gambiti Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 These letters were translated by google translator I'm Brazilian. Do not copy please.Deck under construction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grassfoot Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 This is by far............ the most confusing deck ever.The effects r ellegible.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 Bad OCG is bad. Here's some fixes, although I don't know if they're right. Also no one likes fake types and if you're Brazilian, I think you could've checked Yugioh Wikia for correct OCG. Also, Google Translator is bad. [spoiler=Calling of the dragon]When this card is activated you can special summon any "Divine-Dragon" monster with 7 stars or lower. This card is overpowered. Add a drawback please. [spoiler=Cemetery Dragons]Pay 200 life points to special summon any monster with "Divine-Dragon" in it's name from the graveyard Once again, overpowered. Destroying Cards: Now I can't give a fix because I don't even get it. What is a "Fair Letter"? [spoiler=Divine Dragon Of The Heavens]"Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Extreme Light"This card may attack twice during the same battle phase It's a fusion form of Tyrant Dragon =/ A bit UP'd considering the fusion materials. [spoiler=Dragon Extreme Light]When this card is summoned sucessfully you can special summon one "Dragon Extreme Light" to the field I couldn't fix that correctly because of Graze in the field. But that's overpowered anyway. Atleast make a cost to special summon the second one. [spoiler=Dragon Mountain]This card's name is treated as "Dragon Extreme Light" Probably your most balanced card. [spoiler=Forbidden Attack]When your oppnent declares a attack, negate it. Probably wrong OCG from me. But it's just a blocking trap. Nothing special :/ [spoiler=King Of The Wicked Dragons]"Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Mountain" + "Dragon Mountain"This monster gains 400 ATK and DEF for each "Divine Dragon" and LIGHT attribute monster on the field With a name and picture like that, it should be a DARK monster. Would be overpowered were it not for the requirements. But still overpowered. [spoiler=Rising From The Ashes]Pay 200 life points to special summon a "Divine Dragon" monster from your graveyard That cost is WAY too small. Super Union: It's spelled Fusion. Plus I wouldn't know how to word this. [spoiler=Sword Of The Dragon]This card can only be equipped to a "Divine Dragon". The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF Probably worded wrong. But overpowered. The Necklace Of The Dragon: Why pay 100 LP when you could've made this a field spell or an continous spell? What is "By a round"? [spoiler=Winged Mountains]All "Divine-Dragon" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF. DEF part is probably the only overpowered thing. [spoiler=Super Destruction]If a "Divine-Dragon" monster is on the field, destroy one monster your oppnent controls. I'd add a drawback. [spoiler=Super Dragon Extreme End Of The Light]"Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Extreme Light"This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each LIGHT attribute monster on the field ...Seems overpowered. Dunno. Overrall. This set needs work. BADLY. Pictures are somewhat decent.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 text is effect are badly done but overall there ok i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Bad OCG is bad. Here's some fixes' date=' although I don't know if they're right. Also no one likes fake types and if you're Brazilian, I think you could've checked Yugioh Wikia for correct OCG. Also, Google Translator is bad. [spoiler=Calling of the dragon']When this card is activated you can Special Summon any "Divine-Dragon" monster with 7 stars or lower. This card is overpowered. Add a drawback please. [spoiler=Cemetery Dragons]Pay 200 life points to Special Summon any monster with "Divine-Dragon" in it's name from the Graveyard Once again, overpowered. Destroying Cards: Now I can't give a fix because I don't even get it. What is a "Fair Letter"? [spoiler=Divine Dragon Of The Heavens]"Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Extreme Light"This card may attack twice during the same Battle Phase. It's a fusion form of Tyrant Dragon =/ A bit UP'd considering the fusion materials. [spoiler=Dragon Extreme Light]When this card is Special Summon, you can Special Summon one "Dragon Extreme Light". I couldn't fix that correctly because of Graze in the field. But that's overpowered anyway. Atleast make a cost to special summon the second one. [spoiler=Dragon Mountain]This card's name is treated as "Dragon Extreme Light". Probably your most balanced card. [spoiler=Forbidden Attack]When your oppnent declares a attack, negate it. Probably wrong OCG from me. But it's just a blocking trap. Nothing special :/ [spoiler=King Of The Wicked Dragons]"Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Mountain" + "Dragon Mountain"This monster gains 400 ATK and DEF for each "Divine Dragon" and LIGHT attribute monster on the field With a name and picture like that, it should be a DARK monster. Would be overpowered were it not for the requirements. But still overpowered. [spoiler=Rising From The Ashes]Pay 200 life points to special summon a "Divine Dragon" monster from your graveyard That cost is WAY too small. Super Union: It's spelled Fusion. Plus I wouldn't know how to word this. [spoiler=Sword Of The Dragon]This card can only be equipped to a "Divine Dragon". The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF Probably worded wrong. But overpowered. The Necklace Of The Dragon: Why pay 100 LP when you could've made this a field spell or an continous spell? What is "By a round"? [spoiler=Winged Mountains]All "Divine-Dragon" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF. DEF part is probably the only overpowered thing. [spoiler=Super Destruction]If a "Divine-Dragon" monster is on the field, destroy one monster your oppnent controls. I'd add a drawback. [spoiler=Super Dragon Extreme End Of The Light]"Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Extreme Light" + "Dragon Extreme Light"This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each LIGHT attribute monster on the field ...Seems overpowered. Dunno. Overrall. This set needs work. BADLY. Pictures are somewhat decent.2/10 Fixed some of the OCG fixes. Since you are using a Translater it is really hard to understand.... Use the fixes and try better next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 i can take these cards and make them beter0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 You can use the OCG thread to help you on the OCG half the card effects are WAY too bland, but that's ok since you're new just add more effects to them 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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