YamiMario Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 [align=center]Hey, everyone, I'm making a new set, mainly based on Tokens, and stuff like that. Stuff will be categorized when I have made over 7 cards.[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by destroying 2 EARTH and 1 DARK Monsters you on your side of the field. While this card is face-up on the field, or in the Graveyard, it is a also threated as a Beast-Type Monster. Once per turn, you can destroy 2 Monsters on your side of the field, to remove a card on your opponent's side of the field from play. Give comments, and stuff like that.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 not bad, but since it has a scapegoat in the pic, you should have it share the scapegoat token's drawbacks, in that it can't be used for tribute summoning 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Ha, I completely forgot that, thanks for reminding me, :D New card will be up later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 OCG errors, why does the shield token have 0 DEF?, the second card looks like "Strike Ninja". 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 that's because it is Strike Ninja, just in a different battle position and I'd allow the effect to be used more than just 1 time per duel 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 that's because it is Strike Ninja' date=' just in a different battle position and I'd allow the effect to be used more than just 1 time per duel 7.8/10[/quote']It would be sort of overpowered, considering the entire set mostly revolve around Tokens. why does the shield token have 0 DEF?Because a normal Sheep Token has 0 DEF. If it was like the anime, the Guard Sheep Token would obviously come out with the shield to protect it from a single attack, but then the shield would get destroyed by the impact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 yeah well I didn't mean as often as once PER TURN or something like that maybe allow it 3 times per duel and that's it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 [rather...intro!] I SAW THE WORD TOKENS!!! Down to the review, OCG errors but you can use the OCG thread for that. Smoke bomb ninja is a bit underpowered don't you think? Make it 3 times per duel instead. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 Thanks for the feedback. Although I was somewhat against it, I changed Smoke Bomb Ninja's effect to work 3 times. It does seem to work somewhat better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 11, 2009 Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 with the new card, there's some minor OCG errors (use OCG thread) I find Infected Darkness use up WAY too many of your monsters, reduce it to 1 monster on your side of the field for some of the effects 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted December 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Shadow Spawn has a short effect however it is practical and the OCG is relatively good, so I'll rate it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 New card added. Late happy new year, everybody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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