NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 [align=center]There is that much there I can't see whether there are any problems so if you can plz help. effect Select 1 card name then your opponent selects 2 card names, you then select a number between 0 and the total number of cards in your opponents Deck. Your opponent adds a number of cards from the top of there Deck to there hand equal to the number you selected. If the last card added to your opponents Hand by this cards effect has the same card name as the card name your opponent selected your opponent adds the rest of the cards back to the Deck. If the selected card has the same card name as the card name you selected add that card to your hand and use that card as if it were your own, add all other cards that were added to your opponents Hand by this cards effect back to your opponents Deck. If neither add all cards drawn by this cards effect back to your opponents Deck. This card cannot be activated if your opponent has 2 or less cards in there Deck.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 So much to read...Cut it down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Thats why I asked for helpbut anyway what ya think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I usually comment by havin an OCG redo, and then have my comment, but there are too many dynamics for me to even understand what this card's effect is. I agree with Mr. Ace. Cut it down to a simpler, similar effect. Okay picCool name - Disturbed Love*** typo 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 not typo bad spelling any segestions on an effect that would work the same but easeyer to understand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 >> You mean Disturbed right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 oh and the omount of times people have told me my effects are to simple made me make this and the trap>> You mean Disturbed right? I repeat not typo bad spellingcan't smegin help it I'm dislexicbump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 too many effects right now can you cut a few out first? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Reminds me of the song Bad Romance by Lady Gaga lol. Anyway, Heres my fix:Declare the name of a card, and your opponent declares 2 names. Select a number between 1 and the total number of cards in your opponents Deck. Your opponent draws that amount of cards from the top of their Deck. If the last card drawn is the same as the name your opponent declared, your opponent adds the card to their hand and shuffles their deck. If the selected card is the name you declared add that card to your hand, and shuffle your opponents Deck. If the card is not a name called, shuffle the Deck. This card cannot be activated if your opponent has 2 or less cards in there Deck. Thats the best I could do. Can easily be abused using Convulsion of Nature. Otherwise would be UPD as you would need to have knowledge of your opponents deck, and your opponent already knows there deck, giving them an advantage. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Almishal Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Hello! Almishal again here for some OCG help...[spoiler=OCG?]Disterbed Romance ( I hope I'm correct with the spelling... unless if it's " Disturbed Romance " like what Lovely Succubus said... >.> )I just edited some of BloodDragon58 OCG help... ( sorry for not asking permission.... >.> )Declare the name of a card, and your opponent declares 2 card names. Select a number between 1 and the total number of cards in your opponent's Deck. Your opponent draws that amount of cards from the top of their Deck. If the last card drawn is the same as one of the card names your opponent declared, your opponent then adds that card to his/her hand and shuffles his/her deck. If the selected card is the card name you declared, add that card to your hand, and shuffle your opponent's Deck. If the card is not a card name called, shuffle the Deck. ( Question: Your deck or your opponent's deck? ) This card cannot be activated if your opponent has 2 or less cards in his/her Deck. Question: I noticed..., are all the remaining cards added to your opponent's hand? or are returned to the deck and shuffled? ~ Almishal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Yeah...a too long effect but i think i got it^^But like above post says what happens to the remaining cards???If they go to opponents hand this is UP...Anyway nice pic and not so much OCG errors^^8/10 I like the idea, but you putted it in a bad way :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Like the effect says "If the selected card has the same card name as the card name you selected add that card to your hand and use that card as if it were your own, add all other cards that were added to your opponents Hand by this cards effect back to your opponents Deck." and for the third time I can not spell properly due to dyslexia so it was meant to be disturbed not disturbed and how did you not know that when I posted that under the post you mentioned. Read all posts before posting it helps to get rid of any confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 omg long effect 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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