper OCG and effect set up then it's in lhis best interest to write it out.Yeah but this one is better ^^ Sorry but.... XDDDDDDD ROFL THIS IS FAR FROM BETTER THEN THE REAL LYCANTHROPE XDDD X3 Now anyways. OCG is off as is the effect setup and its effect is not as desirable as the real lycanthrope. Not much else to say.5/10 And it needs a new name o-O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 lol you know, your more experient than me.I just thought it's readable enough. :'p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 lol I just wanted to sound sophisticated up there ;3 but you is right he doesnt need to write it ^^ o-o I just realized i've never rated any of you cards I can remember. Ima find some :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Effect is easy readable' date=' he doesn't need to write out the lore. Only if you are blind you cannot read it.[/quote']I'm very blind XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 kk'Than, my apologies, sir ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imma Mario Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 1/10 Because you tried to make something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 1/10 Because you tried to make something. =/ really? Thats all i can say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 What effect would you suggest ? When Summoned inflict Direct Damage x300 for each Beast and Warrior Card in Graveyard ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I noticed that nobody mentioned something really wrong about the card. Lycanthrope hurts itself with it's effect. It'll lose ATK with it's effect. Reads it effect, and look at it's type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 o-o Lols that Mr.Ace :3 sharp as a sharpy ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I noticed that nobody mentioned something really wrong about the card. Lycanthrope hurts itself with it's effect. It'll lose ATK with it's effect. Reads it effect' date=' and look at it's type.[/quote'] This dude has a point. Otherwise, it's a fine card. Sure the name is a little bland, and the pic needs a bg, but otherwise, it's pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Correction: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Warrior-type monster and 1 Beast-type monster in your Graveyard from play. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, decrease the ATK of all non-Beast-type monsters on the field by 300. That should be near perfect OCG for the effect I think your trying to get across. Lycanthrope already exists, you could make the name a bit more creative, like Wereworg or Worg Berserker or somethin' :P. The pic is background-less, therefore seems unrealistic. I think the summoning condition is balanced and creative. Altogether a half-decent card. I have a good pic: http://i50.tinypic.com/2zhglzd.jpg Also, "When this card is Special Summoned, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each Beast-type and Warrior-type monster in your Graveyard (Or side of the field)" Is a good effect. Makes it less UP, so it's worth summoning. Hope this helps :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 the card name is already taken the effect itself is boring since there's only 1 effect, give another one for it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Yeah but this one is better ^^ no -_- plz write out the lore Effect is easy readable' date=' he doesn't need to write out the lore. Only if you are blind you cannot read it.[/quote']With some people, that is indeed the case. To enlarge it on your browser, hold "Ctrl" and press "+". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imma Mario Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Correction: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Warrior-type monster and 1 Beast-type monster in your Graveyard from play. As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' decrease the ATK of all non-Beast-type monsters on the field by 300. That should be near perfect OCG for the effect I think your trying to get across. Lycanthrope already exists, you could make the name a bit more creative, like Wereworg or Worg Berserker or somethin' :P. The pic is background-less, therefore seems unrealistic. I think the summoning condition is balanced and creative. Altogether a half-decent card. I have a good pic: [img']http://i50.tinypic.com/2zhglzd.jpg[/img] http://i50.tinypic.com/2zhglzd.jpg Also, "When this card is Special Summoned, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each Beast-type and Warrior-type monster in your Graveyard (Or side of the field)" Is a good effect. Makes it less UP, so it's worth summoning. Hope this helps :D You mean I now have a new pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Koa'Ki Warrior Toolbox maybe? But seriously, change the name of the card or this gets locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imma Mario Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Oh no, not locked [/sarcasm] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Oh no' date=' not locked [/sarcasm'] Oh no, warned for spamming. [/truth] Don't be a twit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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