lillostwolfy Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 I know my Card grammer probly isnt the best...Any help to make them better would be highly apreciated ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Not bad at all. You need to revise your OCG, I found many errors like "feild" and "deffence" (I know that in British it's Defence, but it has no two f's, in any language.). Just check out the OCG Thread. Pics are good. I suggest you don't use Fake-Types like Dragon Warrior. Many members around here don't like it.Decent cards for your firsts.6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 interesting idea, but you need to work in your OCG how say raphael after. nice pics:) 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuri Shayk Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 A lot of pics are Over used. No fake types (Dragon Warrior). Black Order - Dragon of the Shadow Realm is already a real card known as "Dark Armed Dragon". Attributes are all caps, ex. DARK and not Dark. There is a "-" in between the type of monster and "type". ex. Warrior-Type. the "T" in type is also capitilized. Special Summoned, not special summoned Sacrifice is old OCG, "Tributed" is used in cards. Or for advanced ocg, "Released". Type is not needed when referring to a Attribute. DARK, instead of Dark Type. Type is only used in term to the Type of monster. when referring to a monsters attack points it is abbrivated ATK, and is capitlized as well as DEF Use complete sentences. Defense Position and not defence position. When you make a card, use your account name. You put "GOD?", as it when it should be "lillostwolfy", reffering to you as the creator. In the card "Black Order - Dark Master", it refers to the Archtype "Black Order", thus should have "" around it. Anyother questions PM me, and ill gladly help with OCG Errors, and questions if this did not help you. I will not rate this being your first time. But I will say welcome to YCM. and enjoy your stay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heart Reaper Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 The pic of Dragon of the Shadow realm is a real card image!The vanilla Guardian Dragon is overpowered,The OCG mistakes are not big, it seems how you write too fast.Some pics can be better.The effect are ok.They are your first cards. 8.8 = 9/10 Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 a few overused pictures, nothing TOO big a deal there however most of the card effects are WAY too bland and simple while there's some OCG errors, it's not that many, which makes this set still reasonable for a new member, so I'll rate it 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Everyone said everything, but I like Vanillas and Fake Types.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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