tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Ok some of you proably don't know this but I plan on writing a series of books. Tell me what you think if I should fix anything and what the title should be. The book is about these twin brothers Jimmy and Johnny that are orphans. But one day some strange man comes to the orphage saying that he's been wanting to adopt them for years but he had to wait till the reached 13. The man takes them high it the mountains to a huge temple/training facilty. The boys discover that they have a spirt animal a mystaical creature that is within their soul. While training to master their animals they meet two other kids and they quickly become friends. On one day two strange people in black cloaks appear and kidnap Johnny. Now Jimmy is on a search to find his brother no matter what the cost.Feedback is allowed Thats just a short summary of what happens in the first 5-7 chapters. I need a title for the series and the book. Tell what you think about it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 An actual book? Cool. What age range, genre, etc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Genre: Action, Adventure, Fanstsy Age Range: I think 12 year old kids would understand it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 How many books? if you've got a name for one, I might be able to do the rest... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 I'm thinking around 4-5 books I'm not sure. I might only be 12 but I'm good with the whole writing thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 It sounds great I think, I would actually buy it and read it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 lol wow, someone else like me!!!! hehe, ok i read it, and at first it kinda seemed like annie, but then i read the magical mountain and i was oh no plz dont let it be one of those cereal killer things, lol then i red the last, and now it kinda reminds me of the ninja kid, or whatever that movie was, with mr. miagie (SP!!) lol, the name of the tittle, i have so many names man hmmmill list some:Redemption of Ariel (Ariel means Lion of God)Euthymius (means good-spirit)Mahatma Life (Mahatma means Great Soul, Spirit of Life) lol um, tell me if you want anymore, or need any more help =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Thanks does anyone think anything should be changed.Bloodrun those are some good titles but I need something younger people would understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Thanks does anyone think anything should be changed.Bloodrun those are some good titles but I need something younger people would understand. hmm ok, about Spirit MentororSoul TeacherorSoul GuidanceorSoul Quest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Spirt Mentor I like that. Thats going to be the name of the series. But I'm going to change it to Spirt Quest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Spirt Mentor I like that. Thats going to be the name of the series. But I'm going to change it to Spirt Quest. lol fine with me, i was actually going to add that, but i didnt feel like editing lol =) ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 6-book series are usually the best. How about: Stone QuestEnlightenmentDisappearanceGuide to the LabyrinthSix TrialsLegend of the Apocalypse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Awsome I have a name for the series. Kizzi I'll make the first book Disapperance. The last book can be Leagend of the Apocalypse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 What about the rest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 I'm proably going o use them but I'm still working on the plot I'll have a major part of the end of the 4th book if you want it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Cool. PM me if you need any more names (for anything). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 ok I might post it tomrrow. I've had this in my head for a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Id buy it! It sounds cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Oh, yeah, I forgot to say I'd buy it! :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinz Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 CoolPlease don't make such a short post. Tallman, have you written any decent-length stories before (3000+ words)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 I have writen one horror story but only got half way through finshing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 What was the horror story about? PM some of it to me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 I pmed a small part to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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