ayy lmao Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 [align=center] I made this card for a contest.Tell me what you think. Pharos, Rock Guardian[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 EARTH monsters you control. When you draw a card, you can send it to the bottom of your Deck and shuffle it, then draw 1 card. If you draw 1 card of any of the following types of card, activate the appropriate effect: • Trap Card: Inflict 300 Direct Damage to your opponent per each card in your hand. • Spell Card: Inflict 500 Direct Damage to your opponent. • Monster Card: Inflict 1000 Direct Damage to your opponent. If you activate this effect more than 2 times, destroy this card. Whenever either player draws a card, you can inflict 100 Direct Damage to your opponent, if you do, decrease this card's ATK by 300. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 Rock-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. Pic Credit: Father Wolf[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SgtExell Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Long winded, minor OCG errors like "If it's a Spell Card, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent." I'm guessing this is to their life points? AND..... "When this card is destroyed select one Rock-Type monster in your Deck and add it to your hand.Inflict 100 points of damage to your opponent every time a card is Drawn.If you activate that effect this card loses 300 ATK points.This card cannot attack your opponent directly." If the card is destroyed how can it lose ATK? or how can it be destroyed? Confused! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Long winded' date=' minor OCG errors like [b']1) "If it's a Spell Card, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent." I'm guessing this is to their life points?[/b] AND..... "When this card is destroyed select one Rock-Type monster in your Deck and add it to your hand.Inflict 100 points of damage to your opponent every time a card is Drawn.2) If you activate that effect this card loses 300 ATK points.This card cannot attack your opponent directly." If the card is destroyed how can it lose ATK? or how can it be destroyed? Confused! 1) You're not mind sufficient on Yu-Gi-Oh! if you don't know that, it's like that on lots of cards and that is the correct way to say it. 2) It can't attack your opponent directly, but it can attack your opponents monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 effect is a bit confusing, and OCG has several mistakes.OCG fix:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 EARTH monsters you control. When you draw a card, you can send it to the bottom of your Deck and shuffle it, then draw 1 card. If you draw 1 card of any of the following types of card, activate the appropriate effect: • Trap Card: Inflict 300 Direct Damage to your opponent per each card in your hand. • Spell Card: Inflict 500 Direct Damage to your opponent. • Monster Card: Inflict 1000 Direct Damage to your opponent. If you activate this effect more than 2 times, destroy this card. Whenever either player draws a card, you can inflict 100 Direct Damage to your opponent, if you do, decrease this card's ATK by 300. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 Rock-Type monster from your Deck to your hand." you must put each in effect in the right position, "when this card is destroyed..." effect is always after any other effect that activates when the card is on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Thanks, bullet points don't work so theres no point of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 weird woring for the OCG the burn effects have their drawbacks already, so all the effects on this card are balanced out 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SgtExell Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 1) You're not mind sufficient on Yu-Gi-Oh! if you don't know that, it's like that on lots of cards and that is the correct way to say it. 2) It can't attack your opponent directly, but it can attack your opponents monsters. No ser[/i]iously the OCG is wrong! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 *facepalm* I know that, but the way you were saying was wrong. weird woring for the OCG the burn effects have their drawbacks already' date=' so all the effects on this card are balanced out 8.9/10[/quote'] Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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