Jazin Kay Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Simple basics: monsters with powerful effects that are hard to summon due to Graveyard limitations. Fast early game, but must soon reply on Graveyard thinning and keeping monsters from being in the Graveyard to keep the deck operating at all. I had the idea from watching a BBC special on what dark matter is, and it's relationship with the current understanding of the known universe. Apparently, it's some kinda gravity thing. I think. It's hard to explain, but I think I summed it up well. Not my prettiest work, but I needed to get this idea out of my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 awesome pics, where did you get them? Heartsnare's effect is a bit UPed, 3 card loss for a special summon that lasts only 1 turn, give it another effect Star Dancer should be lv4 given it has 1600 atk, too much for lv2 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Just like 1 Attribute 1 Type. Pics and OCG are neat. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 I love the pics. Maybe make some MACHOS[don't know what it stands for] (black holes, yes, this is an official scientific acronym) and WIMPS [weakly interacting massive particles](neutrinos and such, ditto about the acronym.) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 A few OCG errors, but very good pictures. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 I love the pics. Maybe make some MACHOS[don't know what it stands for] (black holes' date=' yes, this is an official scientific acronym) and WIMPS [weakly interacting massive particles'](neutrinos and such, ditto about the acronym.) 9/10Epic idea is epic. If I stumble on more art, I am SO doing that. Thank you. A few OCG errors' date=' but very good pictures. 8/10[/quote']Card lore is taken directly from cards such as "Soul Release" and "Aurkus, Lightsworn Druid". My cards don't have OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 during the damage step = during Damage Step only.I"m not sure but I think "The ATK of this card" = This card's ATK I love the pics, too.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 good cards8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Melee Blader If this card attacks a Level 8 or higher monster, this card gains 1000 ATK, during the Damage Step only. Warp Kid When this card is Summoned, select up to 3 cards in either player's Graveyard and remove them from play. Heartsnare ...or Deck. The Summoned monster is destroyed during your End Phase. Your cards have OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 No, those are variable terminologies. Some of the additional wordings you included in your OCG suggestions in bold are excess and implied by actual card function, such as the removal of "only". The text I used appears on actual cards. Therefore making them accurate. I don't think you exactly know what "OCG" means. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 No' date=' those are variable terminologies. Some of the additional wordings you included in your OCG suggestions in bold are excess and implied by actual card function, such as the removal of "only". The text I used appears on actual cards. Therefore making them accurate. I don't think you exactly know what "OCG" means.[/quote'] Variable terminologies that are now the standard. 1. "Soul Release" is an old card using out-dated OCG, making it incorrect and inaccurate. 2. What has "Arkus, Lightsworn Druid" got to with it? It's effect isn't mentioned in these cards. 3. There is a reason there is an 'only' at the end of "during the Damage Step". Konami says that there should be. Correct OCG is designed to remove implication. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Variable terminologies that are now the standard.Usually implemented to save space on cards' date=' since Konami must've got hate mail over Destiny Hero - Dreadmaster.[/b'] 1. "Soul Release" is an old card using out-dated OCG, making it incorrect and inaccurate.Structure Deck: Dark Emperor, SDDE, uses an updated version of Soul Release, with accurate OCG. That's the latest reprint of it, so that's what's accurate. 2. What has "Arkus, Lightsworn Druid" got to with it? It's effect isn't mentioned in these cards.Brain fart, I was thinking of the Nanolights. Either way, my point stands. 3. There is a reason there is an 'only' at the end of "during the Damage Step". Konami says that there should be. Correct OCG is designed to remove implication.No, correct OCG is made to create implication, and often does so. For Melee Blader, gaining ATK and increasing ATK are the same thing, and are interchangeable. "Only" in that text is not needed, since... well, where else would it activate that effect? "During the damage step" implies that an effect only lasts during that time, making "only" unnecessary text. Also, "damage step" is not capitalized. Proof is on Ally of Justice Catastor. When Warp Kid is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, he activates his effect. Not when he's Flip Summoned. Your suggestion has nothing to do with OCG on this matter, but on mechanic technicality. "The Graveyard(s)" appears on the SDDE printing of Soul Release, making it standard OCG. For Heartsnare, either of our OCGs is accurate for this, as they mean the exact same thing. Keep going? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Also' date=' "damage step" is not capitalized. Proof is on Ally of Justice Catastor. Keep going?[/quote'] 'Damage Step' is capitalised because it is a Step. See "Steamroid" and "Nutrient Z". "Ally of Justice-Catastor" mentions 'damage calculation' NOT 'Damage Step'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 You're right on that note, I'm sorry. I often confuse the calculation with the step itself. Looks like we were both wrong. Lol. That's what I get for sleeping for only 4 hours, I skip neurons like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Yeah, you're right. Anyway, good cards. Need more Spells and Traps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dilgoro Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 10/10 completely. i WANT these........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 Can you post the lores???I can't barely see somes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havok_SCO Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 This is an awesome idea! For some reason I think they should be Psychic type...IDK why. You should also make a variation of Skull Lair to help control the graveyard. Also since they are hard to summon and they do have names that refer to gravity maybe they should get a powerup from being on the field together? IDK just throwing something out there. Anyway, 9/10. Great Pics, Epic ideas, Just needs a little tweaking to be perfect if you ask me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Tiny update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Nice, the next 2 follow suit perfectly and have matching pics to boot. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 I made a typo on Melodium. Read it and your mind will hit a curb; you'll see it. I'll fix it tomorrow. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YU-GI-OH 3600 Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Sweet, 9.7/10.You know what would be really good if you could find a pic.A Fusion!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 ...tempting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YU-GI-OH 3600 Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Think of it, 2x the power of two of those monsters in one card with the most awsome pic(if you can find one).Wouldn't it be great!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 I fixed Melodium's text. I also added one more Dark Matter monster, possibly the final one, taking 3600's advice. I am surprised by how good it looks on a Fusion template. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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