cdjelamade Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 my first card on this site plz dont rip it to shreds. im looking for some positive criticism thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazert05 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Attack = ATKdeck = DeckTrap = Trap CardSpell = Spell Cardcare = Carddragon monster = Dragon-Type monstergraveyard = Graveyard Ya...that's all I can find right now. UPed. (BTW, if you don't know what that means, it means Under Powered) a -1 that sends it to the bottom of your deck, where as it can be better placed in the grave with revival cards. Needs better picture. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 OCG errors already pointed out too bland of an effect, and it's UPed, there are other cards that can do this already, so give it another effect 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cdjelamade Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 ammended my hero by: fixing grammatical and capitalization errorsgave more atk 2300 -> 2500and added a different effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 it's still just 1 effect though, and therefore is still too bland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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