Overlord Lucan Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 So it's been a decent amount of time since I've made more then the odd card or two, so I may of lost touch of whats OP and whats not, but without further excuses for my poor Card making skills, I present to you my card: [spoiler=Lore]If this card is Tribute Summoned, or Special Summoned from your Deck destroy this card and up to 2 other monsters on the field. During your next Standby Phase Special Summon all monsters destroyed by this card's effect to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position, all monsters Summoned by this effect, their DEF are decreased to 0, and increase their ATK by 500. Once per turn when this card is face-up on the field, select any amount of face-up monsters on the field, the selected monsters are treated as Zombie-Type monsters as long as this card is face-up on the field. When this card is destroyed, destroy all face-up Zombie-Type monsters on the field, and inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for each monster destroyed by this effect. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard it cannot be destroyed in battle. *Quick Note* When I say "If this card is Tribute summoned, or Special Summoned from your deck" I mean if you Special SUmmoned it from your deck, or if you Tribute Summoned it Normally (A.K.A. From your hand) the effect will activate. Any idea how to make the clearer/proper OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 one REALLY long effect you got there The last effect of burning is too much, I'd remove the effect all together or just reduce the damage per monster to 100 or something 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 I like it. Highly original, pic is good and not overused. I think your OCG is solid. 9.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 one REALLY long effect you got there The last effect of burning is too much' date=' I'd remove the effect all together or just reduce the damage per monster to 100 or something 8/10[/quote'] Perhaps If I changed it to 300, as then total damage would be 3000 if your opponent is a big enough of a Idiot to have 5 monsters face-up with this card in play. With 100 the best you can get is 1000, and I take that much with Lava Golem sitting on my head for one turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 300 is enough then. You going to make it that now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 *Edited* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 ok that's balanced out enough I'll raise my rate to 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 OCG/Grammar Fix:If this card is Tribute Summoned, or Special Summoned from your Deck destroy this card and up to (Don't use that part) 2 other monsters on the field. During your next Standby Phase Special Summon all monsters destroyed by this card's effect to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position, all monsters Summoned by this effect, their Defense Points (Rather you had DEF) are decreased to 0, and increase their Attack Points (Yet again, rather you use ATK) by 500. Once per turn when this card is face-up on the field, select any amount of face-up monsters on the field, the selected monsters are treated as Zombie-Type monsters as long as this card is face-up on the field. When this card is destroyed, destroy all face-up Zombie-Type monsters on the field, and inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for each monster destroyed by this effect. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard it cannot be destroyed in battle. (Should be here) Pic is ok and I like the name. Overall: 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 long effect and another dragon... when will people learnt ehre atre toooooo many dragons 5-6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 long effect and another dragon... when will people learnt ehre atre toooooo many dragons 5-6/10 First off it's a zombie, the Dragon picture was the only pic I could find that suited the theme. Also if you won't even read/review it's effect your rating is absolutly pointless @ Unorthadox thanks for the fix I will edit it in a minute, the only part I don't agree on is the "up to 2 monsters part" part. *Edited Card* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 long effect and another dragon... when will people learnt ehre atre toooooo many dragons 5-6/10 *sigh* What is wrong with too many dragons? Nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Aiku: *try to read the effect.* I don't get it. Too many errors. OCG: Multiples OCG errors. Corrected by Simplicity. Effect: The effects are very long and hard to keep up. It would be better if you short them. They rater effectives with the appropriate Deck. I might say balance, but I personnaly believe that these effects are turning the game winner to easily. (Need a drawback.) Image and Name: The image is good. The name... "rancid" is ponting out the card's main idea behind the image and effects. Overall: 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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