Spoiler Card for NEW SET! General McCloud [New Single] !!!

[kliffi]

Here's the first spoiler card of my newest set I've been working on. Can you guess the theme? :D Please note if there are OCG errors. I'm pretty sure the OCG is at least near perfect, but any tips would be nice. :D Enjoy the spoiler for my new series!

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]

This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters you control. When this card is Tribute Summoned or flipped face-up, Special Summon "Soldier Tokens" (EARTH/Warrior-Type/Level 3/ATK 1000/DEF 500) to all unoccupied Monster and Spell & Trap Card Zones on the field in Attack Position. These tokens cannot declare an attack and cannot be Tributed, except by this card's effect. Your opponent can discard 1 card from their hand to destroy 1 "Soldier Token" they control. Once per turn, you can put 1 Grenade Counter or 1 Gatling Counter on 1 "Soldier Token" on the field (Max. 3). Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can Tribute 1 "Soldier Token" with a Grenade Counter on it to randomly discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. Once per turn, you can move 1 Gatling Counter from a "Soldier Token" on your side of the field to another "Soldier Token" on your side of the field. These tokens gain 300 ATK for each Gatling Counter on them. A token with 3 Gatling Counters on it can attack. Every time a token with 3 Gatling Counters attacks, remove 1 Gatling Counter from it. When this card is destroyed by battle, all "Soldier Tokens" on the field are changed to Defense Position, and their Battle Positions cannot be changed.

 

 

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Kliffi out.

[ragnarok1945]

First sentence should be This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field

 

Interesting to give your opponent tokens as well

 

Fortunately it's still synchro summoning food for both sides, so it's ok for that. But I still wouldn't allow the tokens on your side to attack while your opponent's tokens can't

 

8/10

[kliffi]

Updated the effect; took your advice and added a Gatling Counter utility.

[ragnarok1945]

makes the card more balanced out, so I'll raise my rate to 8.5/10

[Max Darkness]

OCG Fix:

 

This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters you control. When this card is Tribute Summoned or flipped face-up, Special Summon "Soldier Tokens" (EARTH/Warrior-Type/Level 3/ATK 1000/DEF 500) to all unoccupied Monster and Spell & Trap Card Zones on the field in Attack Position. These tokens cannot declare an attack and cannot be Tributed, except by this card's effect. Your opponent can discard 1 card from their hand to destroy 1 "Soldier Token" they control. Once per turn, you can put 1 Grenade Counter or 1 Gatling Counter on 1 "Soldier Token" on the field (Max. 3). Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can Tribute 1 "Soldier Token" with a Grenade Counter on it to randomly discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. These tokens gain 300 ATK for each Gatling Counter on them. When this card is destroyed by battle, all "Soldier Tokens" on the field are changed to Defense Position, and their Battle Positions cannot be changed.

 

 

Interesting idea.

 

8/10

[kliffi]

Thanks... the idea of the card (why i give the opponent tokens as well) is up to your imagination... you could say he is sort of initiating a war between soldiers, or he summons your soldiers, and there are captives on your opponent's side. I wanted the card to simulate sort of a bigger assult during the Battle Phase because that will be the main idea of these cards: Battle Phase emphasis. Be looking for when the set is unveiled, or when a few more spoilers are revealed. This will be my 3rd set, and I hope you'll like it! Thanks again for critiques, it really helps.