TEZZORI Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Hi this is my 1st card. As you can probably tell the pic is made from Neos Alias, and isn't my best work since i made it on Paint lol (must get photoshop), but i think it's better than getting a random image off Google. It was designed with anti-meta in mind. I think it would be a cool card and i think the effect is quite balanced, let me know what you think, cheers.*I've improved the pic and info as suggested thanks.*Background: Shifter supports his team mates with his teleporting abilities. He is known for his last minute rescues but often puts himself in danger to save the day.Effect: While another Elemental/Destiny/Evil Hero is face-up on your side of the field, and a card(s) you control is targeted by an opponents’ attack or card effect, you can change 1 target to this card. During your Main Phase you can send this to the graveyard to Special Summon 1 Elemental Hero with 1500 or less ATK from your Graveyard. Once per duel, while this card is in your Graveyard during your opponents’ Standby Phase, you can send 1 Elemental Hero you control with 1500 or less ATK to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kliffi Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 OCG Fix: While another Elemental/Destiny/Evil Hero is face-up on your side of the field, and a card you control is targeted by an opponent's attack or card effect that designates one card as a target, you can change the target to this card. During your Main Phase you can send this to the graveyard to Special Summon 1 Elemental/Destiny/Evil Hero with 1500 or less ATK from your Graveyard. While this card is in your Graveyard during your opponent's Standby Shase, you can send 1 Elemental/Destiny/Evil Hero you control with 1500 or less ATK to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card to the field. I don't know if you want Destiny and/or Evil Heroes to be involved in the effects mentioned later in the card, but I included them in the fix anyways. Good pic; good name; creative effect. Seems like he would linger and irritate your opponent well. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 The pic is just an edited pic of "Elemental Hero Neos Alius"...OCG errors mentioned, and the effect seems fine. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fahru99 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 edited pick from alius but the armor is cool i think 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
assanaut Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Good effect, but as with the recent posts and your comments as well, this needs an OCG fix as well as a new picture. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 For a first card, it isnt bad, but i agree, it could use ocg fixes here and there. If u keep it up, you'll be a pro in no time. ;) 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 OCG is very good for a new member (still a few bugs, but you can use the OCG thread to help you on that) Effect also very creative, another plus for a new member, so this gets 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TEZZORI Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Thanks for the rates and suggestions guys especially kliffi for taking the time to help with the OCG advice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TEZZORI Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 No more advice then? If not i will call this card complete and add this to my finished set :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 The pics nice considering it being done on paint. Effect seems balanced. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Since OCG is already fixed I give it 8/10 (pic is just alius black at some places)effect is not the best but it might help E/D/E heroes get stronger cards to the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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