ComingSoonNOT123 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 card i made for a contest, usually people would post a card in the RS before the contest, but hey i work the other way! This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, expect by returning 5 cards with "Cyber" in it's name from your Graveyard, to your Deck. During your Standby Phase you can reveal 1 Machine-Type monster in your hand, to have this card gain(s) the monster effect until the End Phase. Once per turn you can return 1 monster in your opponent Graveyard, to his/her Deck, to draw 1 card from your opponent's Deck. During your Main Phase you can discard 1 Monster Card to increase or decrease the Level of 1 face-up monster by 4 or less. When this card battles a monster, decrease the ATK of the card battling this monster by x100 equal to it's own Level. While this card remains face-up on the field, you cannot Normal Summon any monster(s). While this card remains in your Graveyard, decrease the Level of all monster(s) in your opponent hand by 2. rate, comment, whatever! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Espada_Tousen~ Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Awesome pic and I really like the effect, I have a affinity for cards with effect on levels. 10/10 You should surely do great in any contest you enter this card in :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Personally, I think the name is overcomplicated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havok_SCO Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 .........I would never use this card.2/10-Name is to long-Pic is bland and boring-Effect is RIDIC and doesn't make sense. Made my head hurt just trying to make sense of it. How to make it better:-Shorten the name and make it more original. -Shorten the effect. Don't give it a bunch of small effects. Just give it one effect that really helps out the Cyber Dragon family.-Find a better pic....Nough said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 boring effect, with that many effect it makes it WAY too different from the rest of the Cyber Dragons I'd reduce the number of effects to just 2 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 I doubt the original premise for the Cyber Dragon monsters was to OTK people. Players just found and abused ways to do that. I don't mean to be rude when I say this, but I really don't think you have any clue what you're talking about much of the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havok_SCO Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Whats not to understand..... Lets see: "Once per turn you can return 1 monster in your opponent Graveyard, to his/her Deck, to draw 1 card from your opponent's Deck"-What sense does it make to draw a card from your opponent's deck? That effect alone is OP'd "During your Standby Phase you can reveal 1 Machine-Type monster in your hand, to have this card gain(s) the monster effect until the End Phase."-You want to add another effect onto this beast when he already has 6 other effects? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Your point? Konami doesn't have a perfect R&D team that designs it's cards, so of course powerhouse effects are gonna be abused when a method to do so is found that the design crew didn't expect to be exploited. But that's ok, we have banlists to fix that. "Once per turn you can return 1 monster in your opponent Graveyard' date=' to his/her Deck, to draw 1 card from your opponent's Deck"-What sense does it make to draw a card from your opponent's deck? That effect alone is OP'd[/quote']I don't see how this is OPed, or even useful for that matter. You have no idea what you're gonna draw and if your opponent's deck is different enough from yours, you'd probably draw something useless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Are you saying part of your logic for giving it so many effects is because it's a machine? Because I don't understand the logic there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havok_SCO Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 I didn't mean Overpowered. I'm tired and I couldn't think of a good word. I meant dumb really. I know it would be a dead draw most of the time. But it would give you Grave Control and in some decks that is deadly. Like Dark decks. Point is this card has to many effects, its name is to long, and its pic is bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmallieBigs Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Archtype support little, archtype creator zero, okay 1 way tooooooooo many effects name is weird, pic is recolor and of course the name is too long so I give this a 4/10 just for OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sub-Zero999 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 beginning of effect-WORST CARD EVER i dont even know if there are five different cybers and why tribute 5 really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havok_SCO Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Yup that would be nice. IDC if you make it a long winded effect like Yubel or something like that. But giving a card over 5 effects is ridic. I honestly can't think of any that has over 3 effects and even then i couldn't name any that even have 3. And I'm just wondering, do you like to get OTK in one turn or something? The cyber dragon OTK doesn't bother me since Cyber Dragon was limited but I don't believe cards should be made in hopes of making OTK easier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grassfoot Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 VERY GOOD10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sub-Zero999 Posted April 23, 2010 Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 beginning of effect-WORST CARD EVER i dont even know if there are five different cybers and why tribute 5 really i take about 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phœnīcius Infīnius VII Posted April 23, 2010 Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 5/10 all I have to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted April 23, 2010 Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 What you've done here is got confused between a Dark Counterpart and a seperate support card and somewhere along the line merged the two. The Dark Counterpart is shown in the name, picture and the Graveyard manipulations of the effect. The Machine support is there in the remainder of the effect. You have also oddly managed to squeeze in some Synchro support for some reason. Put bluntly, make up your mind. Is this "Dark Cyber Dragon" or a Machine support card? If it is the former, change the ATK and DEF to the same as "Cyber Dragon", give it summoning conditions similar to the other Dark Counterparts, ie having a certain number of DARK monsters in the Graveyard and an effect that focusses on changing your Graveyard to empower you. For example, removing a DARK monster in your Graveyard to draw 1 card, or allowing you to Special Summon a "Cyber" monster from your hand. If it is the latter, remove the references to the Cybers and change the name and image; making it an unrelated generic Machine/Synchro support card. 4/10 for OCG errors and a frankly overcomplex effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted April 23, 2010 Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 Personally, the pic is extremely bland. I mean it is just a black version of Cyber Dragon. That's very unoriginal. Look at JazinKay or Deviant art for some pics. Name is well, to me it is wierd. Shorter name plox. Effect is extremly long. I wouldnt put this card in my deck just cause the effect is to long. 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sub-Zero999 Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 how do people get that poster looking thing in there sig.still about 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 That name is confusing, I mean it's like, "Hey, I got a new card 5 minutes before this duel, and this is my first time playing it. I had no time to see the card for anything other than the effect, but oh well, here goes. I return these five "Cyber" monsters (name them for me please) from my Graveyard to my Deck to Special Summon - OK, who named it this!?" Change the name, the effect is long and confusing. As Max Darkness put it, is this a Dark counterpart of "Cyber Dragon", or is this something else? I do wonder why this thread got necrobumped yesterday, but oh well. Could do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Death Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 Let me get this straight, you've had this forum up for 5 months?????? That's a lot of persistance!!!! All n' All great card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 "I'm going to Summon Dark Cyber Level Grinder Dragon in Attack Position"too much work XDreally...it's like a black cyber dragon... then name it simply like "Black Cyber Dragon" or "Dark Cyber Dragon"sori sir ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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