yugizach Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 yhis is a redue of an old card i did hope you like it:lol:sorry about the small image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Looks like it still needs major improvements. Wanna know why?-Spelling mistakes, e.g. The name should be "Armoured Angel"-The Image is not that good (sorry if you made it, but it would be better if you uploaded a more decent image than this.- The Type is Good? No Fairy-Type, not even a Warrior-Type? Good-Type? I let some fake Types slip by, but having a Type like that is just wrong.- DO NOT WRITE THE WHOLE EFFECT IN CAPITALS LIKE THIS. Also, the effect is a bit too unoriginal. Here's the fixed version of yours, though:"Once per turn, you can destroy 1 DARK monster on the field."-However, 1 good thing that you have done is make it have decent stats. 3/10. I'm sorry, but this card still needs more improvements. This is far from being an acceptable one, but understand what I have commented on, and fix the card according to my points. If you need more help, you can always PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugizach Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 here is the new one (:{ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SgtExell Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Much better! :) than the old one, however you could make the effect a tad more interesting? Hint! Oh and give name capital letters. "Armoured Angel" and "Fairy" good 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugizach Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 thanks here it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugizach Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 how many people have the new oblisk i just got it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dyco804 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 the first card sorta stinks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugizach Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 ya i know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Second card is way better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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