Eury Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 [align=center]3000 posts. ^_^ So I'll introduce Bloodthirst Dragon. He's going to be the cover card of my next set. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 or more DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play. This card gains ATK equal to the number of DARK monsters removed from play x 400. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can activate one of the following effects:--- Discard 1 DARK monster. Destroy 1 Card on the field.--- Pay 1500 Life Points. Remove up to 5 DARK monsters in your Deck from play equal to the number of DARK monsters in your hand.--- Pay 4000 Life Points and discard your entire hand. Send every card on the field and in your opponent's hand to the Graveyard, except this card. Inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card sent. inb4it'sbrokenandtheimagehastoomuchgore[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Pic: 10/10 - Looks like it would simply be beautiful with holo lolName: 9/10 - It's really cool. Would make a great Cover Card name.Effect: 8/10 - I think you should make it more about his "Bloodthirst"... You could add and effect like: This card can attack monsters on your opponent's side of the field until this card destroys a monster as a result of battle. The controller of this card must attack with this card if possible. A lil' suggestion :) Also, along the lines of effects, the last effect seems like a gamebreaker, because even when all the cards are destroyed and all the damage is done (Could amount to 6000 in late-game) + The ATK of the card (It's not destroyed, therefore it can attack directly) would pretty much be a win. You should nerf that effect or make the summoning terms more harsh. The rest of the effects are very balanced. OCG: 8.5/10 - Fix: "This card gains ATK equal to the number of DARK monsters removed from play x 400." Because his ATK is ?, you can't "gain" any ATK. Say this: "This card's ATK is equal to the number of DARK monsters removed from play x 400." Altogether: 35.5/40 = 88% = 8.8/10 :D Nice card! Love it! Can't wait to see your new set! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Damn dude. You went all out on that. I'll fix it later. Thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Haha no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Pic looks weird. Holo don't really match with it. Anyway... OCG is pretty good, effects are creative.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendalus Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 to be all fair and honest i like this card. it makes me sick that JD is still up to 2 and you can summon 2 of the for 6000 damage at a small cost of 1000 lp. in the old days of chos empier (i dont think thats right) dragon you paid 1000 to destroy the field and hand dealing x300 per card to your opponent but you know what???? THERE WAS NO LONGER A 3000 DRAGON ON THE FIELD ANYMORE!!! I feel this dragon can be OP but only late in the game so im giving you 9/10 great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 I dunno if it it's just me, but I can't tell what that pic is at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Think of the holo as censorship. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendalus Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 its a huge demonic dragon standing over what looks like a dead woman (creepy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 I think it's fantastic. Freakish, but fantastic. 9.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 good card9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 given it's lv10, you'll need 9 monsters removed from play to match a good atk last effect is like Chaos Emperor Dragon's effect, but at least it's not as OPed 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 No! The image is just perfect!OCG is cool. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fahru99 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 that image so scary 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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