Ghost Ryder Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 I have forgotten bits of my OCG so don't blame me too much of my OCG. It should be OK at least. My card - [align=center] Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 DARK monster you control to the Graveyard. When this card is on the field, all DARK monsters on the field gain 200 ATK except this card. When this card is removed from the field, all monsters that are affected by this card's effect is destroyed. If 2 DARK monsters you control were destroyed by this card's effect, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.[/align] I credit the image to my friend - Leo. I expect a rating of at average 7/10. Please also answer the poll if I'm still at least OK at card making. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 very good OCG but the effect is a bit simple,. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 I didn't expect that. I made the effect simple for reasons. I don't make such complicated effects anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 oh it is fine as it is. better than any of my cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Thank you for your comment Bassa2 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 I like it amazingly cool 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 FixThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 DARK monster you control. When this card is on the field, all DARK monsters on the field gain 200 ATK (except this card). When this card is removed from the field, all monsters that are affected by this card's effect is destroyed. If 2 DARK monsters you control were destroyed by this card's effect, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Good OCG, effect and pic 8.4/10 name is maybe not perfect but it fits the card very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 OCG correction is already up easy to summon, but the effect isn't OPed so it balances maybe drop the atk down to 2400ish and you're good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 I'm glad raganarok still rates my cards =)Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 OCG FIx from a Pro ;DThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 DARK monster you control to the Graveyard. When this card is on the field, all DARK monsters on the field gain 200 ATK except this card. When this card is removed from the field, all monsters that are affected by this card's effect are destroyed. If 2 DARK monsters you control were destroyed by this card's effect, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.[/Code] Not much but XD. Nice job. I am kinda doing this to. Starting off easy to get my skills back in order. Thanks for using my image. :D 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Hey! I was a pro too xDThanks ^_^At least I got it good after a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adogadog8 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 That's pretty good for someone who hasn't done anything here for 70 days (i mean that only in a positive way.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Thanks. And what's bad about the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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