kalinkesler Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 My First Fiend Card [spoiler=Avenger en-Dal] Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 points for every card in your hand [spoiler=Rage Forger] During either player's turn, you can discard this card to your Graveyard to remove from play 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard. [spoiler=Blades of Velis Vel] "Rage Forger" + "Avenger en-Dal" Once per turn, remove from play 1 card your opponent controls. When this card attacks, you can change the battle position of the attack target. (Flip Effects are not activated at this time.)During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. [spoiler=Dark Ritual] This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Phantom Warrior", or "Dross Harvester". You must also offer Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level of the Ritual Monster you are attempting to Ritual Summon. [spoiler=Dross Harvester] This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Dark Ritual".This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. When this face-up Attack Position card is attacked by your opponent's monster, before damage calculation inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's ATK. [spoiler=Phantom Warrior] This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Dark Ritual". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more from the field or your hand.If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. plz rate :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Dross Harvester's effect is boring and UPed, but that's usually true for most rituals. Still, you should break that by giving it more effects Same goes for Phantom Warrior, though I love the picture First sentence of the fusion monster should be As long as this card is face up on the field, neither player can activate Trap cards. 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kalinkesler Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 oic i will change it let me think the effect 1st thx for rating^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 To be honest, the OCG is not very good, and the first three are quite OP. Try to be more creative instead of powerful, it's easy to make a powerful card, it's harder to make a creative and useful card. The second and first rituals are okay, but pretty basic to me... 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kalinkesler Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Ohh thx for rating i will update it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 I love the pics and OCG. For Dark Harvester, it should say [Fiend / Ritual / Effect] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kalinkesler Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 ohh i will change it thx for correcting me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kalinkesler Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 bump!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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